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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

Are you updating this on Sunday? 😳😳 cause I have to unres šŸ˜†

yes and you did... i am about to start replying šŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Soju.

yes and you did... i am about to start replying šŸ˜†

I asked this last night naa 🤣

okay, ā¤ļø
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Posted: 8 years ago
take your time 🤣🤣😭


I had to unres,cause when I don't have my comment on your update seems like something is incomplete😭😭😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

<3 you...

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Love ā¤ļø
I absolutely love the update, even it is short... you really know where you should stop to increase the intensity and suspense šŸ˜†
that is my forte I really don't know how to explain this, but Dimensions is very close to my heart... :) I'm always crying too much reading it... šŸ˜† 😭 I know the writer helps in that too. šŸ˜‰ i need cable ties Every update breaks my heart into pieces and leaves me disappearing into a puddle of tears... 🄺awww... fevicol.. i should put warning for Tissues and fevicol... Even if you warn me before that this is an emotional update, I will not stop crying. šŸ˜† You don't even know what you do to me, okay?
And I hope that note doesn't include me baby 😳 I am here for you always and forever ā¤ļø I will always have enough patience, even if I'm nakhre type šŸ¤” 🤣 You know it naa... 😳 šŸ¤— So there's no need to remind me... I will always love your stories... sparks, sparks ā¤ļø 😳 warewolf... *drum rolls*
Yeah yeah... I already read the OS like 5-6 times, you should take a look there too. šŸ˜† i will after i update here... once i do as promised i will go there 😳😳😳 normally i dont check thecomments from OS but i will go... It's just fabulous and my review on it looks like I'm hyperventilating but nvm 🤣 You love moi anyway 😳 ā˜ŗļø
See, I'm trying to unres here today before you update it even if I'm having a big headache and I'm hungry. šŸ˜† Got it?? I'm Hungry!!! šŸ˜† šŸ˜” then you need to eat maggie 🄺But you mean too much for me... ā˜ŗļø ā¤ļø
Waise, I'm seriously thinking my life is a mess. But without you it is even more than that... </3 IDK, you are everything. One can hardly resist not loving you. I'm not talking about liking, but directly about loving... liking isn't an option here. šŸ˜† So I can't thank you enough for being my inspiration in every damn field, love ā¤ļø Blessed... šŸ¤— i still a want an OS written by you... waiting waiting 😳
ā˜ŗļø 😳 You are just mine, my personal FBI agent i think we cleared out on this šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


Okiesss, so coming to the update finally after assuring you spend like 10 minutes to read and reply to the intro (if you even do that), boring you to the core, here I am to talk about the update. 😳 I am gonna keep it quite short, you keep you comment on update always short and love letter long a(i) love(s) it šŸ˜† the most important thing is I should come back to reality šŸ¤” because the update got me too hooked, leading me to other... (yes, you got it right)... Dimensions. šŸ˜† See, I always write like 5-6 lines when I'm coming to the update without actually talking about the update šŸ˜†, but it's just because I love love love you 😳 lala love you ā¤ļø lala love
And Imma show it, prove it, fight for it and any inspirational love quote would also work here šŸ˜† But I'm too sleepy to add it... you already know enough, my baby šŸ˜† 😳
I don't know if you really like reading my bakwas comments, just tell me if I should just stick to the update šŸ¤— but I love praising my love 😭 I don't even know if this is what is really motivating you, but (Ai) miss(es) you... so you šŸ˜†

I always enjoy reading your stories... You have a gift for portraying your characters in the way possible This one is also fabulous and thought-provoking 😳 Your attitude is so clear, even in your stories through your characters, I swear šŸ˜† Too good for words... ā˜ŗļø come hereee ā˜ŗļø šŸ¤— It takes a very special person to write such gorgeousness, you're the one baby ā¤ļø awww thankin pankie so very munchie šŸ¤—
Guess what, I'm loving the way you started the update... šŸ˜† Karan remains the common friend of Geet and Maan. In such situations, I hardly see such things happening so I'm so happy reading that 😳 If it was a daily show or something like that, I bet that wouldn't happen šŸ˜† thats why its fiction baby He would have turned into an arrogant negative a**, haunting both of them till death 🤣 But your stories are always different and something else, hmmm ā¤ļø I must say Karan's life must be so difficult, having to choose between them both In that moment, cause he had to choose, I guess he reacted in the best way possible by staying by her side. She was and she is still weak, ill and needs some protective wings around her. He still respects Maan a lot, given the fact that he wanted to tell him everything after getting to know Geet's situation is becoming worse. He seems a very sensible person, who thought about her the most before deciding to tell that to Maan 😳 Geet blackmailing him even in such state... šŸ˜† Yeh sherni hai sacchi... correction she is a warrior šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰ still going strong 😳 Girls are like that 🤣 Hahah, but this part was perfect like my baby... 😳

It's so heartbreaking to know that it never got cured and Geet is fighting every single day for her life... 🄺 How does she do that? 😳 The strength she has is commendable... ā¤ļø I guess while going through all kinds of treatment her condition became worst I agree this must have made her vulnerable... and it is so sad to know both Karan and Aman tried to talk some sense into her but she's very ziddi Well, they can't force her into something she doesn't want or believe is fighting for, unfortunately... 😭
And awww, Karan and Kareena's equation with Geet seems so overwhelming 😳 Glad to know she understands Geet needs help and care in these hard times ā¤ļø Again, something else from daily soaps... šŸ˜† forget soaps this washing powder nirma 🤣 Kareena would have turned into a vamp, yelling for her rights and stuff like that without even knowing what kind of bonding Karan and Geet have 🤣 Moi loves the way you handle your stories baby... ā˜ŗļø that is why i showed her as a doctor naa šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
Their attitude towards Geet is so cute and touching, I'm completely loving it 😳 Love how they took care of her together and always kept her close to them. Geet badly needs that after all those break downs and vanished hope. All these make the story even better... you really know what to do, baby šŸ˜† ā¤ļø Experience says it all... and loads of talent šŸ¤— Lala ā¤ļø

Very good reasons and high quality explanation right here šŸ˜† I would have never managed to pull this masterpiece off... but you are youuu ā˜ŗļø Loving the inner turmoil of Karan in the start od the situation, his will to tell everything to Maan... a very realistic approach. ā¤ļø Oh Gizzz, I'm really bad at words but you know me enough to understan what I wanna say šŸ˜† Doctor Kareena standing up for Geet and her wishes was lovely 😳 She was right about forcing the patient against her own choice, this would have made Geet feel even worse. and alone too... again But all these secrets are having their own consequences... 😭 Karan and Kareena's story is so nice, reminds me of DMG šŸ˜† Even in such situations Kareena stood by Geet's side, I am really impressed... 😳 something different again ā¤ļø And what the, totally love the fact that the boys lost in front of girls 🤣 What to do? You just can't defeat the ladies, no matter what 🤣 This is getting better and better and you are a master in this... my master ā˜ŗļø ā¤ļø shades feelingšŸ˜†šŸ˜† ahaan... miss you 😭 but you don't miss me, isiliye you're not paying your Ai baby some visits even if you know you'll get busy 😭🄺🄺 waiting and waiting, my heart is broken šŸ’”šŸ˜³ for insta you need to wait... i put my old memory card in new and it got corrupted i will get it back on tuesday 😭
Poor Geet wanted to do something on their wedding day even in such state :o well that's a quite strong girl... šŸ˜† love Aman scolding her for that... 😳 you go man 🤣 but poor Geet is affected by that 😭 Maan came with Sameera... ufff main kya bolu ab šŸ¤” 🤣 I don't why but it's hard to accept that from Maan... maybe because Geet's bonding with Karan is quite different, not the usual love story šŸ˜† I mean they are more like friends. but Maan dont know YET So Maan... you better stay away from that lady 😳 But I guess he is right somehow. He doesn't know Geet's situation and 5 years are quite enough for someone to move on in life... I guess Ai is just biased towards Maaneet šŸ˜† I know I'm gonna have my heart broken later... 🄺 What the 😔

Geet meeting Maan part is just uhmmm and awww ā¤ļø I mean the way you made her stand there breathing in and out, that atmosphere... you settled it in my mind and heart too And I'm imagining everything... šŸ˜† Maan cannot help but be full of sarcasm... of course he doesn't know about her state... yet...
I am loving the lines, you truly nailed everything baby ā˜ŗļø Geet's replies are also so good 🤣 This part is hell entertaining I swear... ā¤ļø I can feel your touch in every word they say... dammit 🤣 ā¤ļø
What I loved a lot is Geet mesmerized by him just like always. Some things never change, even after years ;) And both of them fighting in their own way, trying to prove the other is wrong, damn addictive... please wake me up now not now may be when September ends 🤣 before I'm getting too excited šŸ¤” Maan is hurting Geet by telling her about his choice and gf... 🄺 Tbh, she is also hurting him... he is there for her wedding šŸ˜† She may not show it much, but she is so very much affected by him words ā¤ļø You made their 'milan' (well, couldn't think about another word :))) ) so poignant and beautifully added your own touch to it, which is my favorite Muaaahh ā¤ļø

But what the... 🄺 🄺 Eks, I know this was supposed to happen since she's Maan's gf but dammit 😔 I am so pissed off, calm me down 🤣 Woh bhi with passion... 🄺 Geet must be feeling awful right now. Maan is gonna feel so bad after knowing about Geet's state. And then I'll feel bad for him too... Geet's reaction is beautifully depicted here... 😭 😭 Omg, the build-up here is amazinggg! ā¤ļø I can feel the suspense... the dynamics... everything From her starting feeling low to her break down and fall, followed by Maan's concern and Aman taking her in him arms, everything went so smooth like Soju. šŸ˜† Soju the best liquor ever Love me for this! always
Maan's possessive side... hello, man, you have a damn girlfriend! Why the fck do you yell at everyone for Geet?? 😳 šŸ˜† I'm loving it baby... it's like I'm feeling your possessive side, your words ā˜ŗļø [8->{ driving me crazy all over again... šŸ˜†
What I also loved here is Aman being affected by Maan's possessive side and shades like, yo man, you are really crazy! šŸ˜† 🤣 So he decided he should not spend more time arguing with Maan, it's useless 🤣 You cannot stop MSK when he goes gaga about his Geet 😳 😳
The hospital part description is effin' amazing... like so realistic :o Lab does wonders... šŸ˜† experience speaking up, right? šŸ˜† Aww you included that word 😔 🤣 U so sMexily cuteee... 😳 ā˜ŗļø
Another beautiful part is Maan thinking about his Desi ā¤ļø I love how you kept this word... it has a lot of meaning in their story indeed 😳

As usual Karan gets scolded by the doctor for Geet's state. I kinda feel bad for this poor man But I understand this was a very important convo for the revelation and cliffhanger 😳 ā¤ļø Everyone's concern for Geet, even the doctor's one, is overwhelming... seems she has an important place in everyone's heart Good delivery of the dialogues by the characters, that too very much in character šŸ˜‰ I am feeling a bit michmichi right now... why??? 😳
Your writing is so realistic... even Maan coming closer to hear everything is realistic... this was outstand and beautiful baby and oh-Im-so-in-love-with-you ā¤ļø
Everyone's reactions... from Aman to Karan to Maan... were heartbreaking 😭 Wonderful closure for the update, where he listens that word and finally finds out about everything ā¤ļø You made me cry 😭 😭 😭 Can't wait for the next update... thank you so much for the comment

I wish I can keep my promise when I say I'm gonna keep my comment short. But I just can't with you... 😳 and if you let me, I can keep writing whole day about you šŸ˜† But given the fact that you have a hectic and busy life, I really care about your free time 😳 ā¤ļø this was so heart touching šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†So hope my comment is not too much for you, my love... šŸ˜† But I (again wrote "ai" šŸ˜†) loved the update and I enjoy this roller coaster ride with you baby šŸ˜‰ ā¤ļø Keep up the awesome work, but focus on what matters to you 😳 ā¤ļø šŸ¤— Keep being strong so Ai can also be strong... šŸ˜† 😳 I love you to no end... :| Love you so much ā¤ļø
PS: I'm not ending this in cap letters, because everytime I do that you know the meaning of mine but you never tell me the meaning of yours, even if I ask you. šŸ˜† And I'm gonna annoy you and be your personal isa-dorrai (???) forever... 😳 šŸ˜Ž šŸ˜†

Issa-ddorai... <3 thanks for the wonderful comment baby šŸ¤—
Edited by Soju. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

glad finally maan know the truth ..
her condition so bad...
nice update

thnks fr d comment
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da marvelous sad update! finally they meet! Karan is marrying Kareena! Maan came with Sam! he talks 2 Geet n introduces Sam! Geet sees Maan n Sam kiss! she faints! Aman comes 2 find her! Aman surprised seeing a possessive Maan! Maan goes the hospital! Aman shouts Karan! Maan overhears that Geet has cancer! update soon

thnks fr d comment
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

NYC update dear

Loved it!!
So, as guessed Karan was getting married to someone else
Karan was getting married to Dr. Kareena and they decided to tie knot as it was geet's wish and stubborn demand
Maaneet meet but witnessing Maan kissing Sameera broke Geet apart
Geet's health started to detroit that she was hospitalized yet again
Maan couldnt fathom anything taking place in there
But Karan and Aman's words broke the hidden curtains abt geet came to light
Maan came to know abt geet's truth
😊

yes your guess was right...finally he knows šŸ˜† thanks for the comment
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

thanks 😳😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

maan...he came to show geet he has moved on

but geet ..she couldnt survive the shock
n maan came to know the truth
with aman n karans talks
very emotional part

thanks for the comment
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

oh my..karan is marrying his love to full fill gees wish..un anger maan brought Sameera to show geet that he have move on..he MU thinking geet getting married to Karan..in the process he kiss sam which gave more pain to geet..finally the truth is Out..wondering what maan going to do..

thanks for the comment... Maan will be s sweet heart 😳

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