FS: Dimensions~ EPILOGUE and NOTE @65 on 12-02-2017 ~~COMPLETED~~

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.
Unres'ed before the new update, so proud of me, myself and I(Ai) ☺️

glad 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Soju.
glad 😆

glad, not proud 😭😭

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 8 years ago

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xAishuuux

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Posted: 8 years ago

#264

Proud to be yours🤣

later edit: pity you, you got an awful stalker naa😭😭

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Me*showsstalkervideo*

me: deffo not me...

S: its u
S:❤️

😆

This update is so so long can't stop blushing or hiding my excitement baby ☺️
The tissue box in the beginning cracked me up 🤣 Like I could already feel that was surely for me, you listened to my advice 😆 I'm sure others must need it too after reading this update 😳 But I need it more 😳 ❤️ I am so so emotional 😆 Upar se it is purple and pink 😆 muaaah ☺️ ❤️
Your gifts are always fascinating 😳 Am Ai just drooling over a tissue box? 🤣 😆 Oh Lord, bless me 🤣
Okay, so I know the things happened in the previous update and I'm sure this one is gonna be hella emotional for the night is dark and full of terrors 😆 But I know you are gonna make it brilliant by adding your own style/ touch like always... 😳 Hmmm I prefer your touch omly for me tho 😉 😆 I don't know, I feel like reading your stories gives me so much joy I can't even express it properly 😆 Like I need my daily dose of you and us ❤️ And I am getting it even if you're not available, understood? 😉 😆 Okies so I should come back to the update before I make my love letter too long... 😳 ❤️ Well, even if I stop writing about this you know how much I love you ❤️

Now coming to the update , let me tell you how much you made me cry, like I can't even properly see through my teary eyes... so it is kinda difficult for me to join some inner forces in order to comment about this outstading 😭 This is so not fair 😭 😭 It is your longest update here and I think it is also the best one ❤️ Well, waiting for the next one to see if I'm right 😆 But so far this is the best thing ever ❤️ ❤️ You have this power to make me feel so good even if the update was damn emotional 😆 I am telling you, you are really special and... you make me try to be a better person ❤️ And when you find such people in your life keep them close to you, they are real gems. ❤️
While reading this update I was going through so many different emotions, impatient to find out what happens next and how they will manage to overcome all these obtacles in their life I'm saying life and not lives because in your stories I am always identifying them as a single soul, living the same life ❤️ And to be honest, even if they were away from each other I still feel their life is the same because they were united by the same pain, same dreams, longing to have each other, dreaming about each other, fighting for each other, living in silence for each other Gosh, this silence is the worst! It may give you peace sometimes when you want to feel alone but when you need someone and the only thing you can do is accepting their silence it HURTS! Just so much you feel like you are suffocating, the unspoken words are the one we usually regret the most not saying 'em when needed 😭 And Maan and Geet were going through the same situation... When you spend every day of your life with the person you love and suddenly one decides to disappear from your life you just can't express the pain... poor them 🥺 Watching them walk away and you can't do anything to bring them back. And five years are too much What I love is that people do move on with time but here... here it is so different ❤️ After spending five years away from each other they are still missing each other, longing for each other, loving each other, caring for each other and so on ❤️ It just shows how true love never dies even with time passing by... You can't stop but you can make memories last forever...

Oh Gizzz wrote so much and didn't even properly started discussing the scenes individually 😆 Please forgive my excitement, my love 🤗 But you know me too well 🤣 And I'll totally understand you if you won't read this damn comment as it is too much 😆 Well, at least I'll try analysing less so you won't have my sheets all over your bed 😉 Oh, this sounds so ☺️ actually... 🤣
Baby I lala love you 🤗 ❤️ I really needed this!!! Not because I'm a sucker for pain or emotional stories but because your writing heals me 😳 So whenever you post something now I'm always there to read it 😆 I need more and more... Well, I should really start talking about the scenes because they got me so hooked ❤️
As we know, the news about Geet having cancer reached Maan's ears and he feels so much right now... pain, anger, disappointment, insecurities, he feels useless actually, because they didn't even told him about this, it just happened to be close to them and hear their talks 😭 I can totally understand what he feels right now 🥺 When you feel you're not needed there, that others don't even feel like telling you such an important thing :'( but little does he know Geet went through the same pain all these years and she was helpless 🥺 Everyone's reactions, from Maan to Karan were just so on point, Oh Gosh!! ❤️ You just nailed everything and here I am in awe with you I am feeling bad for Karan in those moments Poor him, he just listened to Geet's wish because he knew going against her wish would make her feel even ore vulnerable 🥺 Maan's reactions speak a looot about his feelings! I thing there were so many unsaid thoughts all these years so now he felt like he could relieved I just loved the realistic touch of all these scenes ❤️ through Maan's instant reactions. And Karan understanding him was even more touching... as he felt he would have reacted the same way if it was in his shoes. And you just melt my heart the moment Maan's legs stopped listening to him and he felt so weak, so lost... It was something that made him feel weak but also preparing him to face the cruel reality Maan threatening Karan, showing his care for Geet, going crazy... just outstanding, baby! Ufff how much I enjoy reading you 😳 ❤️ So true. The truth was hard to digest and he felt it in every lil' part of his body. Oh man, if you feel like that just imagine your Desi girl and what she went through all this time, not even having you close to her But he was right to think the opposite as she made him feel unwanted. There are so many reasons for that tho 🥺

Karan is just so sweet, I love how you made Geet have the support of such amazing friends. ❤️ Still they couldn't replace Maan but they were always supporting her and taking care of her like she was their little sis 😳 So adorable, the dynamics of every relationship are perfectly depicted here, my love Karan hesitating to tell him everything and Maan's poignant gaze added to the intensity of the scenes <3 Moi loves every line you wrote in this... ☺️ I still can't believe I am reading this again and again 😆 You should try too... gives goosebumps 😳
When he found out and started connecting the dots was simply brilliant. He realised he wasn't actually the reason of their separation. He felt the possibility of another chance, a new chance to redefine their love story I know in that moment he must have felt only her pain and stuff and I taking this too far but my artist-like soul tells me to add it in my comment even if I may not make sense for you 😆 But you know how to handle me, baby! ;)
I love how Karan told him that she needs him so he should go and stay with her ❤️ But seriously... the way you choose every line for the characters is just perfect :o ❤️ It strikes me like damn, so much! Maan's outburst when he says about the fact that Karan didn't think Geet needs him all these years was the cherry on the cake. Stop using your magic wand, don't you dare leave such impact ☺️ 😳 I am telling you 😎 😆
Everyone is right in their own way. 😆 Situations are what make us helpless and we have to react according to what's best for us. Though Geet reacted as if it was the best for Maan... in a way, yeah that was right for him but that pain of being away from her hurted him like no other 😳 So trying to get rid of his pain, she actually has awaken another one which I bet was even harder. Not to say the regret he mist be feeling now for not being able to help her all these years 😳 But Geet loves him more than she loves herself ❤️ She knew she'll be lost without him but she wanted him happy. Ummm, so many mixed feelings here 😆

The moment he entered her room and watched her lifeless on the bed was so poignant ❤️ Gives so many feels 😭 He noticed she tried hard to cover her outside pain, even if it is nothing compared to her inner one. I guess time may heal this and his presence in her life may bring her back to life... ❤️ I see there's already an improvement in her reports after Maan returned 😳 The light touch of his hand over her pale skin was too much to handle. ❤️ The way he started caressing her skin was overwhelming and I had this sad smiley on my face reading this part... He couldn't stop and even cried watching her in this state. I hope he brings her back to life and the coldness he felt while caressing her skin goes away with time... Beautiful, so beautiful... so much love 🤗 ❤️
Emotionally so very much attached to the part when he says he'll cure her, he'll heal her. ❤️ He wants to forget all these past 5 years when he was nowhere near her, taking care of her or even guarding her. But he is glad she had her own guardian angels :) His efforts on trying to get the best doctor for her made him discover that her friends already searched for the best one and he felt relieved ❤️ So good he is now understanding them a bit more... 😳 😳
Your "wounded lion" part was fantabulous ❤️ Couldn't get a better definition of Maan right now... :) You know, even love is a lioness 😆 A young lioness ready to attack. She moves faster than you can think and bites your face. 🤣 She makes sure you are not prepared for that. She's too clever, I swear. And she can be tamed only when she gets the love back ;) Ugh, I should stop remaking the jungle book now! 😆
Your details are so delicious ☺️ 😆 Seriously when I think the story can't get even better you need to prove me wrong! And I'm loving it

Also, loving Maan's efforts in making Geet tell her parents everything. He knows it the best the feeling of not knowing something so important for so many years. Loving his concern ❤️ Isn't it amazing how Maan made Geet change her mind and realise she's being wrong trying to hide the cruel truth anymore from her parents? You have your way with words and makes me so happy, baby 🤗
The fact that he wants to redeem himself was so touching ❤️ I love this part so much in stories, I bet you love it too 😆 😳 Everything from Kareena's scene to Get finally recovering and watching Maan near here were awesome-sauce ❤️ Oh Gosh 😆 Maaneet in the hospital last part was so very emotional and absolutely loved it baby 😳 ❤️ Like I already said, it takes someone really special to write the way you do... I hope I'm getting you now cause I wanna cu-cu-cuddle 🤗 ☺️ because you are so sexily adorbubbles 😆 😳
Seriously, Geet's parents k reaction was such a realistic approach. ❤️ Especially her father's words that managed to reach my heart completely... ❤️
The cherry on the top with lots of vanilla ice cream 😆 was that last part with that fab song ❤️ I love it so so much... Both of them are finding their own haven in each other's arms... ufff ❤️

On the whole, before I bore you to the core, which I know I did 😆 Trust me, I skipped talking about so many parts just because it was getting too long 🤣 Sorry, but you said you want long comments! 😆😉 Let me end this by saying that I not only appreciate your work but love it to the core 😳 🤗 ❤️ And you are a real inspiration, especially for your clumsy and lost baby. 😆 Never forget that okay? 😳 Thank you so much for everything haan 🤗 And I wish someday my comments won't sound so boring like they do now 😳 And I also wish I could find different words to describe you as I'm running out of them when I'm talking about you 😆 😳
Keep up the brilliant work you do, I know you put all that love in every update... 🤗 I can feel that. ❤️
Love you so so so so so so so so so so ... [...] much baby 😳 🤗 ❤️ lala love

Edited by Aishuuu. - 8 years ago