MRIGNAYANI ***DOUBLE UPDATE Pg. 89 ** 15/04/17 - Page 5

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CHAPTER 2

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!


The girl with thick wavy hair, heard the bells of nearby temple chiming reminding her of the time and amount of work to be done. She said bye to her little friends and ran back home as fast as she could as her sister, Meera's in-laws were going to come home to do pre-wedding rituals! Yes her sister though her cousinby birth i.e. her bua's daughter but she considered Meera didi her real sister!



She reached 5minutes later than usual and found her bua standing outside Handa Haveli screaming her lungs out, "Tu kahan thee? Tujhe maloom hai na ki aaj meri Meera ka shagun hai! Teri wajeh se Daarji ne mujhe Haveli mei ghussne se manna kiya hai! Apni Maa ko toh paida hote hi khaa gai abb mere pe aur meri Meera par reham kar. Agar meri Meera ki shaadi mei koi garbad hui toh mai tujhe nahi chodhongi!" Neelo threatened the girl with pointing her index finger in the girl's direction! (Where were you? You know today is my daughter's shagun. You are the reason that Daarji doesn't allow me to enter Handa Haveli. You were the cause for your mother's death. Please spare Meera and me from your bad luck! If something goes wrong in my Meera's wedding, I won't leave you!)



"Aur agar meri Gudiya ko kuch hua toh mai tujhe nahi chodhonga!" Lal Sukhwinder Singh Handa (Daarji) thundered.(If something happens to my Gudiya,I won't leave you!)

"Daarji aap yeh..." (Father you...)

"Neelo, tunne hi toh sharat rakhi thi na! Agar mai Meera ki Handa Haveli se shaadi karaa doon, toh tu shaadi mei nahi aayegi kyunki tujhe Handa Haveli mei kadam rakhna manna hai! Aur jo rasamei Handa Haveli ke bahaar hogi usmei Gudiya shaamil nahi hogi. Gudiya ne toh apni baat rakh li hai par tunne nahi! TEJI Meera ke shaadi ke aaj ke saare kaaryekram (program)paaswali dharamshala mei karo!" (Neelo, you had kept a condition, that if I get Meera married from Handa Haveli, you will not come for the wedding as you can't enter Handa Haveli. All rituals outside Handa Haveli, Gudiya will not attend. Gudiya has kept her part of bargain but you have not! Teji arrange for all Meera's wedding functions from today in nearby dharamshala.)



Neelo came and caught Daarji's feet, "Bauji, nahi dharamshala mei nahin. Meera ki zindagi bhar ka sawaal hai!" (Father not dharamshala, it is a matter of my daughter's whole life!)

"Daarji, maan jaayiye! Didi ko poori zindagi tanaa sunna padhega!" (Daarji please agree for the wedding otherwise Meera will have to hear taunts all her life!)

"Theek hai! Gudiya tu keh rahi hai iss liye mai maan raha hoon! Neelo tu shaadi shuda hai, iss liye kaayde se Meera ki vidaai teri sasural se honi chahiye naa ki tere maike se! Khair, ek baat ka hamesha dhyaan rakhna, Geet aur Handa parivaar ka har ek sadasya tumhari madatt kar raha hai Meera ki shaadi Haveli se karke! Kyunki tum iss Haveli par apna haq khoo chuki ho, jab tum ne uss librarywale se shaadi ki thi. Tum yeh baat balhe bhul jaao mai nahi bhuloonga! "(Alright! As Gudiya is requesting, I'll agree. Neelo you are a married woman, therefore rightfully Meera's wedding should be done from your in-laws house and not your parent's house! Anyway, remember one thing whatever Gudiya or anyone from Handa family is doing for you is in order to help you. IT IS NOT YOUR RIGHT. You have lost the right on this house the day you married that library owner! You may have forgotten this, but not me!)

Daarji soften his voice and said, "Gudiya puttar, jald nashta lagaa bahut bhook lag rahi hai!" (Gudiya put breakfast I'm famished!) Everyone had breakfast and just then Naina walked in. Naina or "Sunaina" in relation was Rano's twin sister but Gudiya use to call her "Maa" as she had never seen her mother. When Gudiya was very small one day she was crying saying in school children tease her saying she has no mother. So Daarji took her in front of Naina and said, "Yeh hai teri Maa!" Rano had died during Gudiya's child-birth leaving three small children - 6yrs., 4yrs. and a new born and a totally lost Mohinder. Daarji had requested Naina to stay back and she did for 10yrs. Mohinder was never at home partly due to job and partly due to memories of Rano lingering there. But it was a village and Naina's character was being assassinated. Hence, Daarji had to let Naina leave when she asked as Mohinder showed no signs of marrying her even for the sake of children!

Gudiya with help of Sunaina started cooking lunch for about 50guests from both the families combined. Gudiya had already instructed their maid Lacchi and her sister, Channi to cut the vegetables in the morning and make dough for rotis! Gudiya had already started cooking Chole. Naina had got ready and came as Daarji had decided that Naina will do all ceremonies of bride's mother! Geet was still roaming sweaty and dishevelled. Naina came and scolded her, "Yeh kya Gudiya? Jaldi tyaar ho, mehmaan aanewale hain!" (Go and get ready fast Gudiya, guests are about to arrive!)
Gudiya went and got ready in a plain blue colour Patiala suit with no make up! Although her natural beauty needed no extra artificial enhancement but it was a house of marriage and everyone i.e. girls, women, boys, men, children and even servants will be dressed up.



Naina got irritated, "Iss ladki ka mai kya karoon? Iss umar mei toh ladkiyon ko sajne sawarne ka bahut shauk hota hai aur tu jhalli...!" (What is wrong with this girl? At your age, girls like to dress up and you...!)

"Maa, kya galat pahena hai maine. Aur waise bhi mujhe kaun dekhega? Shaadi to Meera didi ki ho rahi hai!" (What have I worn wrong? Who will see me? Anyway its Meera's wedding!)

"Haan shaadi Meera ki hai, magar mehmaano se toh tu bhi milegi. Dekh beta yeh Meera ke sasural wale hain. Hum unke jitne paisewale toh hai nahi magar kam se kam unhe yeh nahi lagna chahiye ki hum Meera ki khushi mei khush nahi hain! Mujhe maloom tha ki tu apne liye kuch nahi banwayegi aur Neelam toh banwaane se rahi tere liye kuch bhi! Iss liye yeh le jaldi jaa aur pehankar aa!"Naina handed Geet a packet. (Yes wedding is of Meera, but you will be looking after guests. See dear, they are Meera's in-laws. We are not as rich as them but they should not feel that we are not happy with this marriage! I know you will not get any new clothes stitched for yourself and your bua, forget it! So take this and quickly wear it and come!)



Gudiya wore the light pink & lavender stitched lungi with matching lavender dupatta given by her Maa. Tied her hair in high pony tail style braid and wore chunky jewellery with golden Patiala jhootis. She was struggling to closing one of the hooks at the back of her kurti as it had a very lowback!



Suddenly the door was pushed open with force rudely. Gudiya turned to yell at the intruder but saw the man of her dreams wearing black Patiala salwaar suit standing making Gudiya and words on her tongue freeze!


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CHAPTER 3

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

Suddenly the door was pushed open with force rudely. Gudiya turned to yell at the intruder but saw the man of her dreams wearing black Patiala salwaar suit standing making Gudiya and the words on her tongue freeze! The man wearing black Patiala salwaar suit was also in a state of shock!



Just then Meera came to call Gudiya and saw the man and Gudiya in a frozen state. Meera handled the situation diplomatically,"Maan Veerji aap galat kamre mei aa gaye hain,Yash ka kamra dusari taraf hain! Aaiye mai le chalti hoon!" (Maan you have come to the wrong room. Yash's room is other side! Please follow me,I'll take you!)

Maan left immediately with Meera leaving a blushing Gudiya behind! Gudiya quickly got ready and left for kitchen. In kitchen Naina closed her hooks! Then Naina went to see all things needed by Meera's in-laws for the rituals and Gudiya got busy serving tea, cold drinks and snacks with Lacchi and Channi's help to the guests. It was during serving of tea and snacks that Daarji with his hands actioned Gudiya to come near him. Leaving Rajji, Lacchi and Channi to serve remaining guests, Gudiya went near Daarji. "Gudiya puttar inn se mil yeh tere jeejaji ki Nani hain Smt. Savitri Devi Khurana aur yeh hain tere jeejaji ki Maa, Smt. Paminder Malhotra."(Gudiya, come and meet them, this is your BIL's grandmother Mrs. Savitri Devi Khurana and this is your BIL's mother, Mrs. Paminder Malhotra!) Gudiya bent and touched both ladies feet, one was nearing Daarji's age wearing white silk saree with elegant pearls and younger lady was wearing blue saree with light jewellery."Aur yeh hai humari izzat, iss ghar ko aur hum chaar mardon ko sambhalnewali, humari Poti, GEETAKSHI SINGH HANDA!"Daarji introduced. (And she is my pride, who manages this home and manages us four men as well, my darling grand daughter, GEETAKSHI SINGH HANDA!)





Dadimaa and Pammi were very happy seeing Geet and started planning something in their minds! Pammi asked,"Beta, tum English bol sakti ho?" (My dear can you speak in English?)

"Aajji haan! Yeh toh Delhi mai pad rahi hai iss gaon mei nahi!" Daarji said with immense pride. (Off course! She is studying in Delhi not in this village!)

"Beta, till where have you studied?"

"Auntyji, I'm in my Final Year of B. Arch. I'm applying in different Construction Companies for internship!"

Just then Lacchi came running looking tense, "Didi, didi, ek pareshaani aa gayi! Jaldi aao!"(Didi, please come there has been a problem. Hurry!)

"Tu chal mere saath! Auntyji mujhe maaf kariye!" (You come with me! Aunty please excuse me!)

"Beta aap hummei Dadimaa aur Pammi ko bua bula sakti hain!" (My dear you can call me Dadimaa and Pammi bua(aunt))
Geet once again touched their feet and rushed to the kitchen.

On entering kitchen she found Naina, Rajji and Channi tensed and flustered. "Kya hua? Aap sab pareshaan kyun hain?" (What happened? Why are you all tense?)

"Woh Gudiya, Meera ke jeth, kya naam hai?"Naina thought scratching her head. (Gudiya, Meera's eldest brother-in-law. What is his name?)

"MAAN SINGH KHURANA, Mausiji! Kaali Patiala Salwaar mei kya gabru jawaan lag rahe hain!" Rajji drooled. (MAAN SINGH KHURANA! How handsome he looks in black Patiala Salwaar!)



"Pareshaani kya hai? Koi bataega!" Geet asked in an irritated tone thereby stopping Rajji's drooling. (What is the problem? Will someone tell me?)

"Unhe chole, paneer, aloo gobhi nahi pasand. Woh sirf vilayati khaana kya naam hai? Basta khaate hain aur kaali kaafee peete hain!" (He does not like chole, paneer, aloo gobhi (potato-cauliflower). He only eats Continental food, what is it called? Basta and black coffee!)

"Pasta aur Black coffee!"

"Haan! Kuch aissa hi!" (Yes! Something like that!)

"Bauji kab tak aa rahe hain?" (When is father arriving?)

"Aaj shaam ko!" (Today evening!)

"Theek hai mai unse manga loongi Pasta! Tab tak aur kuch khaane ka intezaam karte hain!" (Fine, I'll ask him to get pasta! Lets see what we can make in the meantime!) "Lacchi, tu jaa kar passwale Guptaji se do Maggie ke packet, coffee aur kuch sabzi jaldi se laa. Yeh rahe sabziyon ke naam!" (Lacchi you go and get from nearby Gupta store two packets of Maggie, coffee powder and few vegetables. This is the list of vegetables!)



An hour and a half later lunch was served. There was Pindi chana, palak paneer, aloo gobhi, plain yogurt and rotis. For dessert was Gajar ka halwa made by Naina. Geet had arranged a seperate table for Maan with napkin, folk, knife and Continental cuisine where all the men folk were eating. Daarji, Teji and Lucky were very proud of their Gudiya. Dadimaa, Pammi and Yash were highly impressed with speed at which continental food was made and served. Maan was thoroughly surprised and extremely happy at getting food of his choice along with his favourite steaming cup of black coffee. Maan was very touched at Daarji's hospitality and care. Dadimaa, Pammi,Yash and Vicky (who had come just half an hour back!) were full of praises for food. Yash and Vicky could not stop licking their fingers making Daarji's chest swell with pride, "Humari Gudiya Annapoorna hai kyunki uski guru swayam Annapoorna hai!"(My Gudiya is Goddess of Food as her teacher is Goddess of Food herself!)

"Kaun hai Geet ki guru?" (Who is her teacher ?)

"Meri beti Naina!" Daarji formally introduced Naina to Dadimaa & Pammi. (My daughter, Naina)

"Daarji, kya mai unse mil sakta hoon, jisne itna swaadisht khaana bannaya hai?"Vicky requested. Maan was also curious who made for him pasta at such short notice with limited ingredients! (Daarji, can I please meet who made such delicious food!)

"Haan kyun nahin beta? Abhi bulata hoon. Lucky, jaa Gudiya ko bulaake laa!" (Yes why not? I'll call her! Lucky, go and call Gudiya here!)

Geet came hesistantly and said, "Daarji kya hua? Khaana theek nahi banna? Aap Halwa khaa lijiye woh Maa ne bannaya hai! Mukh ka zaaika theek ho jaayega." (Daarji what happened? Food is not made correct? You please eat sweet that is made by Naina Maa! The taste of your mouth will improve.)

While Geet was blabbering in nervousness Maan and Vicky were just gazing at Geet's beauty. Vicky who is a big time flirt said spontaneously, "What a beauty?"




Hearing Vicky, Maan was furious but could not understand the reason for his anger as he was in love with his hazel eyes! But undoubtedly she is more of a "Goddess of beauty" than "Goddess of Food"! He is still unable to understand that when he is in love with his hazel eyes, why is he getting uncontrollably attracted to her and can't stand any man wanting to be close to her.
"Yeh humari poti hai, Geetakshi Singh Handa, pyaar se hum isse Geet bulaate hain. Khaana isne bannaya tha jo aap sab ko bahut pasand aaya tha!" (She is my grand daughter, Geetakshi Singh Handa, her nickname is Geet. She is the cook of today's lunch which you all appreciated immensely!)
Unknown to Maan and Vicky, Dadimaa and Pammi were observing their reaction towards Geet in great detail!



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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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🥳 yipee me first
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👍🏼awesome 👍🏼 👍🏼
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update soon 👍🏼
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wonderful updte... finally maan d geet met dadi d pammi observing geet darji prasing geet. waiting for d nxt updte
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Superb yaar.. I hope maan realises that geet is the hazel eyed girl he saved.. Awwnnn too good yaar.. Sooo sweet.. Ufff this neelam is such a pain in the butt.. Cont soon hun
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Awesome updates. Geet bya got deserved words from darji for saying to geet many wrong words. Naina brought up geet n give her mirals n to be down to earth person. Geet met her dream guy maan. Maan is attarted to geet known to her to be his dream girl. Dadi n maan bua r cooking something in mind.
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Awesome update
waiting for next update. .
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hi thanks 4 da pm n double terrific updates! well written! Darji loves Geet so much! she is his pride! Its Meera's wedding! Hate Neelu! Bt Darji sets her straight! Naina took care of Geet! Geet works hard! Darji agrees 2 Geet's sake! Khuranas arrive! Dadi n Pammi impressed by Geet! Maaneet meet! Geet affected by Maan! Geet makes pasta n coffee 4 Maan! he is touched by the hospitality! Maan sees Geet! he is attracted 2 her! bt thinks abt his hazled eye love! update soon

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