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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sagorika93

congrtz for the new story
first part was nice ..
maan was emotionally blackmailed by dadi ':p
and geet was fooled by those people ..
interesting...!!!



Originally posted by: sagorika93

part 2
superb update ...
I like this mature maan ..who thinks first and then react on everything ...
maan attracted towards geet ..and feels protective for her .
hate that akshat

hope maan find out the truth ..


thnks dear fr d comment
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sophiexx

Part 2

Falling in love with this Maan, already impressed by his persona 😳
The fact that his gving Geet the benefit of the doubt regardless of what it says on paper is commendable. But i love like love Maan falling for Geet, love at first sight. Adi's already friends with Geet, and did i sense a bit of jealousy from Maan's side when Adi was like Geet and him were chatting. Blimey already his got it bad 😆

As far as that Akshat goes, well his just plummeting to the ground before even realising, i hope he gets punished for taking advantage of someone's innocence. Maybe Geet should also wisen up, she shouldnt let people walk over her or atleast fool her like that. But Maan's there now so i suppose everything is ok 😆

thank you for a great part 😃

thnks fr d comment i am also working on the plot given by you... i hope you will like it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyfriends007

awesome update

loved this maan more

hope maan finds the truth about geet soon and punish tht guy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Part 2, nice update. Maan and Adi reached MG branch of KC. Adi introduced himself as another employee and MSK introduced himself as Maanav Singh Rajput and as head of branch. Akshat tried to butter up Maan but he scolded him and asked for previous records. Akshat asked Geet to bring records and he gave them to Maan after wo hours. Maan is disappointed to see Geet's signatures on all bills/ He asked his detective to collect info about her.

Geet and Adi are sharing same cabin and become friends.


Originally posted by: kabslocks

Awesome concept. One of KC branch is running in loss and MSK wants to shut that branch. But Dadima does not want this as it was first branch that Maan's Dadaji started. So she is emotionally attached to it. Maan accepted to give another chance to the branch. But he decided to go there as an employee and look for the situation. He asked Adi to make arrangements for it. There in the branch Geet handa is working with dedication. Akshat Gupta another employ is making Geet do all illegal works on her name as she is a free lancer and can not say no for any work.

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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
NOTE:- sorry this time no counting is done... sending pm to those who commented for the last chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
why geet not saying any thing😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi
nice update
akshat too much ..happy that maan removed him ..geet is alone ..no one there to help her ..she has sick mother thatswhy she was bearing all ..

thanks for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3 was just awesome..👏
loved that punch on Akshat..
but why Geet does whatever Akshat says😕
I thought it would be some personal problem but now it doesnt feels that way

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Posted: 9 years ago
Mindblowinggg update dear...
sooo Geet also fallen in love with Maan...
Finally Maan fired that idiot...
how dare he slapped Geet...
but thank god Maan came on time and punch him...
totally enjoyed it...
Thanksss 4 pm dear...
update soon...

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