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The Myth

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The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 52


Part - 53



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Geet was relieved from d burden which nd guilt which was hurting her after realizing that hiding her where about from DJ nd uncle was wrong , they cd get hurt after knowing this,, Maan did what he said , even he hide this from last two days ,, support her nd taking care of her ,, she really put her in trouble in that rainy night ,, it was her luck that Maan was here nd she was able to spent night peacefully ,, fixing everything at right place make her excited nd happy ,, living together from last two days make her lil free with Maan nd his help ,,convincing DJ nd Kabir uncle affected her ,, d bitterness for him lessen in those 2 days,, she forgot nd in happiness hugged him nd thanked him few times .

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Maan was froze at his stage , he didn't get what happened in a go ,, Geet's arms wr around his neck nd her upper body was glued to him ,, her cheeks wr touching his jaw line nd d warmth of her words wr touching his ears ,, he cdn't believe that Geet cd do this ? It was like a dream for him that she was hugging him ,, thousands of crackers burst in his body ,, felt a sharp urge to crush her in his arms to soothe his aching heart ,, lost in those dreamy moment he reciprocated ,, lovingly held her close to him ,, her soft body nd its fragrance erased all his pain ,, he wanted to stop d time for eternity , , with closed eyes he was absorbing those precious moments. After few sec when Geet realized her action , she gasped in shock nd parted in a jerk ,, Maan too came in sense ,, he was sad for losing those blissful moments ,, Geet startled ,, stepped back mumbling sorry .

Geet : sorry ,, I m so sorry for this .

Maan: *******

Geet: don't how I forgot my limits ,, I m sorry mr MK . Maan: it's ,,it's Ok Geet ,, don't feel bad ,, relax ,, don't get tense ,, u did only in a friendly way ,, relax .

Geet : sorry , I have to behave in sense .

Maan: it's OK Geet , don't spoil ur happiness for this lil thing ,( seeing her tensed he tried to make her easy ,, lil tension cd effect her )

Geet moved from there trying to avoid him ,, she bent a lil to open d machine lid ,, Maan saw her nd rush to her ,, held her arm nd make her stand .

Maan : what r doing Geet ? u don't have to bent like this ,, cn't u keep this lil thing in ur mind ,, it's not good for u .

Geet fumbled : wo,, , I m just taking out clothes ,

Maan: then tell me na , i'll do that ,, hato , nd why clothes r here ?

Geet: I washed them .

Maan: what ? u washed d clothes .. pagal ho kya tum ? Kya jaroorat thi ess sab ki ,, Geet cn't u sit peacefully nd take care of her ? meri nazar hati nahi aur tum shuru ,, plzz stay in control till uncle nd DJ come my lady superman ,, what i'll say to all if something happen to u ? here u r making me lying to cover up ur mistake nd next moment trying to bring prob for both ,, plzz don't stress nd trouble u ,, listen clearly u won't do any hard nd stressful work ,, samjhi .

Geet was staring at him ,, how he was scolding her ? nd what he said ,, I made him to lie ,, when I told him to lie DJ nd Uncle ? When he lied ? She gave him a glare forgetting what had happened between them few min before ?

Geet: wait ,, stop mr Rajdhani express ,, 1st I didn't wash d clothes , it was machine who washed them , 2nd when I told u to lie DJ nd uncle ? haan ?

Maan shocked : machine , is this a washing machine ?

Geet : yes , nd tell me 1st , when u lied for me ? I never told u to lie .

Maan : wo , I hide ur lie from DJ nd uncle of ur coming here two day back ,, don't I ?

Geet fake a smile : mr MK , did they asked u when I came here ?

Maan: no .

Geet: they didn't ask nd u didn't say ,, where u lied nd hide ? Even I didn't lie , then why sd I tell u to lie mr Satayavaadi ?

Maan startled nd looked at her ,, Geet was smiling at him .

Geet: I didn't lie ,, today I said what I did 2 days back ,, simple ,, there was only a gap of happenings .. I only removed 2 days ,, now d real action will start from today .

Maan stunned: what do u mean u removed 2 days ?

Geet smiled : simple hei ,, OK tell me in simple yes nd no ,,, I m here for finalizing d plan ?

Yes ,,, I met u nd both wr shocked to see each other here ? yes ,,, u didn't know that DJ nd uncle wr in India ? yes, but ,,, sshhh chup yes or no mey reply do ,, Geet , u r twisting d things .

Geet smiled: yes I twisted d things ,, I twisted nd mingled last two days with today ,, reality is d same ,, I m doing what I said to DJ nd Kabir uncle ,, what is day today ?

Maan: ******.

Geet: nd I m here for meeting nd finalized d plan ,, DJ nd uncle got about u nd talk to u ,, they told u to take care of me ,, heina ?( maan nodded ) nd u assured them ? ( Maan hummed ) then do it Mr MK ,, ur duty starts now officially .

Maan: nd what about last 2 days ?

Geet: which last 2 days ? we mingled them na .. ?sab kuch aaj se hi start hus hei..

Maan : u r confusing me , I m not understanding u Geet .

Geet : u didn't know me , then how cn u understand me ,, Today u took a responsibility so try to do that ,, don't stress ur self ,, relax mr MK .

Maan confused : haann ,, sure , but how'll u manage when they'll come nd see all this ?

Geet: I m doing it , like I did it ,, simple ,, have some coffee mr MK , it'll help u .

Maan : thanks , u r playing with words Geet .

Geet: I m playing only with words , but u play with ppl ,, any way .. leave it , it's a small compromise between u nd me ,, like a contract between me nd ur Co.

Maan was hurt , he had to bear this bcoz he cdn't change d past , nd he was standing on d scattered remaining of their past,, Geet witnessed pain in his eyes , she thought that she had to be thankful to him.

Geet : OK , forget it nd start fresh ,, why r u here ?

Maan : means ?

Geet : means u r here to help me nd gave me good Gyaan ,, now do it ,, take out d clothes from machine in this basket , then I put them in sunlight for sometime on stand , which is in van boot , but u don't do that outside , that doesn't look nice , so there i'll do , OK .

Maan : OK .

He saw that she cleaned his dress too nd felt spl ,, she is perfect in all ways ,, Maan took out d cloths in bskt nd Geet made black coffee for him , he had that nd Geet her juice , then both come out ,, Maan opened d boot nd handed her stand ,, Geet opened that nd spread d clothes on that ,, Maan was amazed that Geet kept every minor things in mind ,, she was un-comparable ,, he got d call from Richard who informed him that few wrkrs with few machines wd reached there by eve , so checked everything there ,, it was lunch time ,, Geet went to do her work nd Maan went to inspect d field work ,, wrkrs put d marks for walkway , nd d man plough half of d land from one side of walkway .


Precap --- a family day out ...


Part - 54



sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24



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🤗 Hi dona..
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gi di
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m good tama
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Thik thak hoon...
dona darling no yaar.. 1-2 week main kuch ho sakte hai sayad
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oh no 1-2 week 😔
m sad too yaar...
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haan yar..ghar to ana hi hai..
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