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Posted: 10 years ago
read part 39 and 40 together
so will comment here for both the parts
loved the way Maan and Parth started gelling with eachother
The football match and their talk after the match was just too good
parth dirtied Geet's clothes too by hugging her thus giving his Chahu a chance to romance with his Chachi
Parth brought life into Maan's mansion and life too
Maan reaching home late and Parth's anger on Maan and Maan passifying him in his own way was really very nice
Now since everyone has suddenly come back and they will be taking Parth Geet has started to feel the pinch
She does'nt want Parth to go away but he has to go with his parents
Parth talking and kissing Maan and Maan's reaction to it has actually astonished his family members
hope Maan takes care of her and shifts with her to Khurana Mansion so that she can be near Parth
loved both the parts alot
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Posted: 10 years ago
heya...u r an amazing writer...i jst read this ff in one go n i really really lykd it...the way u portrayed the charactrs of manneet is jst awsm...u turnd a casenova into a lover boy who hs nt yet realised his feelngs fr geet bt still cn do anytng fr hr...awsm yar..hats off to u...
till nw i hv read ur 2 ff's dis one n lust fr revenge seasn 2...i lykd it too bt lfr2 is passwrd protectd dats y i read it half...cn u plz pm me its passwrd...i hd sent u pm bt u didnt replied...im waitng fr ur reply...n wanna ask u abt ur othr ff's cn u plz tell me abt ur othr ff's...i wanna read them...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.
Starting part was funny. Maan taunting her n our bholi Geet can't understand. Her reaction was superb.

Maan n Parth are very close now. None could imagine that it was possible for them to share the bonding. Parth is angry on Maan but he looks cute.
N Maan now knows how to cheer him up.
This is the training phase for Maan to know how to deal with kids..

Parth going away. It is too much difficult for Geet . No one could understand her pain. I thought she will tell them to keep sending him for few hours so that she can shower her love.
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Posted: 10 years ago


PART - 41



Parth not only leave the mansion but left a scary silence and gloominess behind. Its only ten minutes and dullness occupied not only in the house but inside her soul. She controlled her tears in front of all but after wards her tears broke the bounderies and start rolling over her cheeks. She ran to their room. Maan saw her broken and ran after her. Though he didn't felt the exact amount of pain she enduring but he knew she didn't ready for this as Parth become her life in just few days. Gradually he step in and went closer. Maan turned her to him and tilted her chin up. She was crying so he framed her face and wiped off her tears.




"i want my baby back. Please bring him back." She demands in her whimpering voice. Maan was mute and she was crying for him. He was not sure how will he calm her. Maan snuggled her firmly.




"please mera parth la do." Geet repeats. His absence proven killing for her.


Maan sat with her,taking her in his arms. "Geet calm down,first. You are hurting our baby." Maan's word directly it her conscious. First time he consider the baby not only of his but of both. Geet glance her tears filled eyes. She staring in his eyes,wants to assure what she just hear was her imagination or he really count her. Maan wiped off the fresh warm drops falling from her oceaned eyes. Maan hold her hand and placed on her baby bump. "Geet, Parth is not our baby. He belongs to Dev and Meera. Unka baby hai wo." his voice is so soothing and caressing every disturb element of hers. Maan overlapped her hand on bump. "Geet,this is our baby. this belongs to us and trust me,this will never leave us,always stay with us."

Geet stared in his eyes gazing her with all love. "aap sach keh rahe ho na?" She asked in a baby voice. Her senses wants to confirm again and again. Maan gave a smile and nodded to assured her. Geet raised and hugged him.




"now stop crying or baby will turn sad to. And don't forgot what Parth said at the time of leaving. Don't upset my chachi. So for him and our baby,please smile." Maan stroked her restless body and cuddled near him. Soon she slept in his arms. Maan kissed her and correct her sleeping position so she and baby would be comfortable.


Parth was so excited so whole night he wont let his parents sleep. He share every moment with them which actually shocked them. Maan not only behave well with him but also spend time which was not less then a miracle. Though they got a glimpse of this on Maan's mansion but after hearing about all the incidents a ray of hope enlightened in them.

"Dev though i am still not able to trust bhai. He will turn the tables any time but don't know why i want to believe that now we have a little hope." Meera confessed his feelings to Dev.


"yor are not wrong Meera. I still not able to absorb every thing right now but i strongly wish that this time bro keep these changes with him." he to not sure how Maan react after this whole experience.


Forgetting Parth completely wasn't possible for Geet. By the time passing she getting back to her previous routine. But every time she missed him. Because with him she live every moment of life. Though Meera visit to her with kids to end her lonliness as Maan's priorty was his work,but its not end the glomminess spread in her heart but yes it will help her to get back to her previous life. Gradually she made her understand the reality of her life.

One evening Maan again late in coming and she turned complete cranky. He was strucked in board meeting,which was not a concern of Geet. She made a call to Maan.


After that night he become more conscious towards every call coming from home,so he excused and attend her call. Here he picked and she showered her questions on him even before hearing a greet from his side.


"kaha ho aap? Kab aaoge? Don't you know its to late. Meri ice cream bhi khatam ho gai hai. Aap sab kaam chhodo or meri ice cream lake do." she cribbed bossily and wait her to stop so he can ans. "aap bol kyu nahi rahe? Bolo na kab aaoge." she shoot one after another.


"Geet if you allow me then i will able to answer to you. Stop behave like a jet plane" he taunts in frustration.


"apne mujhe jet plane bulaya?" she pouts and her cheek fluffed in anger.


"sorry jet not suits you. Jet wasn't like you. Usko b command karo to apke according chalta hai. Now be a good girl and ask cook for your ice cream. Don't disturb me i am in a meeting." He instruct her not to bother him again.




Geet wasn't ready to eat home made ice cream. "no i only want xyz's spl ice cream and right now. I dont know any thing." Geet to stricked to her demand.


"Geet... I am busy."


"no no no abi chahiye." She behaved like a small kid and cut the calls in anger.


Maan felt annoyence. He wants to threw his phone on wall but he think wisely and made one call to settle the issue. He went back to conference hall and attend the meeting. Meeting got over soon then and he drove back to his mansion.


There was a complete silence in the house. Maan alerts. "itni shanti." he asked to himself and step forward towards his room. Geet was sat on a bed crossing her legs. She was calm and composed. In fact enjoying a full bowl of her favourite ice cream,which Maan arranged before coming back. He sat next to her but Geet ignored.


"dont you think,tume mujhe thanks kehna chahiye." Maan teased her while trying to get one spoon of ice cream. But Geet was much alert and changed the position of bowl. Maan felt lefted and tried again but Geet slapped his hand. She just look like a small kid while relishing her ice cream. "Geet this is not done. Atleast share one spoon as a thanks." Maan cribbed.


"no this ice cream is only for mumma and baby. Right baby." Geet confirmed with baby while caressing her bump.



"ya but papa to wants to taste na." he tried last time but again Geet changed the direction and this time Maan in actual truned angry and stood up to leave the room.



Geet stopped him,holding his wrist and pulled him back. She raised spoon towards him but he was angry so dont open his mouth. Geet pouts but no effect on Maan. She tried again but he turned his face,so she put the bowl aside and hold his face,turned to her side. "dont show tantrums,or else baby will get angry with papa." she cautioned him. Maan narrowed his eyes and she knotted her brows,commanding him to open his mouth.



Maan lower down her hand tenderly. "i eat my own." he said and raised to her. Geet gasped. She was so engrossed in relishing ice cream that didn't realized some ice cream was smeared on her nose. Maan palmed her nape and pulled her face to him. Very slowly his warm and wet tongue start licking the ice cream. Geet turn numb. His movements were so erotic. Geet soked and craved for more. Maan caressed her cold lips with his. He licked them and nibbled softly. She opened her mouth to allow him to take charge of her. Maan kissed her hard,consuming her breath,relishing her delightfully...




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Posted: 10 years ago

Yaar main pehli baar first aayi hoon tere thread mein.. so kuch prize banta hain na😉


Sach mein miracle hua... I mean Maan and being so mature.. my God i had to read the part again where he was making Geet to understand tat Parth wasn't their baby and just like Geet i too was shocked to hear Maan call their baby instead of his.. Poor Geet she was so shocked tat she had to confirm again even when she was the mother and having the baby inside her..

but watever Meera said was right.. Maan can change the tables anytime.. No one can guess wat he will do so only time will explain and tell us wat Maan is thinking coz right now all he is seen is taking every tantrum tat geet throws at him without much fuss

Edited by sdlife19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww dont worry Geet maybe after this much change you and Maan will be in KM after the baby comes! Meera and Dev are so shocked lol but as parents its understandable that they are concerned for their child's safety! Oh God Geet and ice cream are gonna screw Maan lol!
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Posted: 10 years ago
man to pura change lagta hai kaise guse pe kabu kiya?now he wants his child he wants geet and time will come he will belive in relationship.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww di awsome update me too felt sad ke parth chala gaya but di the best part for me was jab maan ne unke baby ko our baby kahke pukara geet ke cute antics are sooo cute hope di ke maan is changing aur this time for real
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Posted: 10 years ago
Astonishing Update

I never thought Maan would be the one to comfort Geet when Parth leaves I really thought he would be angry that Geet is crying but instead he was comforting her and explaining to her that Part belongs to Dev and Meera so he has to leave and be with them but their baby will always stay with them .

Geet demanding ice cream from Maan and he is busy in a meeting but that does not bother her much as her cravings gets the better of her so Maan has to make a plan and indeed he does make sure the ice cream reaches home even before he gets there .

Both Meera and Dev are shocked hearing about Maan s
pending time with Parth but again they know him so well and think surely soon he will change again but I'm hoping now that he does not change again to his old self and already just by him saying that its his and Geet's baby and the baby will stay with both of them indicates somewhere that he will be accepting his role as father in a serious way and he will be there for the baby but now I'm also hoping that he no longer go back to his past lifestyle
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...
it was quiet obvious that geet will be very sad after parth left ...
but love how maan tackle situation...
geet cravings...lolzzz
msk you are so gone...

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