DEVIL'S POSSESSION 2 Updated Last Part on Pg 45 / 1-12-2015

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jj23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#361

loved this story...ur style of writing is really vry nice..

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Dragon-Heart

@Dragon-Heart

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Posted: 9 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: Desigirls12




Wow lovely
superb powerful action update dear..te way my maan ki restless without his geet
and te way his frustration increasing day by day was lovely..te way adi warning
abt te danger but for my maan playing with danger is fav game naa..te way my
maan enter to meet his enemies to show them they hell was lovely superb..te way
raj trying to target geet and his baby but he forgot whom he dealing msk te
real devil,omg his attitude te way he lite te cigar and talking to him without
showing any reaction and turning his mens against him and killing them too omg
superb wow me jumping to see my maan ki style and attitude,muah..te way geet ki
pain wen my maan said to kill without knowing
tat my maan wont show his weakness to his enemies was lovely..te way geet
trying to leave but my maan came to take his two possession with him forever, his dadi have born again
and came back to my devil to twist his ears..i love te update so much dear

heheheh ;) thanks sweety

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kuhu

@kuhu18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#363

part 1

interesting story

Maan a fighter bets death few month back in hospital

then again today

and seek his comfort

with his keep

but dint want her concern she is just his keep

she also know it

Maan cousin and chacha are his enemy

and are blunt about it

Maan knows it and answering them well

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harshu...

@harshu...

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#364

Superb ending dear.
Dadimaa death has made maan has made. Maan hard .
But now she back in the form of his baby.
Maan is not able to describe his feelings.
Bt I loved his indirect confession.
Thnk for the superb story dear...

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kuhu

@kuhu18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#365

part 2

wonderful update

Maan plans well

he eliminated his employ who works for Raj and aryan with one arrow

and hurt Raj on his weak point

so Raj is Maans step chacha thats why he did all to Maans family

he even killed lady to treats him as his son

Raj angry to Maan for trapping his son and making him killer in front of law

how did Raj know about Geets being preg

and he even bad mouth for Geet

Maan dint believe him

and then in hen anger going to confront her

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kuhu

@kuhu18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#366

last part

its a instance update

Maan in anger told Geet that she disobey her

and want her to abort baby

Geet leaves him as she wanted the baby

so aryan is dead and wants revenge from Maan for this

Maan promise dadi pic to finish issue now

Raj kidnapped Geet and her baby for revange from Maan

Maan came there and acted as it does not bother him

and by trick finishes Raj

he fulfill his promise which he made to dadi

Geet scared of all leaving with her daughter but Maan stops her

he sees his dadi in their angle

Maan wants to Marry Geet to keep her and his daughter with him

he says to Geet he dont love her but needs her

geet agrees ( Geet is right one day he will love hes as she does him now )

lovely story

p.s ---- what i feel is that what Maan said to Geet while asking her to come back to him is something like love a kind of love its just time what he needs to heal his wounds and feel things

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kuhu

@kuhu18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#367

i read this story after you finished it

loved it

sorry for commenting late

had a 6 days long migraine attack

so was not in condition to type

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Dragon-Heart

@Dragon-Heart

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#368

I hope you are fine now

Originally posted by: kuhu18

i read this story after you finished it
loved it
sorry for commenting late
had a 6 days long migraine attack
so was not in condition to type