ff(kaash tum mere hote-shtj-aylth!) update 48 page 138 - Page 6

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Hello friends
Mujhe ye lagta hai ki ye story kisi ko bhi pasand nahi aa rahi hai.aap log bore ho rahe hai is story se. Or iska ek reason ye bhi ho sakta hai ki ye English mein nahi hai to bhi ise kam hi log pasand kar rahe hai.
Meine koshish ki English mein likhne ki par English mein likhne ki wajah se kahi mein main story se na Bhatak jayu kyunki English itni achhi nahi meri.ye story thodi alag hai.Or abhi to suruwat huyi hai.abhi kayi mod aane baki hai. par ab to ye lagta hai mujhe ki ye story padhne mein koi interested nahi.
Agar aisa hai to plz mujhe batao mein ise nahi likhti. Mein janti hu mein bahot achhi writer nahi , meine to koshish ki thi. Or mujhe bahot like or bahot se comments nahi chahiye par itna to ho ki mujhe lage ki aap ise padhna chahte hai. Ye story mere dill ko chuyi to socha aap sabse share karu maaneet ke jariye.

Thanks jinhone isse like kiya or mujhe encourage kiya.

Nice story, why was geet not married until now

Originally posted by: maneetarsh

Nice story, why was geet not married until now

Thanks dear for ur comment
Bcz everytime when her parents search her rishta, something goes wrong like dowry problm, . 4 saal se uske papa or chacha ji ki bimari fir unki death mein lage rahe. Kabhi ladka educated hi nahi hota. Something like that.
Now age prblm

Awesome update...
finally maaneet meet each other...
maan has no problem with geet age...
interesting precape...
eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...
pls continue soon...

Originally posted by: crazy-dd-fan

Awesome update...
finally maaneet meet each other...
maan has no problem with geet age...
interesting precape...
eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...
pls continue soon...

Thanks 😊
Yes right now Maan has no problem with geet age.

Teaser 1
Geet; kya aap mere friend banoge. Only friend, na isse jyada or na isse kam.
Maan:par hum friend kaise bann sakte hai.
Geet: kyu, meinbadi hu isliye nahi ban sakte.
Maan; mera wo matlab nahi means humara residence itni dur hai, hum milenge kaise.
Geet : mujhe milna nahi hai, bas aise hi whatsup or phone se baat karni hai. Aise friend.
Maan: ok, I m ready.


Teaser 2
Maan: aapne jo kiya hai na mere liye wo koi nahi karta.
Geet: meine kuch nahi kiya.
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...
Maan: ye baat Maan lo plz aapne bahot kuch kiya hai.
Geet: ok aap kahte hai to maan leti hu.

Ye teaser abhi kuch or parts ke baad aayegi,par story mein kya change aayega ye andaza ho jayega.

Note; guys mein iss ff ka naam change kar rahi hu kyunki ek to pahle hi uss naam se story hai.
Or jo naam meine ab decide kiya hai wo iss story ko jyada suit karta hai.
Ab iss ff ka naam hai
'' kaash tum mere hote,
Saans hi tham jati,
Agar ye lafz tere hote!"

Both Updates Are Simply Fantastic

Teasers are Interesting

Nice teaser...
maaneet become friend...

waiting fr d update...

I have just came across this story. Now I will start reading it. Don't loose heart. It takes a little time for any writer to attract readers. Keep writing. I will comment after reading updates.