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Commented on the first update on pg 140
"Hope and despair"
eeeppp... *jumping around crazily and screaming..."
damn it. damn it. damn it woman. Just when I thought the previous update had it all, you took me in for a ride!
everything... absolutely everything about this update is like a tornado, hitting me with such force and best part...am enjoying that hit. trust me... I actually read this entire update with my heart in my mouth. it was so engrossing and so funny...okay i know they were arguing but then the words, especially geet's laced with such sarcasm and humor... I was sold. You nailed it yaar. it was GORGEOUS!
I have never ever ever reach such awesome interaction between maaneet till date. and ohh the dark humor... 😆
Family solanaceae... superior ovary... valvate aestivation... i was standing right there with geet with my biology book 😆
that thing in onion is syn-propanethial-S-oxide.. i remember because i had to.. for my entrance exams. and i still remember so much of them.😃
they talked... finally and sure boy.. Maan had awakened the demon within her. How much could she keep quiet? she had to vent out someday or the other.. and ohh the humor!!! **bows**
Commelina... you stole my heart jaaneman 🤗
her fantasy... and the dastardly demon Maan Khurana.. she wouldn't go back even if he groveled at her feet... of course she wouldn't after the not-so-pleasant confrontatons they have had...
I loved all of geet's self talk... it was so entertaining.. i was totally at the edge of my seat.
if the previous update showed your understanding of life, then take it from me woman, this update hightlighted your prowess as a writer. Such beauty in those words... sheer brilliance!
I am floored.
and then there were her conditions... quite agreeable. maan cannot deny anything here now,can he? Maan noticing the small small things about her... such beautiful detailing.But i loved the part where geet just says... it was not so nice knowing you and that you need to work on your communication skilss😆
they finally let it all out.. and staying back with this demon was a better option than going back to HP. what a come back jaani... what a comeback!!!
Absolutely loved this to bits. every word...every line...commendable.
and then after all these... we were back to sqaure one. he asked about her studies... but i understand where she stands now.. probably I am at that particular juncture right now.not able to tell what had gone wrong because that is too embarrasing..more than it, it pinches our hearts...
But this also makrs the beginning of another new chapter in their lives. I loved Maan's come back too after a moment of taciturnity. but then again, coming back to the same thing all over again, i am actually looking forward to reading how maan helps her get through this phase of her life.it would be such a beautiful journey to behold.
Beautiful Update!!!
or may be way more than that. fit words accordingly. I dont seem to find anything more. as of now.
truth be told, i had been really disturbed about something since the previous night and these two updates brought that smile back on my face. Thanks for doing that. sometimes all you just need to some good humor and some kind words. thats it.
thanks again 🤗
waiting for next now😳
"Hope and despair"
eeeppp... *jumping around crazily and screaming..."
damn it. damn it. damn it woman. Just when I thought the previous update had it all, you took me in for a ride!
everything... absolutely everything about this update is like a tornado, hitting me with such force and best part...am enjoying that hit. trust me... I actually read this entire update with my heart in my mouth. it was so engrossing and so funny...okay i know they were arguing but then the words, especially geet's laced with such sarcasm and humor... I was sold. You nailed it yaar. it was GORGEOUS!
I have never ever ever reach such awesome interaction between maaneet till date. and ohh the dark humor... 😆
Family solanaceae... superior ovary... valvate aestivation... i was standing right there with geet with my biology book 😆
that thing in onion is syn-propanethial-S-oxide.. i remember because i had to.. for my entrance exams. and i still remember so much of them.😃
they talked... finally and sure boy.. Maan had awakened the demon within her. How much could she keep quiet? she had to vent out someday or the other.. and ohh the humor!!! **bows**
Commelina... you stole my heart jaaneman 🤗
her fantasy... and the dastardly demon Maan Khurana.. she wouldn't go back even if he groveled at her feet... of course she wouldn't after the not-so-pleasant confrontatons they have had...
I loved all of geet's self talk... it was so entertaining.. i was totally at the edge of my seat.
if the previous update showed your understanding of life, then take it from me woman, this update hightlighted your prowess as a writer. Such beauty in those words... sheer brilliance!
I am floored.
and then there were her conditions... quite agreeable. maan cannot deny anything here now,can he? Maan noticing the small small things about her... such beautiful detailing.But i loved the part where geet just says... it was not so nice knowing you and that you need to work on your communication skilss😆
they finally let it all out.. and staying back with this demon was a better option than going back to HP. what a come back jaani... what a comeback!!!
Absolutely loved this to bits. every word...every line...commendable.
and then after all these... we were back to sqaure one. he asked about her studies... but i understand where she stands now.. probably I am at that particular juncture right now.not able to tell what had gone wrong because that is too embarrasing..more than it, it pinches our hearts...
But this also makrs the beginning of another new chapter in their lives. I loved Maan's come back too after a moment of taciturnity. but then again, coming back to the same thing all over again, i am actually looking forward to reading how maan helps her get through this phase of her life.it would be such a beautiful journey to behold.
Beautiful Update!!!
or may be way more than that. fit words accordingly. I dont seem to find anything more. as of now.
truth be told, i had been really disturbed about something since the previous night and these two updates brought that smile back on my face. Thanks for doing that. sometimes all you just need to some good humor and some kind words. thats it.
thanks again 🤗
waiting for next now😳
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