Dark Shades of The Devil/Note---Page35/31 may 2016

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vrinda22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

interesting prologue

geet is kidnapped

n the man must be maan

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vrinda22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

part 1

nice part

geet is sleeping beauty

how can she sleep for so much time

she lied to enter the club

she noticed someones gaze

is it maan..he asked her name n touched her too

his intense gaze made her shiver

he let her go..

but looked at her way

interesting start

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sagorika93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

first part was awesome ...meera n geet went to the pub ...there maan saw geet ...the way he behev with geet m also scrd now ..
he is mysterious n cold ...want to read more ...continue soon...

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

nice starting
liked maaneet meeting
cant wait fr next

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dia1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Waiting ...waiting... Waiting... Waiting... Waiting... Waiting...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

very interesting and intriguing story...

waiting for next part...

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swapna.p

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

nice update..
waiting for next update..

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sonaly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Note

I am going to change the character name RAHUL with YASH.

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Cool So It Will Be Yash Will Be Waiting For Next Update

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sonaly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Part 2

"Geet"

Couple of weeks later.

I wake up middle of the night all sweaty. I saw a bad dream about myself. When feel relax I look all around my room, I think I saw a shadow at the balcony. I go there but no one is there, i come to my room and saw the watch. It's 12.05am means its my birthday. My mom and dad came to my room with small home made cake to surprised me. My mom makes best cake I ever test.

"Happy birthday baby girl " my dad say.

"Thanks dad."

I cut the cake and fead my parents. And I finished all cake, for that I get scolded by my mom. She say I will spoil my health.

We enjoyed our family time. Later my parents say good night to me and gone. I go to my bed, when I notice a big blood red Rose at my bed side table. I touch the rose its so soft, I noticed that there is no spines in this. May be dad put in here.

I feel really sleepy. So I fall asleep fast.

Wow. It's my birthday. Today is a best day, because today no one going say no to me, birthday gift, party. My favorite day. At morning my parents wish me. Then meera come. We have shopping plan. My parents wanted throw a party. But I say no, because I am not a school girl now, I am grown-up now. So I say that I hangout with my friends. At the evening me meera puja, pia, ria, nupur and tina we all celebrate my birthday.

A few weeks later

All is going very well. I try not to think about the club incedent again, because when I think about that a feel scared. Sometimes at night I saw bad dreams, like I all Alon and being forced with him. But it all dreams they are not real. I hope I never see him again.

My life is going perfect, I am confident about my result. My all university plan, my friend and my crashed on Yash. Everything is good.

Removed

I have some personal reason.

Sorry for mistakes...

Edited by sonaly1234 - 9 years ago