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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="7" color="#ff0000">Prologue</font>

<font size="5" color="#0000ff">she was a girl who thought she could never love...</font>

<font size="5" color="#0000ff">he was a guy who did not want to get married...</font>

<font size="5" color="#0000ff">but when the one fell for another ...</font>

<font size="5" color="#0000ff">no past thoughts mattered...</font>

<font size="5" color="#0000ff">when god intervens in the life of his beloved children nothing can go wrong...</font>

<font size="5" color="#0000ff">so join this sweet journey MAAN and GEET</font>







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Index
part 1...page 1
part 2...page 5
part 3...page 8
part 4...page 10
part 5...page 12
part 6...page 14
part 7...page 17
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PART 1

She was a girl all fun, outgoing, fearless, loving, beautiful, amazing, helpful, kind hearted, good soul.

She was girl alone, fighter, scared, with no ability to love(according to her mind),but her heart was secretly wishing for one...the true soul mate, prince charming ,her knight with the shining armour. But she did not have in her to bare her soul, her heart for someone with the risk of getting hurt again. Well teenage love leaves such an impression of love on everyone. Some rejoice it, others so new to the feeling, no one to share with take the blow hard. With age, with time she realized she was more in love with the idea of falling in love with someone. It was fashion, trend; it was something maximum of her friends were doing and here she was a normal, sweet, traditional yet trying to break the shell kind of girl. Teenage love trials, one side crushes was all that she did keep in the darkest corners of her heart. Grown up in a middle class family with parents that were quite protective, although loving and caring, but keeping kids in a certain limit is where she grew up. Well growing up with them was not easy with her outgoing mindset, her style of thinking, she became the fighter, got through her campus selections; Fought with her parents, moved to a new city, living all her dreams. This was her only one time chance to fulfil her dreams, make them reality. She learned new things; she fought, she fell, she stood up. She did not break only trying to tell people that her decisions were not wrong. She stood like a wall all ready to face the outcomes of her decisions. She was fine. She was happy. She was contended. She explored new places, took new adventures in her holidays satisfying her hunger for travel. With everything going about right in her life and her parents pestering her down for marriage, and she was avoiding it like a plague as always; she was scared, she was not ready for love. She did not know how would she recover if, she got hurt. If a stupid infatuation could last so long for her, how would she deal with the hurt that true love would bring.

But alas, that was what she thought, but god had better plans. She was a firm believer of god and god never disappoints his children. Well , now was the it month of the year for her. "her travelling month". She saved all her holidays of the year and spend them in a go for travelling. But this year it was different. Her friend was pregnant. She worked for discovery and was shooting for a video film on the army men. Her husband did not want her to travel. So being the sweet acquitance friend Geet was, she did not mind it doing for her friend and took up the adventure.

Lives of other people always intrigued geet. She was always a sit alone, comfortable and read a book kind of person in her leisure time. She loved to do everything that was cool according to her; well she is different. "Thats best to describe her...different".



NEXT PART would be posted depending upon the response...atleast 40 likes and 2 pages of comment...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on the SS! interesting prologue! superb update! well written! Geet doesn't want 2 get married! she was in love n gt hurt! bt is waiting 4 her Prince Charming! Geet is independent! she doesn't want 2 go home as her parents want her 2 get married! she has fulfilled her dreams! she agrees 2 shoot the video of army men 4 her friend! update soon! pls post cs! thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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concept is really interesting ...
awesome start ...loved ur writing styl ...
geet agreed to help her pregnant friend ...
geet is like a typical girl ...who does not want to gt married ...but secretly wishing for special someone ...
would love to read more ...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely start liked geet simple sweet full of life wants someone special in her life plz cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely start
Cute geet

Living her life by her owm rules


Name ...
Milan ... Pyaar ka ...

bandhan pyaar ka ..

Ya mere sapney


Agar tumhe teek lage to

Do pm me dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely start. Geet is afraid to love for fear of being hurt. Waiting to see where her adventures land her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Grt start .will b interesting to see how destiny will bring two different. Souls with same thought together.continue. Soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Concept is intresting. N the style of the story u r writing is good n giving us to read more. Geet character is diff n loved it. Waiting for next. Please add ne in PM list.

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