MG-FF~The Myth~Thread-5~UPDATED~ Pt 53** Pg 121 ** 1st Oct. *******

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The Myth




The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.






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Index

Thread - 1

Thread - 2

Thread - 3


Thread - 4



Thread - 5

Part - 43

Part - 44

Part - 45

Part - 46

Part - 47

Part - 48

Part - 49

Part - 50

Part - 51

Part - 52

Part - 53


Thread - 6








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Character Sketch


Maan Singh Khurana

Geet Handa
Mahinder Handa

Rano Handa

Darji

Pummi (geet's bua)

Mr YashRaj Khurana
Mrs Reema Khurana
Mrs Savitri Devi Khurana (Dadima)

Fareeda , DaiJaan (geet's Daimaa)

Dev & Meera (Maan's younger bro nd bhabhi)

Tejinder & Lakhvinder Handa (geet's bros)


Sameera Reddy

Kabir Siddu
some more according d flow of story...








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my dear friends
A Note for advice ...

friends myth story is taking turn , nd i want to know what my readers like ,, 😃 as we all knew, we always want Maaneet in love ,, no matter what happened in start 😆 in worst to worst start all want them together 😆😛 ( hum kuch nahi ker sakty aadat se jo mazboor hein😆😉)
So plzz tell me what do u all want now .. ..
soften but angry Geet ..
remorseful , but caring Maan ...
do u all want Geet to forgive Maan .. 😃

😃 One more thing .. i m not using any hard core _ive characters ,, cheating , blackmailing ,,cunning plannings ,, attempts to kill ect...
😛 i m using opportunist ppls ,, who never leave a chance of their benefit ,, use other for their growth nd profit ,, these ppl didn't hurt anybody directly , but always think for their benefits nd use d opportunities .
😃 story is moving slow , but as u all knew i update almost daily , so cn't run fast ,, enjoy it step by step..
love u all ... 😃

plzz leave ur views ...










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Congrats for new thread
Waiting for update
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Waiting congrats for new thread.
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Congratulations for new thread... Eagerly waiting to new maan and how maneet story is gonna be now...
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U only told what ever it is we want maaneet together so for me what u planned is ok. Waiting for Geet soften but Maan with care n remorse.
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The Myth

( Lots of thanks nd hug to cute-Aly for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 42


Part - 43




It was a new dawn with new promises nd determinations for Maan,, he got up earaly in d mrng ,, freshen up ,, put on his track suit nd then went for a jog in nearby park ,, after few rounds of running he sat in a bench to take some rest nd there he noticed that a young couple was holding a baby's hands from both sides nd helping him on walk ,, both wr very happy seeing their baby taking lil steps ,, their smiles wr worth watching nd happiness was beyond words ,, every lil activity of d baby gives immense pleasure to every parents ,, this sight hit him deep nd remembered his baby nd Geet ,, he felt unlucky nd dejected , who for many days didn't know that Geet was his wife nd carrying his baby , nd now had a deep rift between him nd Geet that cdn't ask or talk about his baby to her ,, he cdn't cherish d moments of becoming a father.
Maan's heart turned heavy nd he came back ,, pour out his pain in practicing tai-chi ,, then lie down there on carpet tired ,, he realized d time when got d msg from his Co ,, he got up ,,cleaned his house ,, prepared BF with d things which wr available in kitchen , as well as made d list for shopping ,, went to take bath ,, got ready,, had his BF nd then left for his Office to meet his boss,, though in this time he remembered Geet many times nd wanted to see her , but knew that she is away nd there was no hope to meet her in few days ,, he thought to call Mr Siddu to ask about Geet's health after few hrs.

In his way to office Maan called Kabir nd asked about Geet nd all ,, Kabir replied him in minimal words ,, maan thanked him nd cut d call ,, reached his office nd gave his intro to recp asking time to meet ,, after 10 min he was with his priv boss talking about his re- joining ,, his boss was happy to get him back bcoz Maan was good nd very sincere in his work ,, this was an const Co nd Maan had his degree in archi ,, he brought up listening nd watching this type of atmosphere in home ,, KC was a good name in const & dovlp ,, in 2 months of work his boss caught his skill nd want him back in his new nd growing Co. not only Co but Maan was also learning new tech nd way of work here , which is diff from India ,, he was also feeling happy to join back ,, for these holidays he wd work full time nd after opening college part time .

Days started passing on a normal note ,, Maan everyday called Kabir or DJ to ask abut Geet's health ,, they too replied him but never talk more than that ,, this lil talk was not enough for Maan , he wanted to see nd to talk Geet ,which was not so easy for him ,, Geet was living away nd with his full day work it was not easy to get chance ,, his life became busy with office nd work ,, he had to do all house hold work too , now every nyt he talk to his mom nd DM while cooking ,, slowly they started talking to him lovingly ,, asked how he was doing nd cooking for him ,, both d ladies gave him tips to make good things to eat nd he liked their cooking instructions .

Maan's life was coming on track ,, now he felt that this life is much better than prev ,, everyday he went for jog , then exercises , arranged his small home ,, made BF nd then went to work ,, there too he worked hard ,nd never waste a min ,, talk very minimal to co- employees , but in all these one name always remain in his mind .. Geet ,, all d time wished to get a glance of her.

In same city Kabir nd Farida wr ready to go India ,, DJ's instructions for Geet wr increasing every passing day ,, she made many dishes nd kept them in fridge so that she cd just warm nd eat ,, Geet looked in a very pitiable way at Kabir when DJ start her dose of does nd don't Puran nd Kabir shrugged his shoulders in I cn't do anything way.

Geet: DJ . I m not a kid ,, I know cooking nd cn make .

DJ: no, don't stand much nd make u tired to cook ,, I made many of ur fav dishes , Kheer is there nd u like that cold so just take that nd eat ,, only veggies need to warm ,, rice u cn make in rice-cooker nd if want then make chapti or paratha , boiled potato r there ,, dare u eat ur maggi or pizzas ,, u need healthy foods , nd finished all d fruits .

Geet: sure nd when u came after 4-5 days , u'll find a baby elephant roaming in this home ,, etna khana mai akele kahungi kya ?

Kabir laughed at d word baby elephant nd Farida glare at him nd Geet ,, Geet made a puppy face .

DJ: mujhe pata hi tu akele kitna banaker khayegi .

Kabir: Farida , usse bhi apni aur apne baby ki fikar hei ,, bacchi nahi hei wo .

DJ: mere liye to hei ,, akele khana banana to dur wo etne bade ghar mei rahegi kaise mujhe uski fikar hei?

Kabir: this area is safe,, don't worry ,, nd I told her Dr to call her 3-4 times in a day ,, though he wanted inform Maan to keep an eye in their absence , but he stopped bcoz of Geet's anger ,, everyday Maan asked him about Geet , nd Kabir realized that Maan was worried for her.

Here geet was lil busy in her FH proj too,, she few times went out to meet d manager of d const Co to discuss about d plan , nd to mkt for some other work , which was a secret ,, she wanted to finish this in these 3-4 days in d absence of Kabir nd Farida .

The day of Mr nd Mrs Kabir's departure arrived ,, they left early mrng giving lots of instructions ,, they went by mrng flight , after them Geet was free ,, she took some rest nd then got up ,, freshen up nd packed a small bag , her lappy , nd few more things to carry with her ,, she went to near by mrkt nd did some shopping ,, packed all d stuff in a box nd came back ,, she was ticking d list which she had with her ,, all most everything had done ,, then she checked d trains timings nd select d one which suits to her timing,, made few more calls ,, get ready to go ,, her cab came to trop her to Rly stn.

Geet took her train nd settled comfortably,, d train journey wd be very comfy so she choose that visit Farm ,, it took one hr more then road journey but it was fun to travel by train too ,, from d nearby stn of d village she took a big Amish buggy to go her Farm ,, in that she interact with few local ppl ,, there wr 3-4 family with their kids , nd few elders ,,that was also a fun . near 2:00 in afternoon Geet reached at her Farm gate ,, as she ordered nd set before , the Take Away workshop of used vehicle's men wr there to deliver her caravan .

Geet did some HW nd then choose this old caravan in this workshop ,, changed it in to a small home according to her plan ,, before starting for here she called d manager to reach d said place with caravan, which was towed with their van to fix in farm .

Geet entered in d farm gate ,, d work of developing had started week back ,, wire fencing had done along with a wooden gate ,, 3 tents wr built near d gate ,, Geet knew they belonged to Const Co nd their workers ,, a raw map was designed before in Co office nd they choose d places for a wind mill, solar plant nd poles nd tube-well .

There was no light supply in farm so Co was trying to fix solar poles nd panel 1st for light nd d workers of solar energy dept wr doing their work,, they wr setting portable system for now ,, Geet was satisfied with d work progress nd visited d Farm 1st time after starting d work.

The place for caravan was set before nd , Geet instructed d workshop men to fix that at that place looking d right direction ,, they fixed that nd unhooked d caravan ,, handed d keys to Geet to checked that ,, she opened that nd entered ,, d men kept her bags in nd showed her all d functions ,, only one thing left ,, to attached that with main light line nd fixing wc & drained pit.

Geet called d manager of d Constr Co ,, who also had to come here with FH blue prints nd to give her all d progress report nd next plan of work ,, he replied nd said that he was in d way with his Assit nd wd reach there in half an hr ,, Geet asked for a labour to dig a pit ,, he replied that they wr working at farm nd he was informing a man for her help ,,after few min a worker was there with a portable earth digging machine ,, d workshop men showed him d place to dig d pits nd he did that ,, it took hardly 20 min nd they placed a netted big pipes in those pits ,, attached d drain pipes with them , covered them with clark drain lid nd then cover them with soil .

A small nd beautiful house was ready to live with all facilities ,, that have small generator nd inverter for power supply ,, after inspecting everything geet handed them transport nd fixing charges with a good tip ,, d workers left thanking her . Geet opened her bag nd took out her lappy , internet devices nd HD ,, start fans nd mini fridge ,, opened d box nd placed all d eatable stock in fridge nd kitchen drawers ,, many things wr already there packed , nd few big stuff was in Van's boot.

Geet was waiting for d manager ,, it's more than 1 hr she was here nd feeling hungry ,, she had eatables in train nd liquids she was taking which was in her hand bag , but now want proper lunch .

she brought all d cooked food packed in a thermo-lunchpack nd decided to open that to take her lunch , but d car horn nd at d gate destructed her ,, she peeped out from d window ,, d car entered in d farm nd stopped near d Co's tents.


Precap ... 😉 unexpected meeting ... now what ..? 😕

Part - 44


😆😆 for Amish ppl i'll tell u in coming updates ..


sorry for mistakes ...



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