The Princess and the Pauper (2) Ch 12, pg 123, new thread pg 1 **** - Page 23

Nice teaser...

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Lovely update and teaser! I loved these few lines written by you Avi,

Fabulous Teaser!!
You have wonderfully crafted the zituation which showcases both their pains. The second Geet had taken the ointment to apply, Maan must have undergone a catastrophical self-castigation and his heart must have questioned his worth for the angel standing infront of him.

His act of throwing away the ointment seemed so poignant, he is unable to accept any sort of respite. I believe that this will strengthen his determination to fill happiness in her life.

Oops!! I think its Pinky who intervened causing Geet to withdraw. And now Geet is under the impression that he pities her. Tough times ahead, Khurana. (*Rubbing my hands with glee of excitement. I admit that I am a bit of a sadist*)

Loved Dadi. She is gonna bring the hidden sherni out of Geet. And another speedbreaker for Maan. She put him in the friend's category. Ab toh gaye Maan babu. Kaise pyaar prove karoge??

But it is really sad to see that Maan's harshness has broken her self-esteem to such a level where she blames herself constantly for every wrong in the world. I know that the major fault was of Brij and Pammi but Maan put the last straw.
How is he going to mend her heart, from where does he start?? Right now, he is even unaware about the extent of the damage to her self worth.

And dear please let him suffer. No need to hurry with the romance. Her love has been tempered with the fire of suffering and his love has to be passed through those fires to shine like stars which will brighten up the dark recesses of her heart.

Beautiful teaser
Geet epitome of innocence
Maan guilty
And
Dadima bent on teaching geet a lesson of dignity,
And we
Love your originality
Fan of your slyle and creativity
Always want whatever you want to write
As that is what we love

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Awesome update
After geet left maan back to his sense ( wowww badi jaldi aagaya grrr rulaa diya bewazhaa geet ko ) am amazed
his dahiye kilo ki sensibility is in working position on top his all angers cholesterol in under control ????? Ohh my my his self talk
" Her eyes never lied to him.( mubarak ho without Mentos dimag ki batti jal uthi )
It was still obvious that she loved him.
There had to be some other reason then for her not coming to him.( oh dimag in working mode mein aagaya yupii )
Wo sab baad mein sochna Maan, first find her. Wo ro rahi hai! ( chalo ji Banda k Dil or Dimag dono ne he kaam karna shuru kar diya hai Hushhh Msk back to his true self I mean geet ka maan self )...

And pinky entry did wonder , she is a doctor n tell her observation to maan n her revelation make maan world ups n down
now he know something is terribly wrong with geet !!!
he came in search of geet where he found she left HM then he went to HP to search her and met with little Angel
aww se is so cute ... here he got to know how much geet suffered those years n his geet was tied up n caged !!
now no one save that monster brij n that ugly bhudhi from maan's worth ...
Husshhh Finally maan comes know about geet's horrible past and makes him guilty n miserable to thinks how much his geet endorsed in past 4 year , even he behave like a monster n now he is guilty for his behavior n how wrong he thought about her and doubted her love for him that's the worst part ...

Here geet is so heart broken and her faint on love shattered so badly she left HM n She
decided to move to in her own mothers foundation along with mohindar ...
Feel bad for maaneet both are paying for the doing of that good for nothing mohinder In all his so called money minded attitude
he hurt Maan and left geet to suffer in the hands of his cunning monster relatives grrr ...

Part-6
Heart wrenching painful update
Essshhh Sadda Maaannn in intense angry action mode always makes me jittery thuddd he has beat up that disgusting jerk brij like anything .. He is furious with those horrible creatures n they got what they deserve n love the way he threatened that chudail ke baad agar ye haath Angel pe ya Geet pe uthaya toh main
yeh bhool jaauga ke tum ek aurat ho. Haath ukhad ke phek duga. Now GET OUT!" wooowww (Banda Toh Full Form Mein Chal Raha Hai ) !! here Angel is so happy bcoz her n our supermaaannn work the epic moment Angel ne bowl pakra diya uss chudail ko best tha wo scene hilarious n deserving !!!
Now Angel is with maan Angel toh pat gaye ab dekhte apne princess ko kayse mannata hai heyyeee dreamy dreamy
moments abhi se imagen karne laage hu ...

Here comes our rock star savitridevi khurana what an entry bravo and thanks for dadimaa's thundring entry Avi muaahhh !!!
Dadimaa know about geet and thought to take matter into her hands and takes the foundation responsibility and very smartly
did the necessary arrangements and her much needed thundering face of with mohindar n love the way
she comfort told him stop pitting himself and try to get well soon coz of his doing her baby's suffer a
lots still they are suffering , now enough is enough it's high time to mend his deeds she nailed it !!
Dadimaa was so hurt knowing about geet and after knowing about maan deed gets more angry on maan
and she told him her decision that geet would stay with her but she outright refused to make him to meet her
till geet want ...

Omg Geet's plight literally shaken up me she faced everything bravely but at the end of the day her all pain hurt
come out unconsciously and that god for nothing mohinder getting worst punishment for his sins n living in his own
hell helplessly n crying seeing his daughter's condition and was cursing himself !! And most touchy moments when she said

"Mujhe pata hai. Ye bed comfortable nahi hai, hai na. Mujhe pata hai, aap ke ghar mein aap ko
best beds mein sone ki aadat hai. Par dekhna Papa, I have a job now. Main aapke liye Delhi ki sab
se acchi bed le aaugi. Rona mat Papa. Geet hai na. Main beti hu toh kya hua. Aap dekhna, main
bete se bhi behtar aap ka khayal rakhugi". That's Show Geet's True Selfless innocent love amazing !! Have to admit sometimes you literally write something which makes me always amazed how did you manage write something really touch n left me in speechless. !! Ohh you literally makes me teary !! And definitely im gonna remember this scene always n yup one of my most
favorites scene too ...

Originally posted by: pearl.white

Fabulous Teaser!!
You have wonderfully crafted the zituation which showcases both their pains. The second Geet had taken the ointment to apply, Maan must have undergone a catastrophical self-castigation and his heart must have questioned his worth for the angel standing infront of him.

His act of throwing away the ointment seemed so poignant, he is unable to accept any sort of respite. I believe that this will strengthen his determination to fill happiness in her life.

Oops!! I think its Pinky who intervened causing Geet to withdraw. And now Geet is under the impression that he pities her. Tough times ahead, Khurana. (*Rubbing my hands with glee of excitement. I admit that I am a bit of a sadist*)

Loved Dadi. She is gonna bring the hidden sherni out of Geet. And another speedbreaker for Maan. She put him in the friend's category. Ab toh gaye Maan babu. Kaise pyaar prove karoge??

But it is really sad to see that Maan's harshness has broken her self-esteem to such a level where she blames herself constantly for every wrong in the world. I know that the major fault was of Brij and Pammi but Maan put the last straw.
How is he going to mend her heart, from where does he start?? Right now, he is even unaware about the extent of the damage to her self worth.

And dear please let him suffer. No need to hurry with the romance. Her love has been tempered with the fire of suffering and his love has to be passed through those fires to shine like stars which will brighten up the dark recesses of her heart.

Pearl🤗

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Pearl🤗

you so make me want to write 😃

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Hi Happy Belated Thanksgiving.
Very nice update loved the way both feel the pain for each other Maan cannot even imagine Diwali without her now and she a true grihalaxmi doing the puja was like solace to his heart and soul.
So sweet of dadima to buy the factory for her bahu, and bringing her to the house. Hope Maan and Geet sought out their hearts desire soon and come through get her forever:)))
Thnx