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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Part- 8
Soni: kaisa laga ladka
Geet: achha hai.
Maan ke geet se baat karne ke baad maan ,Mohan or dau ji thodi or der geet ke yaha rukte hai ot jaate time dau ji geet ko shagun ke paise dete hai.
Ye dekhkar sab khus hote hai.
Rano bahot hi khusi se geet ke sir pe hath rakhti hai or kahti hai; pahli baar meri beti ko shagun ke paise mile hai,aaj mein bahot khus hu.Rano ki aankho mein khusi ke aansu aa jate hai.
Soni khusi se geet se kahti hai:ab to ho gayi pakki baat samjho.
Maan ke gharwale jawab ghar jakar denge kah ke chale jate hai.
Geet ke ghar mein sab log khus hote hai.
On whatsup chat
Reet; gaye ladke wale
Geet; ha gaye
Reet; ladka kaisa tha , kya baat huyi.
Geet; achha hai, phir geet jo bhi Maan se baat huyi sari baate reet ko bata deti hai.
Reet; positive lag raha hai.ab jawab or aa jaye.

After two days
Geet bas har time Maan se ki baato ko yaad karti hai.wo sochti hai pahle kitne ladke aaye , unse baat bhi huyi ,par meine aise kabhi baar baar unke baare mein nahi socha.pahli baar kuch alag sa or achha sa lag raha hai.

Thodi der baad
Rano: abhi tak jawab nahi aaya, Agar rishta pasand hota to ab tak answer aa jata.
Brij: pata nahi, yaha to aisa kuch nahi lag raha tha.
Brij Mohan ko 6-7 baar phone karta hai wo phone nahi uthata.
Phir Brij dau ji ko phone milata hai wo bhi nahi uthate.
Brij; wo log phone nahi utha rahe.
Rano; kya ho gaya jo wo humara phone nahi utha rahe na hi unhone koi phone kiya.baat bante bante ab ye kya ho raha hai.
Rano Sunder (mamaji) se baat karti hai to wo kahte hai hum phone karke dekhte hai ladke ke papaji ko.
Par thodi der baad Sunder batata hai ki wo log unka bhi phone nahi utha rahe.
Brij; ye log ajeeb hai agar mana karna hai to kar de. Kam se kam bataye to sahi.
Thodi der baad Sunder phir phone karke batata hai ki wo log mana kar rahe hai ladke ko ladki pasand nahi aayi. Sunder kahta koi nahi hum or dhundh rahe hai tension na lo.
Rano bahot dukhi hoti hai
Rano; itna achha ladka tha ab yaha se bhi mana ho gayi,pata nahi kya hai iski kismat mein.pahle hi ye mana kar deti hai, isliye phir baad mein baat nahi banti.
Soni; koi nahi aap pareshan mat hoyiye, koi or dekh lenge.

Geet jab ye sab sunti hai to usse kuch samajh nahi aata.ek ajeeb sa pain hota hai jis se wo anjaan hai.geet jab bhi kabhi dukhi hoti hai ya tension mein hoti hai to wo reet ya preet se baat karti hai. Isliye wo tabhi whatapp pe reet se baat karti hai or usse sab batati hai.tab reet usse samjhatii hai koi nahi ab kya kar sakte hai.tere liye best rishta aayega.geet uss time samajh jati hai.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Part-9
Rishta cancel to ho gaya par ye baat koi samajh nahi pa raha tha ki jab sab kuch thik tha to achanak kya hua.isliye soni apne papa se kahti hai ki aap jakar Maan ki bahan se pucho ki asli baat kya hai.
Soni' papa: hello
Soni: ha papa ji baat huyi uski bahan se.
Soni's papa: ha ,usne kaha ki jyada badi hai.gap 7 saal ka hai.
Soni in amazement;kya ye kaise kah sakte hai, mana karna hai to kar de par ye kahna ki ladki 7 year badi hai galat hai.thik hai papaji mein baad mein baat karti hu.

Soni ghar mein batati hai ki ladke wale kah rahe hai ki ladki 7 saal badi hai.
Rano; ye kya kah rahe hai wo.itni badi thodi na hai geet.
Geet tune use kya bataya hai.
Geet:ma meine bataya na aapko ki usne date of birth puchi thi meine use wahi batayi bas ye hai ki jo document mein hai wo batayi. Jo sahi hai wo batana bhul gayi baato mein .par meine bola tha na ki 1 year jyada likhi hai.
Par phir bhi uske hisab se bhi 7 year badi nahi hu.unhone aisa kyu bola
Rano;ladke ne hi to bola hoga nahi to wo bol sakte hai.
Soni tu baat kar ladke se ki aapse kisne kaha ladki itni badi hai.
Soni : ji mummy ji, soni Maan ko phone milati hai.
Maan; hello
Soni; ji namaste ,mein geet ki bhabhi bol rahi hu.
Maan: namaste,ji boliye.
Soni: ji aap log phone nahi utha rahe the to mere papaji apki bahan ke ghar gaye the.or unhone kaha ki ladki 7 saal badi hai isliye rishta mana kiya.
Maan:ji dekhiye mujhe nahi pata jaha mere parents karenge mein waha karunga.meine to unhe sirf ye kaha tha ki ladki itne saal badi.aapki marji aap kahenge to mein kar lunga.
Soni;ji hum kab kah rahe hai ki aap unki marji ke khilaf karo .par jab aap dekhne aaye the to kuch to aapki pasand na pasand bhi hogi.phir didi itni badi to nahi jitni aapne kahi.kam se kam aapko aise to nahi kahna tha.
Maan:ji ye sab mujhe nahi pata.mujhe koi problem nahi agar mere parents yaha kahege to mein kar lunga.
Soni: thik hai ji.
Phir phone rakh dete hai.
Soni;wo to ye bol raha hai ki mere parents jaha karenge waha karunga.mujhe yaha shadi se koi prblm nahi.
Rano;ye to badi ajeeb baat hai.
Pahle kahte hai umar se prblm nahi ab umar jyada hai.phir kahta hai mein tayyar hu.samajh hi nahi aa raha kya pareshani hai.
Ab to koi or dekho aaj kahti hu Sunder se.

Par Inn sab baato se geet ko bahot dukh hota hai, wo sochti hai phir wahi sab huya.mein pahle hi kah rahi thi par koi nahi mana , mujhse ha karwa lete hai .phir wahi mana ho jati hai.kyu bhagwan kyu kar rahe ho mere sath aisa.
Geet reet se baat karti hai.
Reet;ye ladka hi ajeeb tha tu tension na le.pahle kyu kaha mujhe prblm nahi.ye apne parents ke upar daal raha hai use khud hi nahi karni.
Geet; wo aisa nahi lag raha tha.uski baate bhi alag thi.sabko pasand tha.
Reet; hmm, tujhe ye pasand tha na.
Geet: ha , achha ladka hai isliye, Understanding laga.uski baate achhi thi.
Reet: ok ,chal thik hai , tere liye isse bhi achha aayega.bye
Geet: bye

Phir geet ke ghar wale Geet ke liye or rishte dekhte hai.par geet ki mummy ko Maan bahot pasand tha isliye wo uske baare mein bich bich mein baat karti rahti hai.geet ke dil mein Maan ki baato ka asar pahle hi tha or phir ye baate uske dil mein or jagah banate hi ja rahe the.wo chah kar bhi use apne dimag se nahi nikal pa rahi thi.
Wo khud bhi nahi samajh pa rahi thi ki wo kyu uski baato ko yaad karti hai.geet bhabhi ke mobile se Maan ka no le leti hai.

Teaser
Geet; kya aap mere friend banoge. Only friend, na isse jyada or na isse kam.
Maan:par hum friend kaise bann sakte hai.
Geet: kyu, mein badi hu isliye nahi ban sakte.
Maan; mera wo matlab nahi means humara residence itni dur hai, hum milenge kaise.
Geet : mujhe milna nahi hai, bas aise hi whatsup or phone se baat karni hai. Aise friend.
Maan: ok, I m ready.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#990099">Both Updates Are Simply Fantastic</font>

<font color="#990099">So Finally Maan talks with Geet </font>

<font color="#990099">I really liked the fact that he did not make an issue about her age</font>

<font color="#990099">but now the precap is scary why they not answering</font>

<font color="#990099">Brij call have they also decided that Geet is too old to marry Maan </font>

<font color="#990099">waiting for next updates</font>


Thanks for ur lovely comment😊
Yes right now he have no issue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#990099">Teasers are Interesting </font>

<font color="#990099">the choice of the 3 names ...all sounds good😆</font>

nahi ye three name nahi hai
"Kaash tum mere hote
Saans hi ruk jati
Agar ye lafz tere hote."
Ye pura naam hai iss ff ka 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: crazy-dd-fan

Nice teaser...
maaneet become friend...

waiting fr d update...


Thanks dear for ur comment
Ya soon maaneet become friends
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: kabslocks

I have just came across this story. Now I will start reading it. Don't loose heart. It takes a little time for any writer to attract readers. Keep writing. I will comment after reading updates.

Thanks dear for ur lovely comment 😊
Ok I will write
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Im sorry yaar but its too much hindi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Nice update
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thodi allg story hai geet maan se 5y badi hai
maan ko koi problem nahi woh bas apni family
ki passand se shaadi karna chahta hai geet
usse friendship offer karti hai woh accept kar
leta hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Fabulous story. A very common problem of our society. If a boy is more than ten years elder, it is ok. But if a girl is even a few years elder, it is an issue. Geet is 30 and well educated and doing job. Maan is 25 and only a graduate. As far according to story I feel Geet is strong in her thinking and decisions. She did not hide about her age from Maan. But Maan is weak in taking decisions. He is either not able to decide or hiding in the name of parents.
Waiting for next update.

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