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Posted: 9 years ago

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Anjaan

" There is always that one person , that will always have your heart. "
A shadow was running in darkness of night ,, few sounds nd steps wr chasing that with swords which wr shining in d partial light of moon through trees ,, d whole wood became alive with voices nd rustling of dry leaves .
he came out from his tent with a gun in his hand for his protection nd looked around ,, he saw few men with covered faces approached to him ,,the nearer him nd one of them removed his cloth from his face ... Brij handa ...
what he was doing here with these goons .. yes goons they all wr looking like goons nd cruelty was clearly visible in their eyes .
He scanned all nd gave a hard look to Brij ,, who was lil shocked after seeing him but pretend unaffected ,, raised his hand to stop his other partners .
Brij, : we r searching a thief , did u see anyone this side ?
Maan: thief ? ,, no i didn't see .
B: what r u doing in this jungle at this hr?
Maan: why , this is Govt property nd anyone cn enter here ,, i m camping here .
Brij: oh,, any way , be careful ,, this is jungle nd any wild animal cn attack on u ?
Maan: i cn protect myself ,, u think for u who cn't even handle a girl of his home nd wasted my time nd money ,, now leave .
Brij annoyed: u'll get what u want ,, u too didn't pay me d amount ,which u promised , u too deny for money.
Maan: 1st sign , then money ,, MSK believe in fair deal .
B: brij too know his work well ,, TM u'll get sign keep ready d rest of money.
Maan: let's see,, u have only one day nd then police 'll talk to u not me mr brij handa .
Maan moved to go in his tent nd brij shouted on others .. dhoondo usse bach ker na jane paye iss jungle se ,, shera se poocho .
1 guy: ab tak to jungle paar kerdiya hoga.
B: itna aasan nahi hei brij ke aadmi jungle ke charo taraf hein.. yahan se uski parchai bhi bahar nahi jaegi ,, maar ker yahin dafan ker do usse.
they left nd Maan entered in his tent , but he got a shock when he saw a shadow behind his tent ,, he rushed out to check with his gun ,, there was a girl bundled on d ground holding d tent bamboo with her one hand ,, her one hand was on her mouth ,, messy hairs ,, cuts nd blood on back nd hand ... who is she ? Q pooped in his mind ,,, she was looking at other side where goons left ,, Maan slowly nearer her bent nd placed his hand on her shoulder ,, she turned with a gasp nd jerk ...
fear was visible in her almond eyes ,, bruises on her face wr showing that she struggled for her life nd hiding her from those goons ..But Why?
she was looking at him scared ,, he was looking at her confused .. she is Brij sis , then why she is here in this condition ? Why they wanted to kill her ?
Maan: tum !!! tum Geet Handa ho na ?
Geet : plzz ,, don't kill me ,, plzz don't call them ,, take that land , i'll sign where do u want , but don't kill me ,, let me live ,, plzz don't call those goon ,, i'll sign d pprs ,, plzz don't kill me ,, plzz let me go ,, let me go ,, don't ...
she fainted nd fall on ground in front of him .
Maan was dumbstruck listening her plight ,, brij wanted to kill his own sis ,, even she thought that he was also with them ,, Gosh !!! what is all this ?
Shocked Maan looked around nd lifted her,, brought her in his tent nd made her lie down on his sleeping bag ,, tied d tent door brought water bottle nd sprinkled some water on Geet's face ,, patted her cheek whispering her name ,, he didn't called her loud fearing that any goon cd be back as brij was saying that his men wr all around ,, this girl safety was his priority ,, though she was thinking him d same .. Brij man , but she cd bcoz he was Anjaan(unknown)to her ,nd so she for him ,, he was hell shocked nd confused with all this fiasco ,,only this girl cd clear d murk ,, he checked her breaths ,, they wr slow , but she was un-concious ,, he tore his shirt nd tied on her wounds which wr bleeding
t cut on her arm was deep , when he tied d cloth on that she flinched in pain nd left weak cry nd sat up with a jerk ,, Maan shushed her placing his palm on her mouth .
Maan whispered : ssshh,, quiet ,, they cn be around ,, don't make any noise ,, u r safe here ,, i won't harm u ,, trust me .
Geet looked at him with wide feared eyes ,, their eyed met trying to read each other emotions ,, something stirred in Maan's heart ,, he averted his gaze , but she was staring at him with Qs .
Next moment they heard a rusting sound of leaves outside ,, she gasped in fear hugged him ,, Maan held her close nd whispered in her ear .. daro nahi ,, mai hoon na ,, they waited silently ,,that may be some wild creature ,, roamed nd went away seeing fire infront of tent .
they parted ,, Maan gave her water to drink , sat near her ,, both wr confused nd Geet was still feared nd looking at him now nd then .
Maan: wo ku tumhare peeche thy ,,ku marna chahaty hein tumhe ? tum to brij ki bahan ho na ?
Geet gulped : tum un logo ke sath nahi ho to kaun ho ?
Maan: pahale meri baat ka jawab do , wo sab ku marna chahaty hei tumhe ?
Geet: uss zameen ke liye jo tum chahaty ho .
Maan confused : lekin wo to kafi din pahale tum bech chuli ho ,, ab to final formalities hein jis per Geet handa , means tumhare sign chahiye ,, mai half payment ker chuka hoon Brij ko .
Geet: mujhe nahi pata usne wo zameen kab aur kise bechi ,, mujhe to aaj subah pata chal jab tum ppr per sign ke liye aay.
Maan: what ?? , but u r his sis ,if he was selling d land means all d family members knew about it ,, ur parents nd others ,, i don't know much about handas , my munshiji deal with Brij ,, but for final regtd i have to come ,, he was creating fuss for money nd sign so i threatened him nd went to take ur sign , but u know what u did ? i have paid him half of money nd half is due at final rgtd ,, how cn i leave my deal in mid ? it was ur family matter , this land is mine now ,, i have aggri pprs .
Geet lost : u all men only run behind money woman nd land ,, u cn cheat nd ruin anyone for ur greed ,, only want to rule others to show ur power ,, all r same ,, selfish nd greedy ,, i don't know u ,, plzz don't inform Brij about me ,, they'll kill me ,, i'll sing where do u want ,, take that land but let me leave safely from here , plzz ,, i beg of u .
Maan: humm,, brij's men r all around ,, u cn't go out easily ,, if u trust me , will u come with me to Amritsar ,, ,, i'll drop u safely where u want after signing d pprs .
Geet: if brij came to u ?
Maan: that i'll manage.
geet didn't have any option ,, she had to runaway from there safely ,, she cdn't trust this Anjaan man who only interested in land ,, he dealt with Brij nd cd inform him after getting her sign , but before that he cdn't do for his benefit ,, when her own close blood relatives cd cheat her for money nd property , then who was he ? Geet thought to be careful at hr place ,for time being accept it , latershe cd think in peace .
Geet accepted Maan demand ,, he relieved nd told her to take rest for some time , then they wd move in wee hrs nd he wd hide her in his jeep ,, Geet agreed looked around nd saw a heap of straw ,, she slowly sat on that nd cuddle up holding her knees nd lie down .
Maan: u cn sleep here in sleeping bag .
Geet: no,, it's OK , u did a lot for me ,, thanks a lot, i want to go from here ASAP.
Maan: i'll drop u , but don't try to run , u'll be in danger .
Geet only nodded her head in yes ,, they rest for some time ,, Maan didn't blink for a mnt ,,he didn't trust her ,, she was in fear nd cd run , he thought for both ,, he cd save her from Brij ,nd in return she was ready to sign d pprs ,, he spent lots of money for this land nd as a sharp businessman he won't tolerate any loss ,,he was clear from his side nd want a fair deal ,, someone' s family matters didn't matter to him ,, she was in danger nd want to go away , then she be .

After few hr Maan secured his belongings ,, kept in his jeep ,, hide Geet between d back seats ,,folded his tents nd covered her .
Man: Geet remain like this till we cross this area , Ok.
Geet: humm.
They reached Amritsar at his guest house ,, it was still dark ,, Maan opened d house nd they went in ,, he locked d house ,, though Geet was fearing with this unknown man nd place , but she had to take patient .
Maan: u r safe here ndcn rest for some time ,, there was WR go nd wash ur face nd hands ,, there is blood all over ,, i'll bandage u later , u need 1st aid .
Geet went in nd cleaned herself ,, her dress was torn from many places nd blood stained ,, how she wd go out in this condition ,, she she look out a small silky pouch which was tied with her salwar's string ,, opened that nd saw ,, there was some money , a chain nd a ring set ,, tears dropped down from her eys ,, those ornaments belonged to her late parents ,, very hardly she was able to get those from her Taiji's cupboard before running away from there.
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Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update khuranas were relived with geets decision and they realised how much geet hated maan so he decided to prepare ppr as geet wanted maan was in remorse as he undrstood the depth of his sin he was thinking how wrong he was in his decision regarding sam who didnt care for the love they share blaming him and his family for her disease even threatend for money whereas geet refused to take the money maans family told him to keep convincing geet maan understood he has to bear her indifference and rejection like she did he came back felt alone and lonely maan called to know abt sams recovery it was fine her dad was though angry but thankful for his help maan had a lot of time to think abt his life and he decided its high time to cahnge it for good and he did as he decided to join back the company that wanted him will do job and concentrate on his studies aswell
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part dear
Update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update finally maan is on track lets see whats there in store for both maaneet😊
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awesome update . maan's family went to India but before that they made him understand his responsibility towards geet . maan thinking about his past & realized he got nothing . again he called his socalled gf & her father received the call & told him thanks & end of their socalled relationship. maan decided he will start fresh & mailed his boss . he want to do job .
precap is interesting
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Renna ma is right.. Geet is part of his life now.. n he has to respect that.. he has to bear her anger. as he is at wrong side in their relations.. he has to mend.. n first seriously I want him to cut all ties with Sam.. he is still stuck with Sam.. his regret doesn't matter till he can't mend his mistakes. n here he is asking abt Sam.. she will be fine .. she is getting good treatment thanks to his own money... now he has to earn Geet's forgiveness..
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi babbie
nice update
maan changing himself
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice Part Babbie

loved it so much

and well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice Part Babbie

liked it so much

great Geet got good marks

lovely
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da amazing update! Maan thinks abt everything! he reflects on his relationship wid Sam! he realizes tht Sam never loved him! he did everything 4 her! she js enjoyed! he even paid 4 her treatment! he regrets wt he did 2 Geet! he calls Sam n her dad answers! Maan tells abt results! he wants 2 speak 2 Sam 4 the last time! he dad agrees! he thanks Maan 4 the money! Yash, DM n Reema leave! Maan decides 2 get a job! Maan will have 2 convince Geet! update soon

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