ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED #10 Updated EPILOGUE on Pg 148 / 19-11-2015

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1101

nice epilogue

baap beta dono J😆 bechari geet...kis ko sambhale!!

dil mein joh zazbaat maan ne daba kar rakha tha ab woh bahar aa raha hai...

aur woh khud bhi ab rishto ki gehraai samajh raha hai...

ab woh apni feelings bhi geet ke saath share kar raha hai...

aur geet bhi khush hai...maan ke karib aane se...

alya maan bonding was awesome!!

thanks for this beautiful story

waiting for NEW...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#1102

Lovely ending of a fabulous story.

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Kshitija

@krndr

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1103

Now thats a lovely epilogue

Loved the way Maan said sorry to his little baby and baby also behaved as if he understood his apology

That was a very cute scene

Surprised that Maan remembers the day they became one and thinks of Alya as his little Angel who unknowingly connected them

Loved to see the caring side of Maan

Their consumation on physical and emotional level was the best

Loved this story a lot

Expecting a more such beautiful stories from you

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#1104

fantastic and am going to miss this so much...was eagerly waiting for maan to change and he has indeed and what a deep thinker he is...so beautifully thought of gift for Alya by him...beautiful and sweet...lovely..am sure now all the kids love him including his Vihaan..am sure our maan is out to make another little geet for himself now...to side with her papa

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1105

very beautiful epi dear ...just sooo loved it ! ... maan really changed into dream person of geet ..his feeling for alya made geet proud on him ... enjoyed maaneet moments ...will miss the story so much ...

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nadira

@Shugluvszahid

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1106

amazing end...maan deep as sea...superbbb... alya ke liye anklets...overwhelmed... finally love birds ka intizar over...n they loved each other without any disturbance... Aur vihaan such a cutie...papa ke side ho gaya ab papa ne jo sorry bola.. superbbb

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1107

What a beautiful epilogue
U are really a awesome writer
Loved the bonding b/w Maan and his family
Maan is now a complete family man
Maaneet moments are sooo passionate and adorable
Beautifully written
Loved it

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#1108

Lovely epilogue richa di..
Maan changed so much and its lovely to see him like this..
Geet too happy in her life with her hubby and son..

Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 9 years ago

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tania90

@tania90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1109

superb update just loved it I will miss this story
but awseum geet nd maan both got their solace in each other geet always want love which she found in maan nd maan his life is in geet now nd I jut love it how he is so in geet that now he only needed geet no one else geet love changed himm totally superbbb

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harshu...

@harshu...

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1110

Wow!! What a wonderful epilogue.
Maan is Changed.
Loved his gift for Aliya.
Baby nd maan:s bold I'd really cute.
Baby ws teasing his dadda.
But at least dadda manofied him.
Thank u so much for the wonder story dear
I love ur writing.

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