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kamna

@kamnagupta7

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Congrats for the new story
Interesting prologue
Eagerly waiting to read it

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Congrats for the new story

Nice prologue

How will geet feel knowing about maan ...

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Lovely prologue. Maan is mentally a kid and Geet is married to him unaware of this fact. waiting to read more.

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Prologue is pretty interesting. ..waiting to c geet's reaction knowing the truth of maan

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shreya

@Willy_Wonka.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Its magnificent!

I think this gonna come in my list of favourite fan fictions of all time.

Update soon!

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Sana

@luvvivian286

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Awesome concept

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

God such a cheating...ridiculous...

but I want to ask one question...what is ritual of purification...I have never seen or known any ritual like this...I am Hindu but never heard any of this type of ritual...this is my request...this is religious matter... so please just to make story don't create this type of unnecessary imaginary concept...it can create misunderstanding about Hindu religion...as far as I know this purification ceremony is done in widow-remarriage...not during marriage of first time bride...

please change that paragraph about this so called false purification thing...

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shree2

@shree2

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Wonderful story...

Maan is not stable and dadima lied to geet's family and got them married...

Now geet came to know about his condition, i wonder what will be her reaction after getting her conscious...

Continue soon...

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 28

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Important Note-

Hey dearies sorry to disappoint you all.

I am discontinuing this story.

Actually I didn't want to hurt anyone's religious sentiments but, I guess it was invetible. And it did hurt one of the readers. At first I was thinking hard before penning down this concept whether, anyone will be hurt I wished not but in vain. So my apologies to the particular reader and you all too. My mind is right now blank to write anything. Until then see ya guys...

And my apology to the reader on pg-8...@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6.

This was unintentional... hope u will understand.

T.c.

Xoxo.

Edited by _Ms.Funnybee_ - 9 years ago