MGFF: Deceitful Love Thread #1

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#561

Very painful

Young maan go through very tough time

Very well written

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jasika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#562

Amazing update

Waiting for next update

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kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#563

Wonderful update. Past is too painful. Brij and his wife spoiled Khurana family for their greed.

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vrinda22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#564

maans past was painful

no wonder he has turned rude n a killer

he only killed his parents murderers

that too when they tried to harm him

only for his property

the one he loved betrayed him for his wealth

he was shocked n went numb when he shot nakul

who was his everything

now maan is in pain thinking about his parents in same haveli

its geets words which has hurt him deep

n same time he is yet to realise he has some feelings for geet

n he couldnt see her with any other man

painful part

very well written

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namita25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#565

Maan seems to have fallen for Geet...he cannot see her with anybody else...though he hasn't realised it as of now...can't wait see what he is gonna do to make her his...

Maan's past is indeed painful...😭poor soul he really suffered a lot...😭Maan'a mamaji and mamai had been monsters...I really wonder how van anybody be so heartless...n OMG...they were planning to get him married when he was just 13...😲I am glad he got to know of their cruel intentions and he did absolutely the right thing by killing them...My heart went out for poor Dev...he too sufeered a lot coz of these creep people...😡😡

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#566

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific intense sad painful update! well written! Maan angry seeing Geet wid Jai! Maan is drunk! he goes 2 the haveli! Maan recalls the past! Disgusting Brij n his wife! 😡 so greedy! they wanted the Khurana property! they wanted Maan 2 marry Sona without hin knowing! Maan overheard n was livid! they killed his parents n hurt Dev! Maan defended himself bt Nakul was killed! Feeling 4 Maan! update soon, nice precap

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 9 years ago

#567

Maan has a painful past which is revealed now. He ddin't tell anyone what happened and has kept it all inside him all this while.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#568

Part 19 - Poor maan. How he trusted his mama-mami. He heard all dirty game played by brij & suman. They destroyed everything of his. Killed his parents, disabled dev in womb only. Dadi was traumatised and suffered all this all alone. What he did was justified and glad that he was underage and not punished to death. He was affected by geet's closeness to jai.

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nnc001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#569

tht WS really a shocking update
too much I must say 😭
maans pain ..brij his wife all ill doings 😡 ..maans feelings all written osmmlyy
maan faced soo much at tht tender age 😭
waiting for nxt

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#570

IMP: I have A paper Due in less than two weeks, so my full focus is right now on that.

However, I am putting the teaser up and I will update it as soon as I get some free time from my paper.

Till then Enjoy the teaser!

Teaser:

The constable gave Maan a filthy look and said "char-char(4) khoon kar ke tera man nahi bhara jo yehan bhi khoon kharaba kar raha hai tu" (isn't your heart satisfied after killing four people)

"par maine" Maan tried to say that it was all a lie, but the constable didn't listen to him and as a punishment said "aaj nahi tumhe din ka khana mile ga aur nahi raat ka. The judge sent kids like you here in DJJ so that you get a second chance to become a better person, but kids like you will never become a good person. You were, is and will always remain a criminal for forever" with that saying the constable held Maan by his collar and dragged him like a filthy rag threw him in the dark room and locked him up at the very end of DJJ.

"Acha tu, tu nahi karega. Theek hai then we will do it. Boys rip him off of his clothes and makes him stand nude" A very tall and masculine boy, who was the leader of the group said to the other boys...To save his modesty, Maan curled himself in a ball and cried his heart out, while the rest just stared some stood laughing at him, while some just stood watching the act.

Everywhere he looked, there were only hatred for him in their eyes. Even the constable and the officer started calling janwar, rakshak, khooni and that hurt him a lot.

All the harassing, all his pain, the rage, all his suffering, all the hunger was turning him into an unknown person that he himself was scared of. Something so strong was taking birth within him that it was getting out of control for him to ignore everything around him.

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