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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: taanee

Arey Wah wah...kia baat hai new ss

yes😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Prologue but its seems geet loves maan but he loves sameera so waiting to read how maan will start loving geet so update soon
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Part 1


IN an empty classroom a boy enters forcefully dragging a girl with himself..
Maan, what is this leave my hand right now!
Why Geet?
just leave my hand , she aggressively tried to free her hand from his grip
this incresed maan frustration level more and he pinned geet to the wall of the classroom
What the hell maan, leave me!
but instead of leaving her he cornered her between his body and the wall

Why geet don't u like my closeness, don't u like when i hold u tight, answer me geet answer ! huskily he said coming dangerously closed to her

Their faces were just mere inches away from each other

Geet looked in his eyes but then immediately turned her face to other side..
leave me maan , this is not right in her choked voice she said..

Don't u love me?

this shocked her

How do u know..that..i..

love me, i know everything geet ur eyes convey ur heart's message to me
but.. shh..geet not a single word now and he caressed her lips with his thumb , their lips were just a millimeter away when..

GEET!!!! ye larki ek number ki aalsi hai , her mother said while opening the curtains of her room!

GEET!!! UTHH!
she pulled her blanket from her face and made her face the board day light of the real world!

but instead of concentrating on her mother's word geet was lost in some another world..
Geet(st)- what the hell was i dreaming , babaji ye kya ho raha hai mere saath..

geet kaha kho gayi , get up and get ready college nahi jaana..


mom i think aaj college na jao toh hi thik rehega...

Kyu???

woh..woh..

please geet don't start ur list excuses now abhi college reopen hue 2days nahi hue and u are saying u don't want to go ..

but mom..
no geet u have to go, go and fresh up!

hearing her mother's strict tone , geet didn't have any other option rather then following it..
hmm
and she left to washroom to get ready for college

while brushing her mind was again n again going back to her unwanted dream..

babaji what is this, it has been two years since i'm telling u to erase that maan from my mind , heart and soul but no, u r not listening to me rather making me dream all this weird dreams which are impossible to happen, i so hate u babaji!
but thinking deep i think rather than blamming you i should blame myself, i wish i would have stopped this stupid heart of mine 2 years back only...


PAST
2YEARS BEFORE
babaji , its my first day in college help me please..

geet settled on the first bench which was empty in crowded class , it doesn't mean that that she is too confident to face teachers on her first day of college but the main reason was all other seats were already occupied so without any option she have to sit there..
all other students were busy in talking to each other may be they knew each other from their high school times that's why some passed smiles to her but no one came and talked to her as everyone got busy with their own group..
geet was feeling left out now..
few minutes later, a male teacher entered in their class, hello students welcome here , hope u enjoy ur first day here let me introduce myself to u all first , i'm ur geometry teacher and co-ordinater of this department too..
if u get any problem or get troubled by any senior of urs kindly come to me no need to get scared of them okay!
yes sir all shouted!
good

sir was going to continue when someone interuppted him , may we come in sir..
i looked in the direction of classroom's door finding two beautiful girls dressed causaully asking permission to come inside..
yes, first day and u both are late, sir taunted them..
sorry sir both apologised , hmm its okay take ur seats , both accompanied me on the first bench
benches in our class are big at one seat five people can easily sit...

coming back to where i was enjoy urself students as its ur first day here no classes for u all today but from tomorrow be punctual he eyed both girls sitting beside me.. and went from there

what! i got up so early and came here to attend classes and what i get no classes! one of them said

come'on meera it's good teacher wants us to get to know our classmates and get conformtable here first .. u already know everything saracsatically she said
do you have any doubt , she said in her own attitude..
i was just looking at them when pari jumped on me , hey hey i too replied with nervous smile..
looks like u too don't belong to this city..
no i belong from here only..
really?
why are asking this?
look around urself baby , see everyone is busy here with their own bunch of people but u r not!
that i can say for u two too
ya but its obvious we don't belong from this city so we don't know anyone here but what's ur reason?
woh actually , i have completed my schooling in boarding school in dheradun and for college my parents found this college suitable for me so i'm back here!
oh..
after listning mine and pari's conversation meera too joined us
hey what's ur name?
Geet, Geet handa! and urs ?
Meera and this is pari, my best friend , she hugged her from back
we both are from mumbai just yesterday only we shifted here to study here..
oh, hope u liked Delhi
hmm not that bad..
so u both live in hostel?
yes!
and with that we continued to know each other

when suddenly few more students entered inside our class
seeing them mumuring of students started , some said they are our seniors
few students got up to wish them following them all class got up to wish them including us too..

Sit down everyone! one of our senior said
hello eveyone we are ur seniors , some of u must be knowing that and u all must be wondering why we are here , don't worry we are not here to ragg u all as unfortunately/fortunately its banned
but as we are ur seniors we sholuld get a privilege to at least take ur introductions..
what say are u all ready to introduce urself, nobody said anything may be due to nervousness..
nobody has anything to say , anyways we will do what we are here for..
so let's start who will introduce herself/himself first?
mm ..he looked all around and pointed me , girl why don't u start
me i said to confirm
yes u come and introduce urself
pari and meera encourged me..
i left my seat and went in front of whole class , nervously i introuduced myself to whole class , later pari and meera followed by whole class did the same..

he again came infront after everyone introduced themselves

interesting bunch of juniors we have , don't u all think, he asked to his group of friends which came with him ..
all agreed with him
thank you everyone for introuding urself , now its our turn to introduce ourself , we got to know u all and it's ur turn to know us , we believe in give nd take policy

so let me introduce myself

My name is DEV, i'm quite friendly so don't hesistate to talk with me...i think that's enough for now..

one by one all seniors came and introduced themselves, all were quite nice and soft spoken..

dev again came to in front to say something but his eyes caught the attention of someone standing outside the class

guys , u met all ur seniors but not the most important one the genius , the einstien , the charmer of our class and he is.. , he went and dragged another boy inside...

guys meet him , dev whispered something in his ears and left from there..

he gave a tight smile to everyone and spoke
ahh.. hello everyone, my name is Maan Singh khurana and if u want anything else to ask u can ask me apart from my personal life.. staraightly he said

i was bit surprised what kind of introducation is that... who introduces himself like this..


okay here's the first part, i know it is boring as it was just a introduction part...
will update next part soon..
till then give ur reviews for this..

thank you for reading it..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
nice but short part in starting I thought maan also love geet but it was dream , nice intro but give more update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
lovely start with geets superb dream she loves maan very much cant wait to read next thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice part ..
Ohhh that was a dream I thought its real but never mind this will also happen soon ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Geet is in love with Maan and is dreaming of him even though she wants to forget him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written! Geet loves Maan! she dreams abt him n is awakened! She thinks back 2 the first time they met! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome lovely update with geet's dream

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