Dark Shades of The Devil/Note---Page35/31 may 2016

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Kshitija

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

sounds interesting

very very interesting

nice buildup of the prologue

eager to read more

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Interesting
cont soon & pm me plz

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Monikaarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

interesting story ...wanna read more .
.update soon ...

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myrah shaikh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

nice concept
waiting for next

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gurtimuskaan

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very interesting prologue. waiting to read more

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sonaly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Part 1

"Geet"

I lazily open my eyes in the morning, when i open my eyes I see Meera in front of me.

Meera in front of me??!! In this time?? Early in the morning!!!

''Come on lazy pig it's nearly 6 we have go at 7:30''.

I look at her with confused face. Where we have to go? And this early morning. I finished my final exam in two days ago. So I don't have any tuition. Now what do I forgot??!! "In this hour where we have to go in this early morning??"

"OMG don't say that you didn't wake up in the morning. Eagry that our exam is over, but you sleep almost 18 hours?? Any anty let you! Why my parents are not that understanding. I wish I could be you or your sister.'' Meera says with crying face.

" we are sisters "

"Yes we are. But you didn't get it like genetically. That I could live with you and sleep almost 18 hours." Meera says. Wait I sleep 18 hours and mom didn't call me?? Oh I remember mom comes in the morning but I say I want to sleep. And then mom comes at lunch time to call me that moment I also say I want to sleep and she got angry and say with frustration that today she never going to call me or Wake me.

"Come on get up, we have to go." Meera say in hary.

"Where??"

"You forgot? How can you forgot? Today we are going to night club, disk. Even uncle-anty say yes and my mom dad too." She says with anger. Oh how can I forget. It's the best night club where we're going and above all Rahul is coming with us. Ok not only rahul but some good friends also. My chin of thought broken when meera's loud scrime went my ear. "Come on get up. Move your lezy bump and get ready. We have to go at 7:30. Go go go..."

I get ready quickly.

"What a shit. We are going night club Geet not Temple."

"Yes I know, but mom-dad know that we going girls night out not night club." I knew my parents are very open-minded but, not really open that they will give permission to me go night club. I not not even 18 now. My birthday is not another couple of week now. My parents are very understanding but parents are parents they always get worried easily and scold me if I do something wrong with their point of view.

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Sorry for mistakes...

Edited by sonaly1234 - 9 years ago

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dia1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

I like the concept. Love the story. Please continue soon.

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

A Fabulous Start

Geet will soon turn 18 years her exams are over and now she and Meera has gone

to a night club

at the club Geet sees Rahul and knows that he is the most handsome as all the girls want

to dance with him she wants a dance but feels thirsty and goes for a drink while been at the bar

a man approaches her ask her name and age and than very possessively touches her face

which in turn makes Geet scared and she ask Meera to take her home

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

lovely update! well written! Geet is gng 2 turn 18 soon! she n Meera go to a club! Geet has a fake ID! A man sees her n questions her! he touches her face! Geet freaks! she leaves as she is scared! update soon