*Beyond Death*~ new MG SS; Chap 7 on page 35, (09/10) - Page 12

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Originally posted by: Unisha123

its really nice. love it.😊



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Originally posted by: geeta-99

So geet is changed girl now good she will not bothered about her namely frndsn siblings...her parents god what kind of parents are they forgot about her child n send her hostel...



One type of parents...
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

whos behind maan n why?

nice update...

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thank u very much fr d lovely update...

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continue soon plz...




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Originally posted by: punam2712

Geet is back in her house - the place which gave her so much pain and with her so called family

They did not understand her and only made fun of her
Mr Andrew gave them a good scare - hope they think twice before picking on her

Maan isin Bangalore - why so far
And who tried to kill him - his bua and her sons



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Originally posted by: ambbiha

Something different from what i read so far in IF. IS Mr. AAndrew gonna save maan through geet. Did they both have any connection. Thanks for the pm



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Originally posted by: shubhi_s

nice one

loving geet and andrew bond👏
andrew served right to those jackass😆
who is after maan's life?😲



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HAPPY JANMASHTAMI AND NOT TO FORGET HAPPY TEACHERS DAY TO ALL MY BELOVED DEARIES...

Hey guys... Janmashtami gift to all... Hehe... All this renovation thing is still not over, but can't help myself to write stories... They are my life, and I can't give up on them... Ok, enough of my love... Let's get proceeded, with the story...

Hey but, none of you, adviced me a handsome face for Vicky.. Kab tak bechare ko bina shakal k character k tarah imagine karoge... He's an Important character dude... Please, pls suggest some faces and I would see if he suits the characterization perfectly...

Ok, let's peep in...

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Chapter 4:

So many months passed... So many months, and no improvements... The so called siblings and ex-friends of Geet , continued with their continuous teasings, and mocking Geet, at every possible chance... And Geet ignored their words, like they don't even exist, but sometimes... Sometimes, few words, they just cross the boundary of her hard exterior, and pierced deep in her soft scarred heart..

Tears, flew through her eyes, when no one's around. She many times cries herself to sleep, even hiding her soft self from Mr.Andrew.. But nothing is hidden from him.. He has witnessed her tears and pain, but never showed it. He's very well aware of the fact, she hates to show her weaknesses.. And thus he always, leave her alone at the night time, so that she could let her tears flew...

Mr.Andrew never pretends, or tries to cross a certain level of comfort zone between them.. Although knowing everything about her, he never questions, or tries to give advices to her... He just stays by her side, as a silent support, like a true friend..

Mr.Andrew was an 70 year old man when he died of heart attack. And after 15 years of life as dead, his total became 85... Now after having 85 years of experience, is more than enough for anyone to learn the aspects of life..

Here, Geet's family is trying to decrease the distance between themselves and Geet. But there's a very long distance between both the parties to come close... Efforts should be made from both the sides, but Geet is facing the other side to see their efforts.. And, then how long will they continue with this... Atlast as expected by Geet, they stopped trying and let her be the way she is...

She knew it well.. IGNORANCE IS THE BEST MEDICINE...

Whereas her family, took her ignorance as her Ego... They thought, that she's changed, into an Egoist, and tough girl, being in a hostel... Changed. Yes... Tough. Yes... But Egoist???? That's the only much, a parent knows their children... The parents are best support, and the first friend of a child, but the bonding is missing in Geet's case... Huh, Few MODERN parents... They think, they should give freedom to their children, and not to interfere in their life... Seriously?!?! Let it be...

Ok, now let's know about Geet's college life... Well guess what, now almost the whole college knows about Geet's auditorium incident. No need to guess, ofcourse, its her ex-friends ki kripa.. Their open teasings, taunts, her introvert nature, her silence, and most importantingly, her IGNORE EVERYONE' mantra, has finally led to a point, where the other students, either ignores her, or pass her strange teasing looks, or worse, sometimes taunts her too...

For them, it's just for fun, masti, and mazak... But what they forgetting is, words have more sharpness in them, than a sword.. We should use words properly, in a way not to hurt anyone's sentiments... There should be a limit to everything.. No one could digest, beyond a limit...

Such a day at Geet's college...

After the class, Geet is going through the area, where the bikes and cycles were parked. That area, is just near the canteen, hence most of the students, gather there with their friends... And definitely, the 5 monkeys, along with the sixth one as NT, would be found there.. Veer was sitting on his bike from one side, as it was kept on the stand. And others were standing around him.. They were as usual chatting and bunking classes..

And as soon as Geet, comes in their view, they get started with their regular torture..

Dev: "Hey MNG.. Going for class?!?! Where is your Dead BF?!?! Can't see him...", he said blocking Geet's path.

Geet just sighed inwardly, and tries to go by his side, but was now blocked by Sam. And the other side is already blocked by NT..

NT: "Jaan, what are u saying?!?! You know n, he will only allow Geet to see him..", she said making a mocking face.

Sam: "How sad.. We can't even see , our brother-in-law... Sorry.. Late brother-in-law.."

Brij: "How does your BF, looks like MNG?!?! Your Prince Charming...", he said from his place.

Definitely not like you idiots..', Geet said mentally to herself.

Although Geet is used to of all these teasings, and taunting, but Mr.Andrew often get annoyed with it..

NT: "Geet when are u going to plan your marriage?!?! Ofcourse your BF has hell lot of time... But, what about you?!?!"

Sam: "You're right NT.. We'll do a thing.. We'll plan it ourself.. Atleast we can do that much for her."

NT: "Exactly... I was thinking.. Which song should we play at her wedding?!?"

Before anyone could say something, a music got played in full volume... A boy sitting on another bike was playing songs on his mobile, while suddenly a song got played from his mobile, in full volume...

WHO LET THE DOGS OUT...

WO HOO HOO HOO..

WHO LET THE DOGS OUT...

WO HOO HOO HOO..'

Suddenly there was complete silence.. And then, all other students erupted into fits of laughter... The six monkeys were so much embarrassed, that they felt like eloping somewhere... Geet looks aside at Mr.Andrew who's laughing himself.. She knows, it's his prank to teach them a lesson..

Veer to save themselves from further embarrassment said, "Witch started with her Bitchy acts..."

As soon as he completed the sentence, the stand of his bike got loose.. As the whole weight of his bike and himself was upon the stand, therefore, his butt soon landed on the hard floor with a THUD... He screamed in agony, while the laughter of other students doubled up...

His friends reached for his help, while Geet left from there in anger, with Mr.Andrew following her...

After coming to an vacant place, Geet turned towards him and said, "What was that??!!"

Mr.And: "What?!?"

Geet: "I told u not to use your powers... Didn't u heard me?!?!", she said through gritted teeth.

Mr.And: "Ya I did.. But I chose to ignore it.. Just like u does to all those things you don't wanna hear.."

Geet frowned, and said, "It's not about me, but u... U shouldn't use your powers like this.."

This time Mr.Andrew is angry too, "Yes it is about u.. You doesn't use your power, doesn't appreciate the gift by God, and wants the same from me.. Atleast someone's using their power."

Geet just looks away in irritation, and he continued, "This is a special gift to you Geet, appreciate it... Ignorance isn't helping you, maybe Acceptance would.."

Geet looks at him annoyingly, and said, "This is no Gift, but a CURSE.. Someone would have cursed me from the bottom of their heart.."

Mr.And: "Not again... Whenever I say anything related to this topic... Our conversation, would be over on the same line-IT IS A CURSE...', I'm not interested in any further conversation now..."

Geet: "Good..", saying this she leaves, while Mr.Andrew just silently prays to God to sent someone, who could make her appreciate this special gift..

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Bangalore, Police Station..

Bua's elder son got arrested after another failed attempt to kill Maan. Although however much, Maan tried to tackle their continuous efforts to kill him, he fails sometimes, and thus lands up in trouble. He tried to not let this come out in open, but after their last attempt, Maan's uncle, Mr.Sinha won't rest until they were punished.

So they make a great plan, to make them fall for the trap. And as per the plan, Vikas, Bua's elder son, did accept his crimes in open, and now the result, is that he's in jail.. Screaming, shouting, that he'll kill Maan, no matter what.. Let's just see how?!? His mother and younger brother has ran away, to save themselves, and Police is in search for them.

Dadima is broken, with the latest discovery, and extremely worried for the safety of her Grandson. But now relieved, that atleast the unknown enemy, now has a face. Now they knew, whom they should beware of..

Dadima: "Maan bte, I'm not listening to any of your excuses. You're coming with us, that's it. End of the discussion.", she said sternly, and faced the other side, clearly showing, she's not interested in further arguments.

Maan sighed and looked at his brother, while he decided to support his Dadima, "I'm with her.."

Maan then looked at his uncle for help, while he just shrugged nonchalantly, and said, "Anything for your safety.."

Maan just throws his head back in exasperation. Where the hell he got stuck in?!? And the worse is there's none in his support.

The issue is over, Maan coming to a Dargah, where his Dadima wants to thank God, for saving her Jigar ka Tukra.. She wants to pray, for her family, and wants her both Grandson by her side. And as usual our Maan babua is too busy, for all these stuffs. As expected, he has an Important meeting at the exact same date... How typical, isn't it?!?

Well he's too clever, to make his P.A. show that he's having a meeting for 100 crores deal, to avoid these unnecessary headaches.. But if he's MSK, then there is MSK's Dadi. She knows all his drama, and thus becomes overdramatic, to make him agree to his words.. Here comes her sharpen skills of Emotional Atyachar...

Dadi: "Yes, ofcourse.. Nowadays, children consider Money more important, than relations.. Who would care about an old lady, whose last wish is to go for a prayer at Dargah, with her both Grandsons.. I should go to Haridwar, for my rest of the life. None cares for me here.", while saying this, tears comes out of her eyes, which Vicky wipes immediately..

Maan: "Oh God... No, not again... Are you getting started with that again?!? Please change your dialogues Dadima, I'm getting bored of it... Alright fine I'm coming with you.. Now stop with you Haridwar matra..", saying this he left the room, with his one hand massaging his head.

Dadima, immediately, wiped her rest of the tears, and handed the Glycerine bottle to Vicky, and said, "Keep it safely.. Will come in use, again.."

Everyone laughed heartedly, at Dadi's emotional torture.. Womans, I say...

At Dargah...

At offering prayer, at Dargah, he was roaming outside, when, suddenly a weird looking Baba caught hold of his hands. He get suddenly all alarmed, and sensing danger his bodyguards starts separating him.. But the look which that Fakir Baba was giving him, made him feel that he wants to tell something..

He made his BG leave him, and offered him some money. That Fakir Baba, looks at him, and then at the money, and starts laughing, "Everything doesn't revolves around money, Bacha... I don't need it."

Maan: "Then, why did you held my hands?!?", he asked confusingly.

He smirked and said, "To make you see me... See me nicely, and keep my face intact in your memory. U would soon need me. And at that time, I could help you, if you somehow remember me.."

Maan: "What the hell?!? Why would I need you?!?!", he said angrily.

Fakir: "Yes you will, Bache.. Only I can show you the correct path, in that time of helplessness. The raging storm, is almost at your doorstep, and this path, which I'll show you, is the way to your shelter. Your only saviour. Let's see, if you would remember me, and find me out.."

Saying this he left from the place, without looking back, whereas Maan was left behind, with the thought about the Raging storm...

Haven't the storm passed way?!? Is trouble still lurking behind me somewhere?!!?'

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Precap:

The awaited Twist... Let's see how BIG it is...

So friends, how is it?!?! Good/Bad/Okay... Whatever you felt, please do tell me, about it...

Thank you for reading... Waiting for your response...

DO LIKE AND COMMENT...

BUDDY ME FOR PMs...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Andrew is such a great friend 🤗

I loved the way he treated them 🤣

That song is just perfect for that monkeys 🤣

Geet should answer them back

That is gift for geet not curse

Hope she accept soon it soon

That bloody idiots how dare they try to kill maan 😡

Now what is coming again in his life??

Maan safety is much important

When geet and maan gonna meet each other ?? 😃

Wonderful update

Loved it

Thanks for PM

Edited by Asheley - 10 years ago
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Omg absolutely crazily amazing ff yaar.. Geet sees ghosts but not ready to accept it as a gift.. I mean i would probably do the same.. But hey if the ghost starts doing funny things to my enemys i would accept whole heartidly.. Lol.. Cont soon hin.. Cant wait fir the big twist..

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