MRIGNAYANI ***DOUBLE UPDATE Pg. 89 ** 15/04/17

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Dear Friends,
This is my new story! Mrignayani means for a girl who has eyes like a doe i.e. female deer. Mrignayani signifies very beautiful eyes.
I hope you enjoy this story.
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INDEX

Character sketch Pg.1

Prologue Pg.1

Chapter 1 Pg. 3

Chapter 2,3 Pg. 8

Chapter 4 Pg. 10

Chapter 5 Pg.14

Chapter 6 Pg.16

Chapter 7 Pg.19

Chapter 8 Pg. 20

Chapter 9(a)&(b) Pg. 24

Chapter 10 Pg. 27

Chapter 11 Pg. 30

Chapter 12 Pg. 31

Chapter 13 Pg. 33

Chapter 14 Pg. 34

Chapter 15 Pg. 35

Chapter 16 Pg. 37

Chapter 17 Pg.38

Chapter 18 Pg.41

Chapter 19 Pg.43

Chapter 20 Pg.46

Chapter 21 Pg.49

Chapter 22 Pg.52

Chapter 23 Pg.53

Chapter 24 Pg.56

Chapter 25 Pg.58

Chapter 26 Pg.61

Chapter 27 Pg.63

Chapter 28 Pg.66

Chapter 29 Pg.68

Chapter 30 Pg.70

Chapter 31 Pg.72

Chapter 32 Pg.75

Chapter 33 Pg.77

Chapter 34 Pg.86

Chapter 35(a)&(b) Pg. 89

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PROLOGUE

She was trying to save herself from those goons sent by Brij, the landlord's son. He had just murdered a girl and she was the sole witness. Brij along with his men had come to kill her. Girl who was still innocent like a newly appeared bud at tender age of 18. It was her misfortune that she had left from Delhi by last bus to Hoshiyarpur. She wanted to surprise her grandfather, Daarji, the Sarpanch of this village for his birthday. This village was next to town of Hoshiyarpur, it was in dark and secluded portion of the village that she landed in this mess. Her only fault was that she was at wrong place and at wrong time. Men kept repeating,"Kudi nu aaj pakad kar maar kar nadi mei dubba deinge. Koi saboot hi nahi rahega!" (We will catch the girl kill her and dispose her body in river!) She had covered her face with her dupatta and only her eyes were visible. Her eyes were her best feature but she was unaware of it! Her run had come to an abrupt halt by her banging into a solid hard male chest. She quickly picked herself saying "MAAF KIJIYEGA! SORRY!" and scurried away hearing Brij and his goons voices! Leaving the man confused !
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MRIGNAYANI

(EYES LIKE A DOE, FEMALE DEER)



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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CHARACTER SKETCH


SAVITRI DEVI KHURANA
Maan & Vicky's dadimaa. Yash's Nanimaa. Loves her three Grandchildren a lot! Lady of modern vision! Believes in "women empowerment". She believe in saying "You educate a woman, you educate a family. You educate a man its educating an individual!" She is Chairman of Khurana Industries i.e. Khurana Constructions, Khurana Interior etc.



MAAN SINGH KHURANA :
28yr. old. Eldest son & heir of Khuranas. CEO of Khurana Industries & MD of Khurana Constructions . He has a degree in Bachelors in Architecture as well as MBA degree. He has looks that girls just die for! Tall, handsome & well toned body with 8pack abs. Intelligent, arrogant, ruthless(with enemies), tough employer. Hates lies, gossip & deceit. Very loving & soft towards his family. For him education of a person is more important than his social status! He is still looking for girl of his dreams, he has only seen her beautiful hazel eyes once and fallen in love with it!



VIKRANT SINGH KHURANA(Vicky)
25yrs old. Fun- loving, jovial & a prankstar. He is not interested in working just now. He loves to party and have a nice time. He is a big flirt but soft hearted! He can even flirt with his Dadimaa and Bua.



PAMINDER MALHOTRA (Pammi) : Life has been pretty harsh to her. She lost her husband within 2yrs of her marriage. Her in-laws threw her and Yash out of her sasural after her husband's last rites were done. Helpless Pammi with Yash started staying in KM. Savitri Devi encouraged her and she started a company called "Malhotra Textiles". Her brother and bhabhi who were alive then helped her to stand on her feet. As Pammi has seen personal hardship she is firm advocate of woman's education. She has a tough exterior but a heart ofgold!



YASH MALHOTRA : 26yrs. old. Very responsible youngman! He is MD of a "Malhotra Textiles". He is Maan and Vicky's bua's (paternal aunt) son. He is very reserved and only tells his emotions to Maan.



MUNSHIJI : Loyal accountant from time of Maan's grandfather's time. Very humble & honest. Often scolds his daughter for her extravagant ways!

SASHA : 23yrs. Old. Munshiji's daughter. Works as an assistant architect. Very lazy in her work. Love to boss her juniors! Her main aim is to marry one of the Khurana brothers.



Last but not least our favourite, ADITYA SRIVASTAV (ADI):
28yrs. old. He is Head of Accounts department. Very close friend of Maan! His father was loyal employee of Khuranas. After his father's death, Khurana's employed him. He is very loyal to Maan and can do anything for Maan. He is Maan's right hand man. Recieving end of Maan's temper maximum. Maan trusts him the most professionally & personally. His stammering increases in Maan's presence!



GEETAKSHI SINGH HANDA (Geet):
21yr. Old. Geet is doing Final Year Bachelor in Architecture. She is true definition of beauty & grace. Trained classical dancer. She has a milky white complexion, hour glass figure with doe-like hazel coloured eyes. She is the only girl in a family of four over-protective men. They love to pamper her to no end! She lives with Pinky as her PG in Delhi. She has applied to work as part-time in different architectural firms for internship and waiting for their call!



LALA SUKHWINDER SINGH HANDA (Daarji) :
70yr. old. Sarpanch of Hoshyiarpur. Believes in equality and education of women. Was very displeased when his daughter did not complete her graduation and married only a 10th pass DVD library owner. Now has disowned his daughter and refuses to let his daughter enter his house! He is for Geet's studying but is slightly upset with his son, for sending her to a dangerous city like Delhi!



NEELAM SINGH (Neelo):
A 45yrs. old narrow minded 12th passed daughter of Daarji. She is a widow and mother of Meera. She is Geet's bua. Neelo got married against her father's wishes. Stays with her in-laws under duress as her father refuses to let her stay with him. She is a woman having no culture and a loud mouth! Believes that girls cannot be equal to boys! Loves Teji & Lucky a lot, but hates Geet! Meera stays in city away from her due to her these old-fashioned ways!



MOHINDER LAL HANDA:
A 50yrs old man. A very sensible and mature man. He works in a Bank in Chandigarh, therefore is mostly out of home. He usually obeys what Daarji says but if it is for welfare of Geet, he will go against Daarji as well! Hence, he went against Daarji to let Geet study in Delhi. He is father of . But, Geet is "apple of his eyes"!



Geet's brothers-
TEJINDER SINGH HANDA (Teji) :
27yrs. old. Very hard working. Has an aversion and hatred for girls! Very protective about his sisters, Geet & Meera. He hates his bua as she hurts Geet, whenever they meet at any family function.



LAKHWHINDER SINGH HANDA (Lucky) :
25yrs. old. Happy go lucky fellow! Not at all serious in life. Despite of his Daarji & father's scoldings! He is protective about Geet. Sometimes has back answered his bua when she was rude to Geet.



MEERA SINGH :
25yrs. Old. She has degree in fashion designing. Works as a Senior designer in "Malhotra Textiles". Loves Teji, Lucky and Geet as her real siblings! She is fed up of her mother's attitude as she is unable to make her move with times. She is in love with Yash.



SUNAINA KOHLI (Naina):
48yr. old Rano's twin sister and Geet's mausi. She is unmarried and doesn't have any child and wanted to adopt any one i.e. Teji, Lucky or Geet. But Daarji refused and Mohinder supported Daarji. Teji, Lucky and Geet want to get Mohinder and Sunaina married as they both are getting old and are lonely!



PINKY MANCHANDA :
23yrs. old. Receptionist at KC. Very jovial, full of life & loves eating. Geet is her PG. she helps Geet a lot!




NEW CHARACTERS

MRS. SNEHLATA CHATURVEDI (Lata Didi / Lata Mausi)
She is Mrs.Savitri Devi Khurana's elder sister married to Brahamin family from Uttar Pradesh(UP), northern state of India. Although she is graduate but is very strict regarding religious do's and don'ts. She takes a long time to like someone, but when she does she will go to any length for them. She is not loud mouth and spitting venom like Neelo. She loves all Savitri's grandsons but Maan is her favourite even though Maan back answers her the most. Lata mausi and Maan are constantly arguing about religious customs and rites! Maan considers them useless and Lata mausi feels they are right as they bind society together! She may fight with Maan but doesn't like anyone else saying anything to him!



RISHABH SINGHANIA
31yrs. old young man. Owner and CEO of Singhania Construction. Maan's three years senior in college. Married to Shaamili . He had a fight with his wife, Shaamili and she walkout in anger and since then is missing! As he had not revealed his marriage in public, he could not announce or advertise about her whereabouts in public, thereby endangering her security. Rishabh and Maan are in touch with each other as he treats Maan as his younger brother. Maan is aware of Shaamili's disappearance but doesn't know how she looks!



SHAAMILI (MILI)
25yrs. old. Assistant architect in Khurana Construction. Sharing the apartment with Geet and Pinky. Geet found her two years back on river bank of Yamuna. She took her to hospital and got her examined. Doctors said that she has partial amnesia and had lost her memory of past two years when Geet found her! Geet only knows Mili's name, she is orphan and her educational qualification. She also knows from the mangalsutra that she wears that Mili is married but Mili has forgotten her marriage and husband's name. Mili was out of Delhi for important meeting hence could not attend Yash and Meera's wedding!




SIMMI :
23yrs. old. Works in HR Department of Singhania Construction. Simmi and Sasha are friends since school days. Sasha and Simmi can do anything to achieve their goal even murder. The only difference is Sasha is a little dumb whereas Simmi is cunning crafty and conniving! Simmi is the mastermind behind the plan and Sasha is the person executing the plan! Simmi wants to marry Rishi for his wealth and royal family status. Rishi suspects Simmi's hand in disapperance of Shaamli but has no proof. Simmi had tried her feminine wiles at Maan but when she found Sasha after Maan, she started treating Maan as a boss only!




PARI:
21yr. old intern in KC. She drools on Maan whenever he is around. Otherwise she is very focussed and behaves in a professional manner in KC. Helpful in nature and can't stand injustice! Vicky likes Pari but Pari looks at him as Boss' brother!











Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue n cs
eagerly w8ing 4 updates
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Congrats on the new story! lovely title! fab prologue! superb cs! update soon!
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Congrats for new story
Nice prologue
waiting for update
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Sounds very interesting yaar... Can't wait for the story to start...
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Congrats for the new story 👍🏼
Lovely prologue... CS... Good
Eagerly waiting for the update
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congo on the new story awesome prologue and cs seems geet witnessed a crime she wanted to surprise er darji but get ka surprise usse bhi bhaari padh gaya she must have bumped into maan who fell for her eyes lets see how geet saves herself now from brij

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