MRIGNAYANI ***DOUBLE UPDATE Pg. 89 ** 15/04/17 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Oooh new story congo shonga yaar.. Love the concept.. Soo maan babu is already in love with geet without knowing her.. Yash and meera im guessing love eachother.. Haye bus iss sasha ka band baja de maza ajaye ya phir get her another rich spoiled brat she falls in love with lol.. Cont soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats on the new story
interesting start...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story.. Intresting story and nice start.. Waiting for update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Wow A New Story And It Sounds Very Interesting Character Sketch is Vibrant Waiting for Update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue and cs. Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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MRIGNAYANI

(EYES LIKE A DOE, FEMALE DEER)

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CHAPTER 1

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!



"Those eyes! Those beautiful hazel coloured eyes! Those eyes which had pain and fear in them! I wish I could take away pain and fear from them and fill them with love, happiness and mirth! I often wonder how will she be whose eyes are so beautiful? Eyes in which I feel like drowning myself! It seems like my wait will never end!" He picked up a slip of paper kissed it, then placed it back in the diary. He closed the diary with a little force today making a 'thud' sound. The diary has been his companion for past two years of his life, it holds all secret to his mysterious love who has held his heart as her prisoner and kept him awake for nights longing for her!



"Maaan, Maan, Maan! Aaye khaana lag gayaa hai! " (Come dinner is served!)

"Aaya Dadimaa!"(coming!)

"Maan bete, agar aap uss se itna pyaar karte hain, toh shaadi kyun nahi karte!"(Maan if you love her so much, why don't you marry her?)

"Dadimaa aap ko jawaab maloom hai!" (You know the answer, Dadimaa!)

"Haan beta! Hum dono ko jawaab maloom hai, magar zindagi kissi ke liye nahi rukti!"(Yes son! We both know the answer but life doesn't stop for anyone!)

"Aap ka kya matlab hai, Bua?" (What do you mean?)

"Beta, tum apne liye ek jeevan saathi chunn lo, varna hum tumhare liye chunn lete hain!"(Why don't you choose a life partner of your choice, or should we help you?)

"Bua, mai uss ke siwaye kissi aur se nahi shaadi karunga!" (Aunt, I'll marry no one except her!)

"Beta, tum na uska naam jaante ho, naa pataa, naa hi ki woh dekhne mei kaisi hai, sirf uski aankhein dekhi hai!"(Maan you don't know her name, her address, how does she look, you have only seen her eyes!)

"Accha Maan, ek kaam karo." (Ok Maan do one thing.)

"Kya?" (What?)

"Agle hafte Yash ki shaadi ki rasamein shuru ho rahi hain. Yash ki mangetar, Meera Hoshiyarpur ke paas ek gaon (village) ki rehanewali hai. Tum humare saath chalo, woh ladki tumhe Hoshiyarpur ke bus stand par mili thee, toh wahin paas mei rehti hogi! Tum humare saath matt aana kyunki tumhe shor-sharaba pasand nahi! Baad mei, shaadi se teen din pehle aa jaana."(Next week Yash's wedding rituals are starting. Yash's fiancee, Meera belongs to a small village near Hoshiyarpur. You come with us as you had found "her" at Hoshiyarpur bus stand. So she must living nearby. You don't come with us as you don't like too much noise and people. Come later i.e. three days before the wedding.)

"Haan yeh theek rehega." Dadimaa also supported Pammi. (This sound perfect!)

"Theek hai!" (Alright!)

Yes he is MAAN SINGH KHURANNA(MSK) ! CEO of Khurana Industries & MD of Khurana Constructions. MSK who the business world fears and no one wants to be his enemy! That MSK is hopelessly in love with a girl or a woman whose name he doesn't know and neither the address. He doesn't know how she looks but he only knows that she has very beautiful eyes!

Pammi's mentioning Hoshiyarpur bus stand, brought back memories of two years ago which Maan was desperately trying to suppress! He still remembers it as if it happened yesterday. Maan was on the way to see a plot of land for construction in Hoshiyarpur, but due to unplanned meeting he left Delhi late hence was having problem finding way as sun had set and it had become dark. Suddenly his jeep stopped as its engine had heated.



He was looking around for a lake or pond to fill his cannister with water. Being new to the area and its being pitch dark added to the problem. Suddenly a soft female body hit him and fell down. She quickly picked herself up saying "MAAF KIJIYEGA! SORRY!" and scurried away! She was followed by evil looking goons carrying "talwaars"(swords) and muttering among themselves,"Kudi nu aaj pakad kar maar kar nadi mei dubba deinge. Koi saboot hi nahi rahega!" (We will catch the girl kill her and dispose of her body in river!)



Maan was fearful of girl's safety and followed behind the goons maintaining a safe distance. The ruffians quickly found her and struck her arm making her fall. Before they could strike again Maan came and held their talwaars.





Then fight occurred and Maan defended both the girl and himself. The fight was abruptly stopped as goon's heard footsteps of some villagers and ran away! Maan saw the injured girl lying unconscious with her face covered tightly and only slit made for eyes. As it was not safe to leave her alone, Maan carried her to thatched hut and placed her on the dry straw and sprinkled water on her thereby reviving her.





She came to consciousness and immediately hugged Maan in fear. Then looked up towards Maan's face and both got lost in each others eyes. Maan had never seen such beautiful eyes. Eyes in which Maan was finding himself drowning.





The girl was also drawn to Maan's masculinity. Just then loud sounds of cricket croaking broke their eye lock!
Maan rubbed her back calming her,"Daro nahin woh chale gaye hain!" (Don't be scared! They have gone!)

"Aap ka bahut shukriya!" (Thank you very much!)

"Mai yaheen hoon tum befikar ho kar soo jaao!" (I'm here, you sleep without any fear!) Girl nodded and went to sleep.
Next morning, when Maan woke up she had gone. There was a slip of paper under a stone. The note was written in English, surprising Maan."Thank you very much for all your help! Thank you for saving my life and putting your own life in danger! Please be careful of those men! They are Brij (our village landlord's son)and his friends! Your cannister is filled with water you can now start your jeep."

A week later, Maan was on his way to Hoshiyarpur, he left early from Delhi i.e. 5pm so that he could reach Meera's home in Hoshiyarpur in bright sunlight. Sun was rising giving a warm glow all around, lifting Maan's mood. Passing the the fields along the roadside which were looking beautiful. Mustard flowers were blooming bright yellow in the fields making fields look like carpet of yellow! The brightness of fields also filled Maan's heart with happiness reminding him of "her" dupatta with which she had covered her face. The bright blue sky reminding Maan of her suit that she was wearing! While seeing all this scenic beauty he didn't realise that he has crossed Hoshiyarpur and is on outskirt of Meera's village. He suddenly stopped his jeep on the side of the road, seeing few carefree girls playing with each other near the pond, splashing water on one another! It was a mixed group youngest being 8-10yrs. old and eldest in her late teens. The eldest girl had wavy hair which were damp due to splashing of water. Her style of dressing and walking was just like that of "his love". He shook himself up muttering "Maan, Hoshiyarpur mei sab issi tehare ke kapde pehante honge. Iss ladki ho chodh aur tu apna pyaar dhoondne ki koshish kar!" But he still could not avoid looking at pure and innocent beauty in front of him.(Maan everyone in Hoshiyarpur dresses like this. Forget this girl and concentrate on finding your girl !) Girl with thick wavy hair, milky white complexion, hour glass figure and kissable lips! Maan so wanted to kiss those lips and find out if they are as sweet as they look! "Maan control youself! Stop behaving like a pevert!" With lot of effort and before his thought go completely in wrong direction, he sat in his jeep and left for Meera's home.



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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
That Was An Excellent Start Maan's Bua wants him to find his life partner or they can help help him get one as life does not come to a stand still but Maan is adamant that he can only marry the girl he fell in love with he only knows her eyes not her name nor where she lives but he had also spend some time with her after rescuing her and now all he thinks is only about her Maan now back in Hoshiapur and on his way to the village near there when he spots a group of girls and one girl attracts his attention making him realize that he should rather be looking for the girl he loves than seeing and admiring this girl
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Wonderful start 👍🏼
Maan fida over the girl he saved... He has seen only her eyes
Dadi n bua asking him to get married
Maan in hoshiyarpur... Whether he will meet her... Eagerly waiting to know
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haye maan babu ek dafa uss karki ki eyes toh dekh lo:.. Lolzz.. Superb yaar.. Beautiful start.. Maaneet meet help eachother and maan babu all lost in geetu.. Cont soon hun..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing updte...maan saved geet d just seen her eyes d fallen in love with her madly nw he is came to hoshigarpur for searching his lve. waiting. for maan d ggeeet meeting

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