Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do//updated Ch 6,7,8 & Epi pg 42

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For Readers Vs Writers Challenge by angel.princess




Pyar Ko Ho Jaane Do (scene i)



On of famous multispeciality Life Line Hospital , New Delhi

Cardiology Section


As soon as both of them came out of Dr.Gill's cabin, they started arguing over some reason.An elegant old lady with an extremely handsome young man.But why ? Who they were afterall ?


It was bit surprising even in argument they seemed they love and care for each other too much.Man encircled his arm around old lady's shoulders.Listening to her first carefully.


"Betay aab kahiye ? You have something to say ? Huh !! Ek nahi sunte aap hamari.Sirf apne mann ki he karogay..I told you I am absolutely fine.Still you dragged me here.Insisted doctor to do even unnecessary tests..What was there in reports nothing ? " Proclaiming herself right she raised her face up to look straight in his eyes.


" Yes I already knew that everything will come out to be alright.Because you had gone through complete check up last week " He sneered looking at her.


They strolled over the hospital gallery going toward exit .Suddenly she stuck at where she was..goggled at young man in disbelief " Fir kyon laaye aap humko yahan..boliye ?"


" Relax Daddi Maa...relax...If you are my Daddi...main bhi aapka he pota hu na.."he smirked..embracing old lady.


" Aap fir se meri shaddi karvaane k chakkar main hai na..kyo ? Yesterday Suman Ji came to our home..that matchmaker...Mere liye rishtay lekar aayi thi wo.? " He questioned her.


It seemed lady was caught red handed..She was in search of words " Ha wo..ha..but whats link between that matter and my check up ? "


"Hai Daddi bilkul hai..You knew very well I have already planned one week France trip...But you finalized a girl for me...Aab mujhe bahar jaane se bhi rokna tha aur us ladki se milne k liye ha bhi karvaani thi...Yeh kaise hota..So my Dear Daddi !! she was again on the way to trap me.. ? "he chuckled looking at her glazing expressions.


" Ya she came..that was just a casual visit.." She try to defend self.


"Oh come on Daddi..when Suman Ji was there..you were such engrossed in conversation, even didn't noticed me..I overheard you..Aap keh rahi thi k heart palpitations k excuse se aap mera trip postpone karva dengi..aur kissi tarah mujhe us ladki se milva bhi dengi.." standing with hands on waist..he exposed Daddi's foolproof plan to trap him again.


"When I said so ? And how could you be there at home when you were at office Don't tell lie ?"


"Daddi..I came home to collect some important files.When you were discussing all this...After analyzing whole situation I thought it was not right moment to interrupt your conversation, otherwise you might have twisted whole thing. Jaise main aaya tha..without letting you know I left.Then I booked this emergency appointment for your check up..I left no scope for you Daddi ..now you can't play any trick..." He smiled victoriously disclosing why he did so.


The old lady was left with no chance to argue him from front.Now who were they ? That handsome hunk he was Maan Singh Khuraana MD to Khuraana Constructions One of top construction houses in country..Extremely handsome,Intelligent and successful businessman ..The most eligible bachelor.The old lady she was Maan's Daddi and Chairperson of KC Mrs.Savitri Devi Khuraana...After her husband's death she ran KC single handedly and then sudden dismay of her son n daughter in law's death in a car accident couldn't shatter her...She gathered herself for the sake of two little lives her grand sons Maan and Dev 3 years old and 1 year old respectively.


After 23 years Maan and Dev both brothers were on their Daddi's footsteps. Fulfilling all her dreams except one ? Dream what dream ? Dev was in last year of his study so she wanted Maan to get married but he was not ready at any cost.Now this was Maan and Daddi's every day affair to find out new ways to overpower each other.Like what happened here.


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" Maan aap theek nahi kar rahe hamare saath..What I wished ? To see you got married. If I do something to make your mind..you name it as trick...?" all argument distressed her , her eyes got wet.She dropped herself into waiting chair there in the hospital gallery.


" Daddi..Daddi...please aab senti mat honna...you no na how much I love you but marriage no way Daddi.." he kneeled down in front of her trying to pacify her.How could she remain annoyed to him ? Under effect of his innocent smile..cute gestures..Both reconciled soon after...





Coming shortly


Sonia


I wrote after two months hope you will like Zeba here your challenge starts..This is one shot or few shots more don't know but bear me...



Tense liberties always here according to the rules of contemporary writing.

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Beautiful update!
Lovely dadi pota bonding!
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Nice update dear woo Mann and daddimaa argument for Mann marriage its never ending story on both till he get married continue soon
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wow awesome start...
really loved it...
plz continue soon...
waise i enjoyed maan and dadi's argument...😃
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I just love it
U r writing it soo smoothly
Its grt
Hahaha maan ne pura plan kharab kar diya dadi ka
Hahhahah i was laughing out
Superb

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cute scene. Maan one step ahead of Daadi and foiled her heart palpitations plan😆
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Nice start. Aww dadi want to use old trick of heart palpitation to stop ma'am from going on trip and meet girl. Maan is one step ahead and flop dadi plan. Continue soon.

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