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Posted: 9 years ago
Ufff you killed me with this update
Such an amazing maaneet scene hot and intense
I really love when there are maaneet scene
Geet is right maan is a shetan
I like that jai saw the dance and maan saw geet and jay hug
Geet reaction is normal because maan is kissing her a lot lol so her outburst is very good
Can't wait for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
You are an amazing writer because whenever I read the update im like geet. I'm surprised and excited on how maan is going to act with geet
And every time you did it amazingly and unexpectedly
Your dialogues are also very powerful and the way you describe the scene im imagine maaneet doing it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 18 - Geet's outburst was justified. He had no right to act like as per his wish or force his wish on others. it was geet's fault too that she always let him affect her. jai saw all this and doubted on her, her love & his love. he was in fickle mind that maan will be better with her than him. how can he doubt on her. he should told her that he saw everything. and even geet should have told that what happened bet her & maan, at least, this way they can avoid mu bet them. And now maan saw this. He was already furious on her for her outburst. Now don't know what he will do now..?
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Posted: 9 years ago
I really wish after the prologue scene geet went to meet dadima to share her heartbroken and before seeing dadima she meets maan
I want her to cry into maan arms as maan will force her and pinn her to the wall lol
she should say today I dont want to fight and then hug him crying
I want that recomforting hug lol
Its just an idea I know what you are going to write would be very better as you are amazing
I just wish for a hug

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Posted: 9 years ago
IMP NOTE: I have got an emergency came up that needs my attention + because of it, I'm not able to nor am I feeling to write anything.
Plus, I have my MRI Tomorrow and all these things are taking a toll on my health, causing me to have a another headache attack 🤢 so not sure how long it will take to go away.
However, I will post the teaser. I do have the update ready, just need to reread and edit and add things if needed...which I will do it as soon as I am free from everything...till then Enjoy the teaser...

Family

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Crushed like ice

Like twenty tons have been thrown on my soul

You spoke those words that emitted through your vocal cords like venom

A snake you were

Looking through my eyes into my core

So delicately

You devised your plan to kill everything inside me

Skillfully, you weaved your web, planted your trap

And with your love decoy blindfolded my logic

All that was open was my trust

Your weapon

You deceived, I believed

Your arms were so warm,

Now the only warmth I feel

Is that of my blood

Spilling from my soul

As my life swings carelessly

Like a pendulum

Back and forth

Higher and higher

But going nowhere

The five senses have gone numb

I scream louder and louder

But no one hears me

They speak, they call out to help

I cannot hear

Look at me, look at the nothingness you have brought onto me

The well hath run dry

As he lay

Crippled from love's fangs

Until nothing remains

Credit: Andrea Y. Gallego

Original Poem: http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/loved-and-lost

Just Changed "As She lay" to "As he lay" to go along the story, and also deleted the last 6 lines of the poem to go with the poem
Edited by CrazzyBusy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
interesting teaser ...can't wait for next ..
dear don't worry about the update we can wait ...u tc of urself 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous teaser.
Take care of your health first and than update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
will be waiting
take care of ur health ...be well soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting Teaser
It must be Maan's feelings
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da note - all the best! Will wait! TC! interesting teaser! update wen u can

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