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WOW!! wonderful update dear...loved it
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Stupid maan...seedha confess kyu nhi vkarta
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Thank you! Same to you!
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Nice part...thanks for the PM
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Superb update...👏 👏 👏
Geet was confused by maan's actions..😕
In frustration she said to maan "koi haq nhi bnta'...😒
Maan desided to give her some space so he left for kolkatta...😔
Continue soon...
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PART 6. TERI YAAD HUMSAFAR SUBAH SHAAM!

In daze, Geet walked towards her room where she entered the shower and stood under it. One single tear dropped from her eyes and then another one and then another one. Slowly tears flowed through her cheeks and sobs wracked her body. Maan had left! After she told him that he had no right on her, he left! He simply left! She continued to sob as pain wrenched her heart and soul!

An hour later, Geet walked out of the bathroom wiping her eyes and her hair. Her mind was blanked out and she walked out in daze. As she entered their room, her eyes fell on a shirt neatly pressed and folded on a nearby table. It was Maan's! She went closer and touched it softly imagining Maan wearing it. She lifted it and hugged it. Just then her tears started flowing again. She had thought she had cried enough in the shower but now it seemed her tears had not yet dried.

As Geet sobbed, she hugged the shirt and went to sit on her bed. Why? Maan's voice taunted her in her head. Why are you crying? "Kyunki aap chale gaye!", Geet spoke out loud. Just then Maan appeared in front of her and she froze. It was clearly her imagination yet her eyes feasted on him and she refused to look away.

"Main chala gaya toh tumhein kya? Tum toh keh rahi thi ki mera tumpe koi haq nahi? Toh ab kyun ro rahi ho?", Maan spoke and vanished. Geet blinked. Sahi toh hai! Main kyun ro rahi hun? Maine toh kahaa tha mujhpar unka koi haq nahi! Toh phir main kyun aaj haq jata rahi hun?

"Kyunki", a soft voice spoke and Geet turned towards the bed. She was shocked to see herself sitting in the middle of the bed in her bridal wear looking a typical dulhan waiting for her husband. Geet realised this was how she must have looked the night she got married to Maan.

The dulhan looked at Geet and spoke, "Kyunki main apna haq chaahti thi! Main chaahti thi ki Maan mujhse kahe ki unka mujhpar poora haq hai kyunki woh mujhse pyaar karte hain! Haina?" The bridal Geet vanished and Geet threw herself on the bed and sobbed her heart out. Haan! Main yahi chaahti thi! Main chaahti thi ki Maan mujhpar apna haq jataayein! Mujhse kahein ki woh mujhse pyaar karte hain! Kya maine kuch galat chaaha? Main unki patni hun aur unse pyaar karti hun! Kya ek patni ka apne pati se unka pyaar ki ummeed karna galat hai? Geet continued to sob.

Days passed and then weeks and Geet slowly wilted down. The once cheery Geet started to look depressive. Dark circles highlighted her eyes and her skin seemed to pale and pale more. She lost weight and did not sleep well. The family members saw the change in Geet but simply thought that Geet was missing her husband and would be back to normal once Maan came back. They tried to keep her fed but other than that they could not do much for her.

But Geet being sad because of Maan being gone was just one of the reasons. She was sad also because in all these days Maan did not call her once. He talked to Daadima daily and even to Dev when he wanted to talk about business but never to Geet. Whenever Daadima said she would call for Geet to talk to him, Maan would refuse the idea citing he will talk to her at night. The family thought they must have spoken at night daily and hence did not force Maan to speak with Geet. But Geet was heartbroken because Maan never called at night. Maan was not speaking to her at all!

As the days passed away, Geet one day realised that this was the life she would have once she divorced Maan. The thought of not seeing or hearing Maan for a lifetime seemed horrifying to Geet. If the last few days were this painful, how will she live without him for her whole life?

While the separation left external impact on Geet, to an outsider Maan looked normal. But that was only to an outsider. If his family had been there, they would have noticed that Maan did not eat as much as he did at home. And Maan's exercise also suffered as he was filled with distractions and unable to focus on his practice. The only thing flourishing was his work life. The separation left him with sleepless nights as he speculated whether giving Geet space was the right decision or not. So to avoid sleepless nights he threw himself into the conference, tiring himself up enough that he could fall asleep right away and not be tortured by his thoughts. But even then he did not have good sleep some days as nightmares came in form of him going home and finding that in his absence Geet left him forever. And that is why he never tried to talk to Geet on phone. Because every time he feared that his nightmare might come true and Geet would tell him on the phone that she was leaving him. Thanks to that fear he avoided talking to Geet at all.

As days passed and the day of Maan's arrival came closer, Geet started to become jittery. The excitement of seeing Maan filled her mind and she became prone to accidents. One day she was about to put her hand in burning oil and only NT's quick thinking saved her. And then one day, she put salt in the tea for Dev instead of sugar. After few such incidents, Daadima banned her from kitchen till Maan came back. Daadima of course, did not leave the chance to tease her bahu about missing her husband so much that she did so many mistakes. Geet would run away after hearing Daadima's teasing, but not because she was feeling shy but because it reminded her that she had told him that he had no right on her before he left.

Soon the day of Maan's arrival came and everyone noticed how nervous Geet looked. But no one commented and they let her be. Morning turned to afternoon and afternoon turned to evening but there was no sight of Maan. In the evening, a call came. It was Maan calling. It was the month of baisakh and in Kolkata that brought storms of Kalbaisakh. And one such storm hit the day Maan was to catch the flight and not only his flight was cancelled but even the cell signal went weak. And hence, he could not call them sooner. And he did not know when he could come back as the storm was bad and he did not know when the flight service and train service would start again. As Daadima kept the phone and told the family what happened, Geet turned around and ran back into her room. She locked herself and started to cry.

Hey Babaji! Maan ko jald se jald ghar bhej do! Main unhein dekhe baghair aur nahi reh sakti! Main unke baghair ek saans bhi nahi le sakti! Maan! Ghar waapis aa jaao! Geet prayed as she sobbed.

The night passed and the next day came. And with it came another day for Geet without Maan. She sat on the window of her room watching the morning turn into noon and noon into evening. She only left the room to eat and rest of the time she remained cooped in her room, too lost without Maan to think of anything else. Agar chaar hafte mein meri aisi haalat hai toh Maan ke baghair zindagi bhar kaise rahungi? The question haunted her for the hundredth time. For days she pondered how she would handle the remaining life without Maan and she had yet to find a solution. As the sun started to set, Geet gave up. She gave up searching for solutions. She gave up her quest for freedom. And she made her decision. I cannot live without Maan for rest of my life. I don't care whether he loves me or not. I don't care whether he is mine or not. I don't care! All I want is for Maan to remain in my life. I cannot live my life without him. I cannot!

Geet remembered how months before her wedding, when her rishta got finalized with Maan, Maan had stormed away in anger. Us din jab Maan mujhse shaadi karne ki baat par Daadima se naaraaz hue the, maine usi din faisla kiya tha ki main yeh shaadi nibhaaungi! Bhale hi Maan mujhse pyaar na kare, main unke saath rahungi kyunki main unse pyaar karti hun! Uss waqt toh maine keh diya lekin uss waqt mujhe nahi pata tha ki aise rishte ko nibhaana kitna mushkil hai! Isliye shaadi ki raat main aur seh nahi paayi aur maine rishta todne ka faisla kiya! Lekin iss baar main apne aankhen khuli rakh ke yeh faisla le rahi hun!

Geet wiped her eyes. Rishta pakka hone waale din main nahi jaanti thi ki ek tarfa pyaar kitna dard deta hai! Aur shaadi ki raat jab dard saha toh main darr gayi aur maine unse alag hone ka faisla liya! Lekin ab jaana ki unse alag hone mein kitna dard hai toh sochti hun ki iss dard se kam dard bhara hai ek tarfa pyaar ka dard! Unse alag rehne se achcha hai, ek tarfa pyaar mein rahun! Aur ab toh ummeed bhi hai, ki shaayad woh bhi mujhse pyaar karne lage! Haan! Main iss ummeed ke sahaare poori zindagi jee lungi lekin unse alag nahi reh paaungi!

As Geet made her decision, she stared at Maan's photo on the mantel. As she looked at him, she softly started singing.

Meri Saanson Mein Basa Hai

Tera Hi Ek Naam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

She got up from her seat and went to the mantel. She lifted the photo and looked at Maan. Maan! Ghar waapis aajaao! Main aapko bahut miss kar rahi hun!

Tu Mere Din Mein Raaton Mein

Khamoshi Mein Baaton Mein

Baadal Ke Haathon Main Bhejun

Tujhko Yeh Payaam

She hugged his photo as tears fell down her eyes.

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

Meri Saanson Mein Basa Hai

Tera Hi Ek Naam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

Geet went to the window and sat on the ledge again. She placed his photo in front of her and stared at his face.

Gham Ki Hai

Ek Badli Chhaayi

Dil Deke

Maine Hai Paayi

She wiped her eyes but tears continued to flow.

Veeraani

Si Veeraani

Tanhaai

Si Tanhaai

She smiled at him through her tears.

Aankhen Bheege Dil Jale

Mile Yeh Chaahat Ke Sile

Lekin Tujhse Hai Mujhe

Na Koi Shikwe Na Gile

Mar Jaaun Toh

Bhi Na Lagaaun

Koi Tujhpe Ilzaam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

Daadima called Geet down and Geet went running to meet her, the photo frame with Maan's photo still in her hand. Just as she reached the ground floor, Daadima smiled at her and informed her that Maan had caught the flight and would be arriving home soon! Geet felt her heart thud fast. Maan was coming! Maan was coming home!

Hours passed and with that Geet's excitement and nervousness increased too. Her Maan was coming home! She would have a look at him after 4 weeks! It was time for dinner but Geet refused to eat without her husband. She walked in the garden, her eyes stuck on the main gate waiting for Maan's car to enter. Maan! Kahaan ho aap? As she walked, she looked into the photo frame that she refused to put down since the evening.

Meri Saanson Mein Basa Hai

Tera Hi Ek Naam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

She started singing again, her eyes eager to look at her Maan. She looked at his photo with longing.

Tere Bin

Kyon Na Ghamgeen Hun

Bin Tere

Kuch Bhi Toh Nahi Hun

As she walked, she wondered what she would do when she came face to face with her Maan.

Tere Bin

Main Tanha Jahaan Thi

Bin Tere

Phir Aaj Wahin Hun

She heard a car's noise and looked up but when she saw it was just a car passing by, she sighed in defeat.

Soone Soone Raaste

Hain Sabhi Mere Vaaste

Bojhal Bojhal Dhadkanein

Mere Yeh Gham Ke Din Ginein

Ab Aankhen Gham Ke Pyaale Hain

Pehle The Yeh Jaam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

Teri Yaad Humsafar Subah Shaam

Just then a car's horn blared and Geet looked up with hope. It was Maan's car! Geet grinned with excitement as she started to walk towards him. Maan stepped out of the car and the driver pulled out the luggage. Maan froze when he saw Geet walking towards him. The driver walked by with the luggage towards the mansion but neither Maan nor Geet noticed him. Geet continued to walk towards Maan looking at him as if she could not believe he was here! Maan also could not move because he was seeing her for the first time in four weeks and did not want to move for the fear of her turning out to be a mirage. As she came closer, she realised it was really him and she started to run towards him. The photo frame fell from her hand but she did not care. The photo was nothing but a pale imitation of her Maan and she would rather be with the real one than sit and cry with the photo version.

Maan watched with wide eyes as Geet reached him and flung herself into his arms. Maan's hand moved to hug her out of reflex as he remained shocked at her embrace. But the moment he came out of the shock, he tightened his grip on her. As Geet hugged him, all she could think was that her Maan was back! And as he hugged Geet, Maan was still unable to believe that the woman who told him that he had no right on her was suddenly eager to be in his arms!

They remained in each other's arms till they were interrupted.

"Geet beta! Humein bhi apne pote se milne do! Aur kitni der gale lagaaogi?", Daadima's teasing voice came from behind and Geet took in a sharp breath. Her reality came crashing down on her. Hey Babaji! Jaane se pehle maine kahaan tha ki unka mujhpar haq nahi aur aaj unhein gale laga rahi hun! Kitne confuse honge woh meri harqaton se! Main bhi na, Babaji, Jhalli hun! She pulled away and looked down as Daadima hugged Maan. Just then NT piped up, "Geet! Itne der tak gale lagaaya! Kuch toh sharam karo! Saara romance abhi khatam nahi karna tha! Kuch bedroom ke liye bhi bachaana tha!" NT teased Geet and Geet felt her face burn at NT's comment. Unable to handle the embarrassment, she turned around and ran towards the Mansion.

"Sharma gayi!", Daadima commented as Dev hugged his brother. As everyone turned towards the house, Maan's eyes fell on something shiny. He frowned. Geet ke haath se bhaagte waqt kuch gir gaya tha! Lekin kya tha? Kahin kuch keemti toh nahi? He walked towards the thing and lifted it up. As he lifted it, he blinked in surprise. It was his photo! Geet was looking at his photo! A smile snuck on his lips and soon the smile turned into grin. She did miss me! Geet missed me! Maan could not believe it and let out a surprised laugh, feeling happy after a long time! My plan worked! My plan of giving Geet some space worked! She is falling for me again! Yes! With a grin on his face, Maan walked towards the house.

Hello people,

Hope you liked this update!

The song is from Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya (1988) and this version is sung by Alka Yagnik. There is happier version too sung by Udit Narayan!

Next up, a sweet dance romance as Maan launches his next plan!

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet missing Maan and she does feel sad
she is sad that she told he has no rights on her
she is sad because he never spoke to her
she is sad because she cannot live without him
and Maan too is sad and has fear of losing Geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow, I loved this update... maaneet were missing each other so much.. geet decided not to divorce maan.. yay maan's plan did work n the song was so heart touching giving away her feelings n her wait for maan.. loved their tight wala hug reminded me of ghsp when maan comes back from Chandigarh n geet's dupatta catches fire

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