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sanum23 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
really lovely story
finished all 5 pts in one go
maan attacked by some goons and
his car break also failed his security
did't picking his call its all planede
after assure them self that maan will
b dead goons talked to their boss and
gave news about wat they did
he been shot
and have other injury geet saved him
and put hand made med on his injury
and remove bullet too
after maan awake he realize he is
in different world he was thinking how
she living here he asked the way out
she guide him and didn't want any thing
in return as maan offer her to come with
him she living their since 3years
maan missing her and she also remembering
himafter seeing him going in five cars she
guessed he is rich man
maan is planning to meet her he been
restless after meeting hr and leaving hr
their
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Posted: 10 years ago
next part wd b having maneet together toether.. wooww.. nice update😊
sadumaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG iam stupid stupid girl.. ur updates r fast Amy or iam slow... any way lovely lovely updates jungle girl imprinted on Maan's heart he seems to be out of control.. thinking all the time abt her comparing her with other girls... and finally his heart win yippieee he went to meet her.. waiting for next part.. lovely story.. ur doing great job with it... 👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
All part beautiful written
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RM14

Yes i also forget to mention it.😃

thanguu both 😉
abba12 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

really lovely story

finished all 5 pts in one go
maan attacked by some goons and
his car break also failed his security
did't picking his call its all planede
after assure them self that maan will
b dead goons talked to their boss and
gave news about wat they did
he been shot
and have other injury geet saved him
and put hand made med on his injury
and remove bullet too
after maan awake he realize he is
in different world he was thinking how
she living here he asked the way out
she guide him and didn't want any thing
in return as maan offer her to come with
him she living their since 3years
maan missing her and she also remembering
himafter seeing him going in five cars she
guessed he is rich man
maan is planning to meet her he been
restless after meeting hr and leaving hr
their

thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sadumaneet

OMG iam stupid stupid girl.. ur updates r fast Amy or iam slow... any way lovely lovely updates jungle girl imprinted on Maan's heart he seems to be out of control.. thinking all the time abt her comparing her with other girls... and finally his heart win yippieee he went to meet her.. waiting for next part.. lovely story.. ur doing great job with it... 👏👏

thanks sun 😉...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u very much guys .. i never thought will get such an amazing response 😛 ... seeing ur reponse i want to update the next parts soon 😛... but is that ok with u all ?? or i have to keep my updates slow ??
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Posted: 10 years ago


Previous : PART : 5

RECAP : As they leave maan goes to his car and tell the driver that he will drive himself .. he drives toward jungle , since when he came back , he see her reflection in everything ... he knew he will not be able to enjoy in Canada too ,so he decided to meet her , to finish this story

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Part 6

Parking his car at some distance, he went out with the bottle , and goes into the jungle ,

" hope I don't loose the track , else according to her, will keep wondering in this jungle for rest of my life , how much she knows about this place .."

He reach her hut finally , walking for whole 3 hours after loosing the path sometime n then guessing the right one .. he looks at the place , this time properly .. she was not in her hut ..

He comes out to see where is she .. and there she sat , at the edge of pond ,digging her head in her knees ... he could see her back which was fully covered with her thick long hairs .. he goes toward her n sit beside her ,

"ahemm ,ahemm" he coughs lightly to get her attention

She looks up instantly , blink her eyes twice ..

Tu ??? [ U ??]

" haan !" [ yes]

" tu sach main yahaan ha ??" [ r u really here ?] she touch his biscep

" kun tumhain main sapnon main b dikhne laga hun ?" [ y ?? u started dreaming about me ?]

" pehlay to nai dikhta tha ,par ab ka pata nai " [ didnt dream earlier but dont know about now ] she was looking at him as if he is some other specie .. as no one comes to jungle , last time it was some other scenario ..

He hold her shoulders ...

" main such main yahaan hun " [ i m really here ]

" wohi main soch rahi hun tu yahaan kaisay aa gya " [ thats what i m thinking , how u came here ?] she was still staring at him , he so wanted to hug her .. how beautiful she looked checking him like this...

It was perfect evening , sitting near water , no disturbance .. natural beauty and then she , the unique piece ..,

" tum theek kehti ho ,yeh jaga itni buri b nai ha " [ u were right ..this place isnt that bad ]

she wasn't answering , still considering him illusion , as she couldn't even imagine , a rich man like him will ever pay her a visit , she guessed his status a bit high from the cars that day ...

" Stop staring at me now , muje pata ha main hot hun , but aisay dekho gi to ..." [ i know i m hot , but if u see me like this ... then .. ] she cuts him

" yaar tu to sach main ha ,matlab yahaan ha " [ oh !! u r really here ]

She stands up instantly ... he also gets up

" kahaan ja rahi ho ?" [ where r u going ?]

" tujhe kuch chaiye ?? teri koi cheez reh gai jungle main ? tu yahaan kun lota ?? " [ what do u want ? did u loose something in jungle ? y u came back ? ]

ohhh ! he is here only to meet her and here she is saying if he lost something .. by the way what will he say y he came here ??

" bata na ? kun aaya ha ?? kuch kho gya tera "? [tell me ? y u came ? did u loose something ? ] He looks at her intently , her innocent face looked more cute in confusion ...

" haan ! kho gya kuch yahaan .. us din is jungle main " [ yes i lost something in jungle that day ]

" koi keemti cheez thi ?? ... yahaan jungle main dhoondna to bht mushkil ha , kya kho gya ?? " [ was it something precious ? its difficult to find it in jungle .. what have u lost ? ]

" main khud nahi janta kya kho gya , ya phir main khud..." [ i dont know what it was .. or may be , i lost myself here ]

" arrey pata b nai kya cheez thi ?? phir kun aaya? [ u dont even know what was that .. then y did u come here ?]

" pata nahi kun aa gya main yahaan " [ i dont know y i came here ] there was no excuse ,,,he didn't know y he actually came here .. just to see her ???


" tu to boht confusing ha yaar " [ u r very confusing ]

" may b "

" may b nai re , pakka confirm" [ not may be .. its confirm ] she started moving towards the hut ,

" cant we sit near the pond for some more time ?" don't know y he liked to sit beside her near pond ..

She goes toward the pond and sit there , he kept checking her

" ab aa b ja na , muje bol k khud wahaan khada ho gya " [ now come .. u asked me to sit and now standing there urself ]

Maan sits on her left side

" can I ask u something ? ..."

" haan bol " [ yes ask]

" tumhaari family aur ghar... ??" [ where is ur family and home ?]

"main achi nai hun is liye unhon ne ghar se nikal dia " [ i m not good thats y they threw me out ] he looks at her , clear answer , there was no story building ..he noticed she isn't looking at him ...

" kab ?" [ when ] he thought may b coz of affair with someone ...

" 14 saal pehlay " ... [ 14 years ago ]

" tum ... Really ??? 14 saal ?" he didn't know what to say .. he was speechless ,...

She looked at him , her big beautiful eyes were watery ...

" yeh sub kun janna chahta ha ?" [ y u wanna know all this ? ]

" pata nai , m sorry ... wo ..."

", ab yeh sab ka koi matlab nai " [ all this dont mean anything now ] there was silence for few minutes , no one spoke ... the killing silence ...

" un ki yaad aati ha ?" [ do u miss them ? ]

" pehlay aati thi , ab nai.. " [ i used to miss them before ..but not now ]

she tried to show a strong face but her words left her , she gulped the lump formed due to sadness ..yes she missed her family , she remember every minute of her childhood spent with them, her father , world best mother and bro ...

" tum jhoot bol rahi ho ??? tumhain ab b un ki yaad aati ha na ?" [ u r lying ?? u still miss them right ?]

" haan ! nahi bhula paati , 14 saal ki koshish k baad b nai bhula paati " [ yes ..i cant forget them .. even after trying for 14 years , i cant forget them ]

this was the only thing she failed in ... she dig her head in knees and remove her tears which were unable to control now , he did notice this ... how she was trying hard not to cry ..

He wanted to divert her and she was also not the one who will keep shedding tears infront of him

" I feel proud of u "

" kun main ne America discover kia ha ??" [ y ? did i discover america ? ] she was back to her mode ..he chuckled

" kun hass raha hai ? main koi joker dikhti hun ?" [ y r u laughing ? do i look like a joker ?]

" haan ,mera matlab ha nai " [ yes , i mean no ]

" haan bolay ga to maar nai dalun gi , joker b insaan hotay hain " [ if u will say yes i wont kill u .. jokers r also humans ]

"acha sun sham honay waali hai ,tujhe chalna chaiye , tu jo b dhondne aaya hai wo nai milay ga , jungle main nai mil sakta " [ listen !! its evening . u have to leave now .. whatever u r searching for , u cant find it in jungle ]

" theek kehti ho ,shayad nai milay ga " [ u r right .. i cant find it ] he lost his own self here , in her world or in her..

" mere sath chalo gi ?" [ will u come with me ?]

" hann ! chal " [ yes ..lets go ] he felt strangely very happy ,she was coming with him , in his world ,he checked her expressions ,is she serious ??

" abbey chal na , raat ho jay gi " [ lets go , it will turn dark ]

" tum sach main chal rahi ho ?" [ r u really coming ?]

" hero ! mere khayal main , haan ka matlab haan hota ha , English main yes " " ab chal " [ i think yes means yes ... now lets go ] she started moving ahead ...

" suno , apne sath kuch le kar nai jao gi yahaan se ?" [ listen !! wont u take something with u from here ?] he thought she must take some memory with her ...

" nahi kisi cheez ki zarurat nai ha " [ no i dont need anything ] she just took a knife with her , they started walking , again the same path .. it was too long for maan but with her , it wasn't that long, she don't even know who is he , only she talks to him like a normal person , not as maan singh khurana ...

" apna naam tum ne nahi bataaya ?" [ u didnt tell ur name ]

" kya karay ga jaan k , wese b naam main kya rakha ha ?" [ what will u do with name ?]

" main tumhain kya bulaon ???" [ what should i call u ?]

"main ne poocha tera naam ?" [ did i ask ur name ? ]

" nahi ,but main janna chahta hun " [ no but i want to know ]

"pehlay b bola tha ,phir bol rahi hun , jo chahay bula le " [ i told u already , now telling again .. u can call me whatever u want ] ... she didn't want to tell , she like her name from her mother only , only she could call her " geet " .. she kept her name ,.

they kept walking ... he was happy that she is finally going out of this place towards his world .

Next :. PART : 7


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Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So lovely and sweet update dear Amna.⭐️Wow Maan went to bring Geet to his world and she agrees to go with him,superb.👏I thought she will say no firstly 😉but she's so cute.
Loved her talks,❤️aww so sweet.😳Feeling bad for her,she miss her family too much.
Maan is an awesome person and he lost himself completely.😛Loved it and enjoy reading it so much,waiting for next part.😃
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago

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