*Beyond Death*~ new MG SS; Chap 7 on page 35, (09/10)

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WELCOME ALL...




Hi guys... I'm here with a new concept... Changes were made. At first, it wasn't a Maaneet story, but now it is. I'm writing this story for u guys.. U wanted it to be a Maaneet story, so I've made tits an d bits of changes here. So go ahead and re-read the Prologue and CS. And then tell me, if you're satisfied.

I'm already writing ISHQ... REDIFINED, in this forum. But I can't help but pen this story... Seriously I don't know, how many of you are going to like it, but honestly, I've to write the story no matter what...

Lets see how many of you support me, with my decision...

Ok now lets talk about the story..

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Prologue:

At St. Josheph's High school...

It is the annual function of the school. All the parents are sitting in the auditorium, along with their children. Students are performing on the stage.

The Handas and the Khannas are also present there with their Children. Veer, Dev and Annie from the Khanna family, are sitting on the second row. While Brij, Sam and Geet are beside them, with rest of the Handas..

Veer and Geet were the best friends. Geet being a chirpy girl, always occupies everyones attention, but after the accident before 3 months, something changed within her. She doesn't talk much, acts and talks weird, always remain scared, and even talks with air sometimes..

Next turn is of Geet's. She went to the stage, still reluctant. She's getting a weird feeling, like everything's gonna change today. Her father assures her with his eyes that everything's fine.

She went on the stage, and introduces herself, " I am Geet Handa of class 5b, roll no.24. I'm 11 years old."

After the basic introduction, she was asked questions by the judges, to which she answered quite nicely. Geet is a student with high intelligence. She's an allrounder, and can excel in anything she tries. So here she's participating in the Quiz competition.

The judges were quite impressed with her, and one of them asks her casually.

J1: "Do you have any other talent??"

All the colors got drained out of her face. She answered quietly, but hesitantly, "I.. I don't know.. If its my talent or not.. I don't know."

Seeing her hesitant they pesters her a little more, "Common Geet, we wanna know it. What is it???"

G: "I.. I can see and feel people, whom ... Others.. others can't..", here she said it. She's fed up of keeping this thing within herself, and now she couldn't.

The judges and others didn't get what she meant, so they asked again, "Like??? Like whom??"

Geet looked at them with a little confidence this time, "Like who are DEAD... GHOSTS.."

Elders gasp at this, while the students laughed out loud. Geet frowned at such reactions. She's not cracking jokes here. She looks at her family, they are hiding their face in embarrassment, while, her friends, siblings and even her best friend is laughing at her.

Her little confidence, which she gained before a while, was gone now. Still she managed to shout, somehow..

G: "Why are u laughing??? I'm not joking OK.."

The elders looked at each other, while the children are still laughing at her. Geet is already in tears. Everyone are laughing at her, nobody believes her words. Their laughing and mocking faces are swimming in front of her eyes. After trying so much, when she finally told her problem, they made fun of her. It's a huge blow to her self confidence, which will leave a scar on her.

She took a few back steps, and ran away from the stage, crying badly.

But she was followed by another one whom the others couldn't see... Which she called a GHOST...

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This story, is about a girl with an extraordinary power within her, but she doesn't appreciate it.

Lets find out where this power will lead her to.

How she meets her soulmate or say a soul??

How her life changes with someone's arrival in her life???

Will this unwanted guest will become the permanent resident of her life???

What role does Maan play in this???

How was Geet's life before and now????

We have to read further to find the answer to those questions...

So guys, raise your hands, who wants to read further...

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Waiting for ur response...

DO LIKE AND COMMENT.

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INDEX:

Prologue: above

Character Sketch : below


IMP NOTE: page 3


Chapter 1: page 6

Chapter 2 : page 9

Chapter 3 : page 14

Chapter 4 : page 20

Chapter 5 : page 25

Chapter 6 : page 30

Chapter 7 : page 35
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Character Sketch:

GEET HANDA:

Once a chirpy and bubbly girl, is now a quite and a complete introvert. Academically best, but likes to be behind the stage. Beauty personified. But no one has seen that, as she dresses herself to repel people. Beautiful in and out, but hides both behind her thick specs. She has an extraordinary power, but consider it as a curse. Don't like to talk much, and don't make any friends too... Currently, doing her B.com(2)

MAAN SINGH KHURANA:

The Branded Kharus he is. The cold and ruthless businessman. The past, has made him, the person he is today, Whether it is good or bad. Loves his Dadi and step brother Vicky, beyond everything. Runs the Khurana Construction. A self made man, with looks to die for. But he's the kind of guy who wouldn't spare someone a glance more than necessary.

VEER KHANNA:

A complete jovial and cooldude kind of guy. He is a good person at heart, but maximum times doesn't even realize, how his words could hurt someone deeply. Currently doing his Mba final year. Same college as Geet's. Loves to make fun of Geet with his friends, but thinks it is just a joke. Currently dating Sam.

SAMAIRA HANDA:

Elder sister of Geet, and currently dating Veer. She's a complete fashionista. She's beautiful, and loves to flaunt that. She's currently, in the same class as Veer's. She too makes fun of Geet, but oblivious, how much it affects her.

DEV SINGH KHANNA:

Another master piece in Khanna khandan. He's also involve in regular teasing of Geet. Currently studying in Mba first year. Dating NT.

BRIJ HANDA:

Twin of Samaira, and close friend of Veer. He's not regular in Geet's teasings, but have his own share of fun.

ANWESHA SINGH KHAnNA:

The smallest of the Khanna siblings. And the sweetheart of everyone. She too sometimes makes fun of Geet, but actually loves her too. She's in the same class as Geet, and tries to help her indirectly sometimes.

NAINTARA RATHORE:

The proud one. She's always very loud and clear with everything she feels. She's the school friend of Veer and gang, so she knows everything about the annual function. And hence, involve, in their regular Geet teasing session. Currently, studying with Dev, and also dating him.

ARJUN RATHORE:

He's the only person who's not involve in any teasing of Geet. Although doesn't know whether Geet's thoughts were true or not but still doesn't like when the others make fun of Geet. Consider her as a sister, and likes Annie. Currently in the same class, as Veer.

MR. ANDREW SOREN:

DEAD. Ghost. Sees Geet everyday, and watches her life, but Geet ignores him.

The other characters related to Maan's life would be introduced later, coz the story will revolve around Geet and her family now.. So wait for that..

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Congrats on new story 🥳
Not a Maaneet story 🥺
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Originally posted by: --mittu--

Congrats on new story 🥳
Not a Maaneet story 🥺
😭



Sorry, to disappoint you dear. But i already had enough of Maan.. Lets see if you are ready to bear some changes in Geet's regular love format..
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It's quiet interesting
Geet has some extraordnery sight by which she can see ghost.
Waiting to read more.
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Congrats 4 new story


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Wow dear you are quite impressing 🤗
well written 👍🏼
nice concept 😊
loved it ❤️
I always love your stories ❤️
you come with new concepts that i love so much 🤗 ❤️

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Nice prologue and cs.

You have enough of Maan but not the members of Geet Forum. People here love Maan and Geet and what is wrong in pairing them. Maaneet name is carved in our soul so it is very difficult to see both of them with others. We have accepted Ishq... but please make this story Maaneet story.
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Prologue seems intriguing n concept seems nice !!waiting for it ti start Congrats for the new story di :*

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