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Posted: 10 years ago
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Luvly parts.
Waiting to knw more.
How maan will save geet n geet to breakfree from this relation.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Man drowning in guilt as he hears of Geets plight. He is to be partly blamed as she has found that about her husbands cheating because of him. He is also falling for her which could cause them all problems. Geet is in pain physically and emotionally. The man she married has changed completely and she is feeling lonely and trapped.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi all, me back with another update
thank u for all ur likes n comments on the previous one 😃

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updating part 4 ..enjoy reading n do leave ur reviews n likes for me


MG OS : BreakFree



PART 4

najane kaise koi aapki hasi ki waja ban jata hai ...
najane kaise koi ajnabi pal bhar mien apna ban jata hai ..
koi na samjha ...koi na jana ..
kudrat ka yeh khel hai ..
jo bana ho aapke liye
uss par dil tiher hi jata hai ..

The first time she met him ...his drowning deep brown eyes ..his captivating stare ..his charming smile ..those heart warming talks ...but most of all the way he cherished her ..the way he respected her ..that night in the disc she went with her friends to get the pain of being ditched by her husband out of her system ..she dressed like she use to before marriage ..put on a heavy makeup to hide her swollen eyes n pale face from the world ...but he was able looked past it all ...how ... she couldn't understand but he did ..!! his eyes as always pulled her to him ..against all the logics she went towards him ..it was easy to walk away from him that night but hard not to go to that very restaurant the next day in a hope to see him again ..n he was thr ..sipping his coffee ..smiling at her as she made her way towards him ..no questions asked n he was thr with her all evening talking anything and everything ..if anyone would have seen them ...that person would have never thought anything cheap ..they looked like old friends talking ..smiling ..laughing ..teasing each other ...

Can u please give up flirting with me maan ...really please !!

Fine tum nahi koi aur sahi ..


Right ..!! koi aur nahi tou koi sahi ..hai na ..😛

Not bad geet u understand me so well ..So woh dekho woh larki achi hai ...see she has a nyc dressing sense too ..

Too bad but she is taken ...u don't stand a chance thr either ...

How can u say that geet ..

She has been checking her watch every minute .. definitely waiting for her bf ..

No ways can be some friend as well ...

Geet giggled at his confused face ) ..U really don't have any idea ..do u ..??

N u do ..??

Of course ...mere saare friends ki setting school mien me hi karati thi ...it use to be so much fun ..

but yaar wohh ..

okie agar mien sahi huyi tou ..u'll take me to beach wale pav bhaji ke stall ..thats my fav place ..aur agar tum sahi huye tou ...umm ill watch Jurassic world with u as u wanted ...instead of inside out ...done deal ..??

done deal ..i m so gonna enjoy watching Jurassic world ..

in ur dreams mister dekho ..uska bf aagaya ...

N exactly that moment a guy came to that table on the corner of the coffee shop holding his ears while the girl pointed at her watched ...the guy kissed on her cheeks n she went all sharm se pani pani ...blushing smiling ...

See patch up hugaya ..that simple

I still don't get it ...how did u know tht ..

Well thts not the point ... the point is ..now tht u ve lost ur bet ..u r gonna get me out of here to the beach .. 😃

Bas ...is mien kya problem hai ...chalo ..abhi chalte hain ..

Problem hai ..mere guards ..they r outside ...aur mujhe guards ke saath wahan nhi jana ..

Oppsss ...(but that wasn't so difficult for an ACP would it be ..😉😉)

It was so easy to forget about time, place and breakfree of all the ties that bounds her while she is with him ...n be Happy !! be herself ...do whatever she likes to ..have those road side junk food ..wear her favorite jeans n top ..go around the city on a bike ...scream ..laugh ...without thinking people are judging her ...it was thr 5th day .. they were meeting..it had become a habit to meet for coffee at 11 ..talk about random things make a plan while sitting at that very table dodge her bodyguards n go around to execute them ..have fun n come back in the evening to the same restaurant n go home ..when just as she stood up to leave a friend of his came at his table n hugged him ..

Abe saale ..ACP kya hugaya ... dostoon ke liye time hi nahi hai ..🤢 (n then parted only to see maan shocked)... aise kuanse mission pr hai jo call ka answer bhi nahi karta tu ..

Geet stood thr rooted with the revelation n then hurriedly walked away.. maan excused himself from his friend n ran behind him ..

Geet ...geet roko ..meri baat tu sonu ..😲

But by then she had stepped into her car n he couldn't make her bodyguards see him ..the whole night went in confusion n stress if she would come back again or not while she was left in confusion why he didn't tell her ..?? but then even she didn't shared anything with him about her personal life not even her husband's name ..n it was important to tell him what he was playing at knowing Nikhil n his influences she should make him aware ..but then what were they doing all these days ...thr was nothing wrong in making friends ..she hasn't crossed her line like her husband has ...all she did was to roam around with him ..but she knew it wasn't right her conscious knew it wasn't ...that night she cried ..cried her heart out n smashed all the pictures of her n Nikhil together ..

Y ...y did u have to make me do this ...y Nikhil ...kitne khush thay hum aur tum ne ..tum ne sab khatam kar diya ...

She glanced at her phone ..decided to talk to him ..she can't keep mum all her life this isn't right may be she can get things right ..may be what she saw wasn't like that ..just may be ...crying with shaking hands she dialed his number ..but was shocked to hear loud music in the background ...he seemed as if he accidently took her call n now was trying reason is surroundings ..

Geet wohh ..rohan mil gya tha mujhe ..he is here in delhi for 2 days ..iss hi liye hum ...hum yahan disc mien aagaye ...

geet was quite knowing rohan was on a mini trip with his family in Malaysia n cut the call hearing a female calling nikhil from behind ..😡🤢🤢 she smashed her phone on the floor ...her eyes were red with fury ..whom was she kidding after all ..here even after all she saw from her own eyes she was trying to be faithful to him ...feeling guilty to have even have some nice happy moments with him n he ...her so called husband was having fun with other girls sleeping around with them behind her back ..hell she can do whatever she wants to ..

the next day she went to thr usual place she could see the surprise n delight in his eyes ...the smile on his face when she smiled at him ...n she sat thr looking at him ..

so ..u r an ACP ...

geet I ..

tu agar hum mere body guards ko dodge karne ke liye signal break karenge tu koi problem nahi hugi ..right (she took out two movie tickets).. 30 min mien movie start hone wali hai n cinema hall is minimum 40 min from here ..

geet but ...//

hello option nahi Mr.ACP ..mujhe movie dekhni hai ..first ur yukk Jurassic world n then mine ...Inside Out ...n U.R.TAKING.ME.THERE ..Samjhe ..!!

maan smiled seeing the ghost of a smile on her face n shook his head ..

as u wish madame ..😳

it was almost late evening when they finally stopped n sat in a lone corner of the beach looking at the deep sea wide spread ...thr hands entangled unknown to them ..a silence that comforting more then any words in the world can be ..geet was just sitting thr blank gazing at the sea waves ...when maan spoke almost in a trance ...

I m sorry geet ..i don't want to hurt u ...

Maan we never made any promises ...I never any expectations from our ...Friendship ..!! I think we should keep it that way ..

Geet u r too innocent to be in this position ..

Thr was suddenly a smile liting up her face ..

U r ..probably the only one who thinks of me like that ...

Its becoz I can read in ur eyes what u always try to hide in ur smile ..

Geet looked at him n he held her captive with his deep stare making her aware of his claim ..geet gulped down her saliva trying to breakfree of his spell but it was so hard if he doesn't want it ..n he didn't want it at this moment ..thr eyes were locked while he held the nape of her neck diminishing the distance b/w hr faces ..they could feel each others breath hot n raged ...maan looked into her eyes n thn gazed her lips n then back into her eyes ..geet's heart was beating so furiously ..her mind screaming at her to resist but it seemed as if her body has refused to obey her mind's command completely ...she couldn't stand the conflicting voices of her heart n mind ..n she closed her eyes surrendering herself to the heart's desire giving him complete control over her mind ..heart and soul ..

it weren't just lips that touched the next moment it was thr souls as well ...she had never been touched by anyone other than Nikhil before this moment ..but even he could not make her feel the way she did in this moment ...she never knew a mere kiss could do that to u ...her whole body was on fire ..his hands made way into her silken hairs while she held onto his torso to support herself ..his tongue seeking entrance while she was melting in his passion like a burning wax ...loosing herself at his mercy forgeting every rational thought just being thr with him ...as his was her peace ..that was the moment she brokefree of all her ties with the world ...nothing mattered in that moment of pure bliss ..her mind screamed her at to back of n put an end to this sinful act but her heart pleaded to hold on to him tighter .. her soul was at peace after so long ...they parted getting short of breath n geet rested her forehead on his chest while he tipped his head back wondering where is he leading this all to ..he can't get close to her but he knew he doesn't regret what happened ..if he could he would never let her go back to that man ever ...his hold on her back tightened involuntarily ..but he couldn't do that ..he was a soldier on a mission he has a task at hand n he can't let his heart get in the way ...before he could gather himself geet looked up at him ..her eyes were unexpectedly calm ..but her kajal had been smudged he realized while he was lost in his own battle may be was shedding tears ...this was the first time he ever saw tears in her eyes n it was unbearable to see those beautiful eyes teary ..it slit his heart into million pieces ..he wiped the little wetness on the corner of her eyes n the smudged kajal ..while she looked away ..maan glanced at her he was at loss of words ..but noticed her clutching her wedding chain ..

geet ...I ..

tears made way out of her eyes non-stop while she clutched that chain ..n maan realized it was paining her to wear it ..

he ...he betrayed me maan ...I ..(sob)i hate him ...(Sob) I can't ..i can't be with him ..i ..i can't stand him knowing he slept with someone else ..(sob ..sob)😭 i don't even know if I love him any more ...but ..but I know its wrong ..i know what I am doing is wrong but I don't see any other option here ... I m sorry ..i know ..i shouldn't have been meeting u at first place ...but I wanted to get out of this caged life.. n u ...u provided me with the opportunity n I just never thought anything through ...I shouldn't have dragged u in my messed up life ...I m sorry ...I ..//

shhh ...(maan placed a finger on her trembling lips n silenced her ..she looked at him with teary eyes while he wiped the tears off her cheeks n continued to speak without thinking once with his head ..it was his heart speaking hers listening).. mien buhat selfish insaan hoon geet ..mene aaj tak apni life mien kisi aur ke liye kuch nahi kiya ...mien yahan tumhare saath hoon tu apni marzi se ...for my own reasons ..n u shouldn't have any burden on r conscience geet ..that man has already broken ur wedding vows n this ..(pointing at her black wedding chain) ..its nothing but gold n beats now ...nothing ..u don't need to be in its clutches anymore ..(n he loosened its lock at the back of her neck getting it off her neck).. sahi aur galat ka faisla humara dil karta hai geet ...aur jab dil kisi baat ke liye gwahi de tou koi farq nahi parta ke dunya kya kehti hai ...it doesn't matter as long as ur heart knows u r right ..aur yeh jo bhi hai humare beech ...shayad iss waqt yeh galat hai ...shayad hum kisi ko explain nahi kar sakte ke yeh sab kyun huraha hai ...but iss hi mien humari khushi hai ..yeh saath humien khushi deta hai ..wohh sukoon deta hai jo itne saloon se hum dono talaash kar rhe hain magar jo humien sirf ek dosre saath se milta hai ..(tear made thr way out of her eyes while he held her face in his palm gently with ll the love n care n said ever so lovingly)... I know we are walking on a thin line but we'll make it through ...trust me ..!!

jaise awargi ko manzil gayi hu ..
jaise kisi bhatke huye rahi ko ghar mil gaya hu
wohh mile kuch iss tarha
ke rooh se rooh tak ka taaruf hugaya
abb na hu faasle darmiyaan ..
diloon ki hai bas itni si iltija ..

geet had closd her eyes n hugged him ...shutting all her rational thoughts trying to calm herself ...she didn't knew what is going to happen next but she was sure for now nothing can keep her sane but this man holding her so protectively at this moment ...she doesn't remember being held by nikhil like this ever ...being felt so save in his arms like she was feeling right now ...this was forbidden she knew ..but this was her only was to get away from her pain ..her heart ache ..n if being with him is all it takes to avoid the painful thoughts about her husband then she was very much ok with it ..

***^^***

hope u liked the update ..
do leave me ur reviews n likes ...

luv ya
sobia

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesum flow of story...beautifully written...loved it in tons...hope maan save hr frm the hell called nikhil arora
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi shobia
love the update
maan is there with geet ..he knows eveything abt her but geet doesn't ..she is trusting maan but maan???
what will happen to geet when she will get to know what maan has done with her ..
nikhil is too much ..i don;;t want geet to go back to her ..
want some happiness for her
thank u for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
lovely update

aur sbse achi baat

fatafat update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update . nikhil ke dhoke ke baremei jan ke geet tut gyi hai ...nikhil he is such a bustrd ...who does not desrv to be a husbnd . geet maan pe trust krne lgi hai but jb usse pata chalega maan ne bhi usse cht kiya tb kya hoga? Maan ab geet ko pyar krne laga hai but ek aur sach bhi toh hai ...maan kaise geet ko yakeen dila payega ? Uss bustrd nikhil ko hard punishmnt milni chahiye . conitue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n marvellous update! well written! Geet trusts him! bt wt will happen wen she finds out everything? she saw wt her hubby did! she is disgusted n hurt! Maan consoles her! things happen! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a lovely OS... but somewhere feel bad for geet, even maan has not been completely honest with her.. what will happen when she knows this truth.. however i hope maan would be able to save geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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emotion packed story

written well

as said flow is there

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