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Posted: 8 years ago
awesum update
loved geet n ayush bond
loved maaneet moments
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It was a stuffy sunday afternoon and Geet and Maan are sitting in the apartment, bored.

While Maan has lied down on the bed, his arm covering his face, Geet sat there, her ridiculously long hair tied into a bun, her knees pulled to her chest, in the loveseat, in the bedroom, to save herself from the otherwise humid rooms. Thank god for the AC.

"So, what's up?" she ventures slowly.

He looks startled that he removes his arm and stares at her They were but the characters spun by a master writer Commelina, and all they could do was be suspended in air, until the writer comes to pick up from where she had left them off.

It was hence, Maan's doubts were justified.

"Are you sure we can continue with the conversation?" he asks

"Who said we can't?" asks young Geet "Plus I get bored sitting here moping all day, and cooking and getting depressed. The last time I was suspended after a chapter was in a rainy day, in the middle of nowhere. Do you know how sick i got?"

"Wow. You sure talk a lot. How does the writer put up with you?"

"The same way she would put up with your condescension" she shot back.

"If we are going to continue the conversation in this tone, I think it should work. We won't be toeing any line and still stick to our characters"

"How intelligent of you! Do you want a yellow legal pad to write to-do and what not to do list for this conversation?"

Despite his usual mood, he laughed. "You're catching up on sarcasm. I like it"

"You don't seem to like it very much in the story"

"You are giving me serious competition. You know that is my thing. How can i not feel insecure"

It was her turn to laugh.

"Why aren't you like this always?" she asks "Sometimes you get to me. I feel like punching the guts out of you"

"And what about the other times?"

She remained silent. "What about the other times? Nothing and why are you flirting with me? Aren't you supposed to be in your character?"

"Wow getting flustered and all. Classic Geet. Good to know we agree on one thing at least. Staying in character. I am going to sleep. You can stop sitting like that and sleep yourself. The wait might be longer" he said and yawning, fell asleep.


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Posted: 8 years ago
Might possible maan past related to geet as well looking Farward to read more geet net accident maan save her then their love boom 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: annieanwari

Might possible maan past related to geet as well looking Farward to read more geet net accident maan save her then their love boom 😉


Thank you for being here.
I hope you have realised that chapters after the almost accident have been updated. 😊

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It was a stuffy sunday afternoon and Geet and Maan are sitting in the apartment, bored.

While Maan has lied down on the bed, his arm covering his face, Geet sat there, her ridiculously long hair tied into a bun, her knees pulled to her chest, in the loveseat, in the bedroom, to save herself from the otherwise humid rooms. Thank god for the AC.

"So, what's up?" she ventures slowly.

He looks startled that he removes his arm and stares at her They were but the characters spun by a master writer Commelina, and all they could do was be suspended in air, until the writer comes to pick up from where she had left them off.

It was hence, Maan's doubts were justified.

"Are you sure we can continue with the conversation?" he asks

"Who said we can't?" asks young Geet "Plus I get bored sitting here moping all day, and cooking and getting depressed. The last time I was suspended after a chapter was in a rainy day, in the middle of nowhere. Do you know how sick i got?"

"Wow. You sure talk a lot. How does the writer put up with you?"

"The same way she would put up with your condescension" she shot back.

"If we are going to continue the conversation in this tone, I think it should work. We won't be toeing any line and still stick to our characters"

"How intelligent of you! Do you want a yellow legal pad to write to-do and what not to do list for this conversation?"

Despite his usual mood, he laughed. "You're catching up on sarcasm. I like it"

"You don't seem to like it very much in the story"

"You are giving me serious competition. You know that is my thing. How can i not feel insecure"

It was her turn to laugh.

"Why aren't you like this always?" she asks "Sometimes you get to me. I feel like punching the guts out of you"

"And what about the other times?"

She remained silent. "What about the other times? Nothing and why are you flirting with me? Aren't you supposed to be in your character?"

"Wow getting flustered and all. Classic Geet. Good to know we agree on one thing at least. Staying in character. I am going to sleep. You can stop sitting like that and sleep yourself. The wait might be longer" he said and yawning, fell asleep.



I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed reading this.
Love you S🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

what a beautifully written story...read all th parts together...funny interesting romantic...y i was thinking geet actually told the real story of maan married to her in their reception...really he didnt recognize her...whats the problem between geet n ayush...hope that dev will remains taras forever...y pinky was so judgemental n i was thinking she would become a gd friend of geet ..i was feeling so sad when geet was crying in the kitchen...maan never tried to know whats geets background...what she wants in her life...he has his own dream...he is educated modern then y he is nt thinking of geets education...so many dreams of everyone in this story n everything looks so real in life...maans dituation in office just like mine...broken dreams of geet to become a doctor just like me...geet doesnt know how to cook just like me...trying for a baby of tara n dev n their situation just like a situation of my collegue cum friend tarannum...th relation between adi n his FIL just like my father n my hubby...uff so much similarities...waiting for next



Just came across this one and I realized I never replied back.
Thank you so much Papon 😊
Comments like these are very encouraging. It was a long and stressful day and this one comment, made my day.
Thanks.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 1
Though I had read this a while ago but I still feel that I have not done enough justice with your writing .
Each segment of this story is commendable and I have to respond to them individually.
So here I m
Moving over to the first part,
This chapter was drilled with so many emotions.
Anxiety and nervousness playing their parts in the first few paragraphs.
With utter despair and agony in the middle
And resignation in the end.
I can relate to this Geet in so many ways that's it's almost uncanny!
Carrying the bundle of expectations, living with it everyday and then facing disappointment when one fails to cater to that expectation .
You just presented a slice of our society through this chapter.
And a harsh reality too that
Sometimes ,it's fate which decides the course of life and you have no choice but to live with it '

PS-Are u a medical student?
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Posted: 8 years ago
^ cumber
Thank you for such a thoughtful comment! Pleased to have you here.
Commenting on each part now when we have crossed 35 chapters, I think it is too tedious a task. That you have read the chapters and found it interesting enough to be waiting for the new chapter is more than a compliment for me.
PS- Can I answer this question sometime later? Maybe when we reach a certain stage in the story and I am to share what inspired me to write this story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just give me like '10 ' days or so
I will get back here to comment .
Life right now is a like a raging rollercoaster

Puffh
what's with commenting and tedious?
I will just plainly ignore that.

PS- I will wait for the story to unfold your inspiration.
No issues at all.

PPS-Stop being so formal, I thought we were pass that!
Formality for me goes in hand to hand with Indian ' Aunty Syndrome '



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Posted: 8 years ago
Promotion ki barfi or more like karela in disguise ?
Damn ! did you just write this chapter after encountering corporate gamut or for that matter any place which hold chacha -chachi, their neighbor add into the mix their dooor ke relatives above" merit" .
I soo dislike this trend and unfortunately it in -habitats with us :(
Maan took this fall so gracefully though ,
Both the protagonist are sailing in the same ship named "disappointment "

will add here more

Edited by MrsBenedict - 8 years ago

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