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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u for reviews and likes 😉

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Previous: PART : 12
Recap:After sometime she doze off on his lap due to the affect of medicines ... he brush his fingers in her hair .. she looks so innocent while sleeping ... he promise himself to give her life of a princess .. she deserves to b treated as a princess ... what she shared with him was too painful , but now she will surely get what she dreamt of ..


Glitter divider

Part : 13

She turns and gets more closer , placing her head more comfortably on his lap ... but strangely he never felt awkward .. never did she make him uncomfortable ... he recalled how close they have been , many times .. still he didn't regret any moment of their closeness ..

He don't know what she feels , what she want ., but he was surely satisfied by every moment he share with her ..

After almost 2 hours , she lazily opens her eyes and find him still looking at her same way , as he was looking when she slept ..

She gets up swiftly..

" itni der se aisay hi baitha ha, main so gai to pata hi nai laga"[ u r sitting in same position from too long .. i dont know when i dozed off ]

He tries to straighten his leg , and it pained coz of keeping in one position for long time .. she notices , and makes a sorry face ..

" sorry , meri wajah se , yeh ... " [ sorry .. its coz of me ?]

" hmm , its paining a lot " he says , n examine her expressions , she seemed sorry n concerned ..

She quickly gets up and brings oil ,

" yeh laga deti hun , shayad theek ho ga " [ let me apply this , u will feel better ] she hold his leg , while he catch her wrist .. takes the oil and place it at a distance ..

"mera itna sa dard nahi dekh sakti..??" [ cant u see this bit of my pain ?? ]

she has no words to answer , she wanted to say yes , but her words didnt reach her tongue .. his gaze was fixed on her .. " bolo na .." [ tell me ?]

she tears the gaze, looks here n there , and tries to get up but he don't let her .. he hold her chin and make her look towards him ...

" muje b aisa lagta ha jub tum khud ko dard deti ho " [ i also feel same when u hurt urself ]

" nahi , aisa nahi ha .. wo meri wajah se tuje dard hua to ... muje acha nahi laga yun ... " [ no , u r hurt coz of me and i dont feel good ] .. she was trying not to look into his eyes ..

"to wo sub kabi nahi karo gi jis se muje dard hota ha ???" [ so u will not do any such thing which will hurt me ? ]he asks in husky voice ...

" hmm ?? bolo ??" [ hmm ? tell me ?]

" nahi ,kabhi nai " . [ no , never ].. she had no option except saying truth when he was observing her so closely ..

" to aj k baad nahi kaho gi k main tum se nahi mil sakta ??" [ so u wont say that i cant meet u ?]

" muje bahar jaana ha " [ i have to go out ] she hardly managed to whisper ..

" yeh mere sawal ka jawaab nahi ha .." [ thats not the answer of my question ]

But she gets up and runs out , then sits near pond ... looks into water ... she need to answer him , but before that she herself wasn't sure if she should allow someone in her life or not ... what if something happen to him too ? what if he don't return ever like others ?? but its been too long she haven't given chance to anyone to come into her life

From too long she haven't shared her life with anyone .. she kept her fears , her pains , her memories to herself only .. but should she give one chance ?? the fear inside her was overpowering the point of giving one chance

He was sitting next to her , observing her keenly , what she must thinking .. is it that difficult for her to allow him in her life ..??? ...

" yeh sub kun ho raha ha mere saath ?? " [ y is it happening with me ? ]

she wanted to know if God is giving her some hint to move on ?? or wanted to test again , what she promised ... she promised not to let anyone in her life ever ...

" itna socho gi to , khud ko hi kho do gi " [ if u think this much , u will loose urself ]

" muje laga main ne pehlay hi sab kho dia " [ i thought i already lost everything ]

Her words were so deep , he didn't want her to get sad again .. but he have no words to console her ..

" agar life new chance de to usse use karna chaiye na ?" [ if life gives a new chance .. u must use it right ? ]

" aur agar haarnay ka dar ho to ?" [ and what if we have fear to loose ? ]

" then think something better is already planned for u "

She gets silent again .. may b its time to get something good for her too ...

"to theek ha , tu jab chahay yahaan aa sakta ha , mujh se milne " [ ok then u can come to meet me , whenever u want ]

He smiled whole heartedly ... hugging her side ways .finally he succeded in first step .. he knew its gonna b difficult but interesting too ... .

" thank u .."

" wo kis liye ?? pata ha tere ko hi problem ho gi , phir aik din tu na tang aa jay ga " [ for what ?? u will have problem urself and then one day u will get irked ]

" aisa kabhi nahi ho ga , I m sure .. " [ it will never happen , i m sure ]

They kept talking for long time, mostly he told her about his choices , some memories , and many other s , she felt he is happy ... she cant get his mood ... in a moment he is angry and other moment he is so concerned ...

checking the time he realized , in all this he forgot , that had a meeting in evening n then dinner party too ... he pulled his phone from pocket to make a call but no signals ...

" tu late ho gya na ? [ u got late ?]

" hmm , aik meeting attend karni thi " [ hm yes , had to attend a meeting ]

" ab to tu kabhi b aa sakta ha na , to ja meeting attend kar le .. hum baad main baat kar lain gay " [ now u can come anytime , so go right now ..n attend the meeting .. we can talk later ]

" hmm " ...

She comes at some distance with him , but then he tells her not to come to road , coz she wasn't fully well ...

...

Its been 2 weeks , he used to come to meet her sometimes daily and sometimes in 2 days , when he got stuck in work .. she was opening up .. not sharing her past but sometimes tellinghim about bj ... he never asked who is he .. he wanted to let her tell everything .. he didn't want to push her for anything , coz it always made her sad ...

She was also happy to have him in her life .. She loved his presence ...

His family was back and he became more busy , it was not so easy for him to come to meet her in jungle but he used to get uneasy if he don't talk to her or meet her .. So always found out a way or other to meet her ..

Glitter divider

As his plane landed , he let out a sight of relief ..finally he was back .. He didn't meet her from last whole week .. As he had to go out of country for an important project urgently n couldn't even meet her before going .. But it was late so he decided to meet her early morning only , unknown of what is planned for him ..

he entered his car from iron gates , he found his whole mansion decorated ... And what was the event ?he knew that ...

as soon as he entered his mansion , anni hugged him ..

"Happy birthday , bhaai.."

He reciprocated the hug ... every year anni will get the whole mansion decorated like this and he will have to give her gift .. and that must b unique

Dadi and rajesh too wish him , they cut the cake .

Anni : so mera gift ??? [ where is my gift ?]

Maan makes sorry face as he forgot to get gift for her .. he did bring few but those were not special n unique ones , as he gives her always on his birthday as a return gift , for all the preparations she do for him ...

Ani : ap mera gift bhool gay ??? [ u forgot my gift ?]

Maan : how about keeping it due for sometime ??

Raj : ani , un ko aaram to karnay dain , he just came . [ anni let him rest .. he just came ] .

Ani : but he never forgets my gift .. then y this year ??

Dadi : unhon ne bola na baad main .. [ but he said , later ]

Maan : no one say anything to my sweetu ... ok tell what do u want ??

Ani : hmm .. I was just kidding .. u take rest .. I know u must b tired ..

Maan : u r my best sis .. he winks ..

Anni : hmm , anni khurana is best .. she says ,lifting her eyebrows ..

Dadi : aap dono ka drama khatam ho gya ho to , maan ap araam kar lain ... [ if ur drama is finished , then maan plz take rest ]

Raj : yes maan , tomorrow u know ,birthday party like every year

Anni : and my gift is due ... ..

Maan nodes smilingly and goes to his room ...

As he lays on bed , he thinks about her , " oh party tomorrow , how will I meet her then ?? " ...

" its been whole week now "

He knew she had a fear that he will also leave her someday and she will have to live all alone again ... he felt she is getting used too of his presence, even she told him indirectly too

Glitter divider

On the other side , geet was restless , he didn't come from whole week ... even she went to KC again , waited for him but he didn't come till late evening and she went back , she didn't ask anyone as last time too guard didn't tell truth ... .

She saw bj that day again , she cant mistake recognizing him , he have oddly different colour of his eyes greenish blue , and that mark on his forehead .. how much she cried for that .. he fell from cycle when they were playing together , and got injured

... but he is no more that chirpy bj now ... he is a young man now , but she didn't meet him coz she herself started thinking that she may be bad omen , that's y left all alone .. ...

She felt maan also left her like her parents , no not biological parents , but she considered them parents only

next : PART : 14

Precap

Geet's heart thumbed faster hearing the footsteps , near curtain ... and then fear encircled her , when he removed it ... her dignity was at stake ..

He tried to hold her .." n..nn nooo" .. she shrinked herself more ... the other man eyed her lustfully ...

" tere ghar se kuch nai mila but tu to mili na " [ we didnt find anything from ur home , but we got u ]

" kya baat ki ha re tu ne " [ wah !! what a dialog ] other one said ..


..Glitter divider

what do u think about this part ?? and precap ?? what must have happened ?... in next part major portion of past will be revealed 😛 .. hit likes n post comments like u always do 😉

Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
DishaMG thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally geet is opening up!!
Nice update :)
Precap is it past or present
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --mittu--

Finally geet is opening up!!
Nice update :)
Precap is it past or present

past 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet ' s family thinks she is a bad omen but why??? and she isn't their biological child? ?? 😕 and precap! !!! 😲 what happened to her ??? 😭
Edited by muskiii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
chalo geet ne kuch toh maan gaye...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet starts opening up with Maan however Maan has to leave for some work
He comes after a week ad its his birthday so his family organizes party
Geet feels restless not finding him and visits to mansion sometimes but still does't find Maan
Precap looks interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
so maan convince geet she should not refused to meet him to her, and then she started to see him quite often and he took enough care of her, and she started to open up slowly and talking about bj, and their parents were not biological parents, but still sh consider them as an parents. maan's urgent overseas trip has delayed
his going to she him and this girl think of he left her and will not come and got agitated.
precap- i think this precap belonging to her past.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
geet has started opening in front of maan though she doesn't talk about her past but talk about bj a bit!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update. Geet agreed for Maan's coming at her place whenever he wants. Maan used to come daily and shared lots of things about him with her. Maan came back after a 7 days trip and was missing her. He got surprised in house for his B'day. Maan forgot to bring gift for Annie and promised he will give it later. Geet also missing Maan .
Precap is dangerous , some people trying to misbehave with Geet. Hope soon Maan will reach there and save her.

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