Dark Shades of The Devil/Note---Page35/31 may 2016

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swapna.p

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

lovely update..
waiting for next update..

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Mona (Rashmi)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awesome update geet apne b'day night mai usa lagta hai koi uska room ma tha aur ek red rose vi tha lekin usa laga uska papa na rakha hoga aur wo apne b'day apne friends ka saath spend karti hai aur uska graduation ceremoney ma wo usa club wale stranger ko dekhti hai geet ko lagta hai wo usa chahti hai istiliya uska peecha hai...waisa geet ka age ab kitni hai agar ya 18 wala b'day hai to wo graduate kaisa ho gayi? Waiting for next part...

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payal.gupta177

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Intriguing update.. Geet turned 18 and someone kept a red rose for her in her room.. She presumed it could be her parents.. She enjoyed her birthday with her friends.. On the graduation day Geet saw the same stranger from the club and got anxious.. Loved it.. Waiting for next.. Thanks for pm.

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Lovely scary update so geet felt someone in her room iam sure its maan only watching her her parents wished her bthday geet saw rose thought her dad left she fells always someone in her room she has crush on yash finally getting graduate going for diploma when she saw maan watching her though she tries to forget the incidence but seeing him watching her scares her geet doesn't know why he is here but she remembers his touch like marking her as his

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sonaly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Note

some readers has confusion that how Geet get graduate at age 18.
Friends it was Geet's school graduation party not college or university graduation party.
this story not a vampire or super natural power story.

"Maan ko Devil hone ke liye Vampire ya immortal hone ki zarurat hai kia?"

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sonaly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Part 3

"Geet"

Luckily I didn't see him after the ceremony. So I feel relax, my parents are going back and me and meera go for yash party. The party is great, now I can finally get chance to talk with yash. He serve drinks to me and I say hi to him.

"Geet right" he say.

He knows my name. I feel excited

"Yes Geet" I smile at him.

"Hiy take a dirnk"

"Thanks"

"Do you want some snacks?"

"No, thank you"

We chat some more time at random topics. We exchanged you number also. I so much happy.

"Hey geet. Do have any plans tomorrow?"

I shake my head, holding my breath.

"How about we go see a movie? " yash suggest. "After that we can have dinner at nearby restaurant. If don't mind,."

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Edited by sonaly1234 - 9 years ago

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

lovely chotu sa update so get is relieved maan or the starnger left yash talked with her and asjked her out she is so excited to go out with yash not knowing what the devil starnger will do to yash geet is all eaxcited for her date with yash they wen for movies later for dinner while coming back yash was abt to kiss geet when he fell down and from the looks of it maybe dead and geet got kidnapped we all know by whom

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sagorika93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

nice update...
yash n geet both like each other ...yash n geet date pe gaye ..n waha jb geet n yash kiss krne wale the tb kisine yash ko Mara n geet ko kidnap ki kya ? 😲 m sure woh maan hoga ...
thnx for the pm dear 😊
p.s. I will be offline for few days toh will comment once m back ..plz don't mind

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

hi thanks 4 da pm 4 Part 2! read Part 3 as well! superb update! Geet's celebrates her 18th bday with parents! she sees a rose on her bday and assumes its frm her dad! its her grad n she sees the stranger frm the club! she is scared! Yash asks Geet out! she is happy! she goes out wid Yash! Yash is attacked! Geet stunned! she is kidnapped! update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 9 years ago