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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u so much everyone for posting such wonderful comments .. read each and every one .. loving the response .. each review is important 😛 ... thanks for giving awesome response to my first story 😛 .. i will try my best to keep it different till end .😛 .. thanks to new readers also 😉
what's the geet link to maan will be revealed in the next parts
Thanks to everyone who pressed like button 😛
kitna saara thanks bola main ne 😲😆
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and my kamino frnds where r u all 😡 .. review chaiye tum logon ka 😡. sab ne review dia aur tum log gayab .. 😭 .. jao devil is angry on u all 😈
kan i miss u yaar ..


Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Previous : PART : 4
Recap : The man and woman come towards them and take her away from him , she says again " pls ... plss.." she keeps begging until she was out of sight .. he didnt do anything ...they take her away ...

Then he see some people trying to kill a girl , she was same girl ... " Geet ! Geeet " he shouts and wakes up n find himself on bed ...

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Part 5

Geet's life was same , she got up early morning , after having bath in pond , she went to jungle to find some food for her , in her way she thinks about maan , " bhut ameer ha , phir b mere sath ache se baat ki "[ he is rich man still talked to me nicely ]once she went to market n passing by the road her shoulder touches a guy , he calls her poor creation and walks out rudely towards his car , so she thinks that rich people r like this only , they never talk properly to anyone ...

" main ne hero ki help ki aur wo to muje sath hi jaanay ko keh rha tha , pagal " [ i helped hero and he was asking me to go with him .. ]

she climbs up a tree to pick fruits from top .. " wo pata nai kya khaata ho ga , fruits ko dekh k ajeeb muh bnaaya " [ dont know what he eats .. he made a bad face seeing the fruits ]..

. "usse nai pata 3 saalon baad main ne kisi insaan se baat ki " [ he dont know i talked to someone after whole 3 years]

" main kun soch rahi hun , wo itna ameer ha ,yahaan kabi wapas nai aay ga " [ y i m thinking about him .. he will never come back ] she keeps roaming in jungle and then comes back later...

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Maan was doing better now , n joined the office again .. but everything reminds him about her he will look at kurta in his cupboard while picking his dress , while having meals he thinks about her , how long she must b living on those fruits n vegetables .. since how long she must b walking bare footed , since how long she didn't even have talk with anyone , he was getting disturbed day by day ...he compared her world with his , everything about her was so strange and different , at her age girls dream about beautiful life but she was in that jungle , not wanting to go anywhere...

Maan's father n dadi comes to meet him in his office .. he was still in some other world , they were noticing his changed behavior , n were worried about him , y he is acting so weird

Dadi : "maan ," he don't respond

Rajesh : maan bte ,

Maan : hmm ..

Dadi : maan bte ,we r talking to u .. she put her hand on his shoulder ...

Maan : oh sorry ! aap log yahaan ??

Raj : maan , u r totally changed since when u were attacked

Dadi : yes , if u think they will attack u again , then don't worry they r already jailed ..

Raj : I made sure they will stay behind bars till their life maan , but I want my son back

maan knew they r right ,he is totally changed , his most of the time was spent in comparing the two different worlds .. but he needs to change , this way he will loose control over everything

Maan : I was bit disturbed ,but will try to b normal now

Raj :maan , if there is anything serious u can tell us , I know u r strong enough to solve ur problems urself ,but still ..

Maan : yes , I will try to solve this one too

Daadi and raj leave , while he thinks they r right , he has to concentrate , there is no use of comparison, she is happy in her world and y should I think about her ? he removes her thoughts from mind and start working again..

After a working till evening he comes back to his mansion.. all were waiting for him

Anni : finally u r back ,bhai actually we were waiting for u only

Maan : wahh ! aaj to bari sweet ban gai ho ?kya baat ha ?? [ u became very sweet today .. what happened ? ]

Anni : wese main bitter hoti hun ?? she makes a fake angry face

Maan looks at her ,she is his sweet little sister n he loves to tease her .

Dadi :maan bte ,pehlay baith to jaiye , phir aap donon fight kar lena .. he sits beside raj

Raj : bte , actually decided to go to canada for a trip ,we didn't go from a long time ..

Maan : dad , we went to Australia few months back only then y again ,, I mean ..

Dadi : bte , anni wants to go , she has never been to Canada .. maan never refused anything what ani wanted ... he looked at her and smiled

Maan : ok I will arrange tickets and everything

Anni : oh u r so lovely ! I knew it , u will not refuse ,I m going for shopping now

Maan : anni , again shopping , u went yesterday too

Anni : bhai , wo Canada k liye , I need separate dresses u know

Maan : ok! As u wish .. ani goes off ...

Dadi : each girl of her age do this only ,crazy for shopping and trips

Maan thinks about the jungle girl again , she was almost of same age like ani , but she was so different , not like this ...

He excuse himself and go into his room , and start thinking again , she must have some dreams , if not now but in the past , like anni has , he picks up kurta from cupboard , it somewhat makes him feel her , it had her smell , " don't know what have u done to me ? y I met u ?maan singh khurana don't know what happened to him ...

Next morning , he makes all arrangements for the trip ... he also wanted some time ,to keep himself away from thinking anything about her and her world ... They all were almost ready...

Dadi : everything ready but don't know when will anni come ...

Maan : where is she now ???

Raj: she convinced her friend to come with us and now she is there to bring her .

Maan gets a bit angry ..wasn't it a family trip ...

Dadi : Maan she will enjoy with her friend ...else with us she will feel alone ..

Maan : with her family she will feel alone ????

Raj : Maan aap ko nai pata ...iss age main girls frnds k bagair enjoy nai kar sakti .. [ girls cant enjoy without frnds at this age ]

And then Maan again start thinking about her ..how she must b feeling alone ,living in that jungle ... No friends or family ... and what she said about her childhood ...

Raj : Maan r u OK

Maan : hmm .. Chaliye

But going out he was still thinking about her ...

Dadi : chaliye ... Anni will directly come to airport ...

Maan : dadi actually I have to meet an important client ... Ap log jayen ..

Raj: but u have already cancelled all the meetings , now whats more important at last moment

Maan : dad ! aj hi milna ha ,,its important ...

Dadi : chaliye raj , koi important meeting ho gi tabhi maan aisay jaanay se mana kar rhay hain , warna wo kabi family trip miss nai kartay

Raj : theek ha , but aap hmain kub join karain gay ??

Maan : shayad is baar nahin , ap log enjoy karna main next time aa jaon ga

Dadi : beta hum chalte hain , aap apna khayal rakhiye ga..

As they leave maan goes to his car and tell the driver that he will drive himself .. he drives toward jungle , since when he came back , he see her reflection in everything ... he knew he will not be able to enjoy in Canada too ,so he decided to meet her , to finish this story

next .. PART : 6


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That's it for now .. the part is bit short but had to divide the scene 😛... enjoy reading and plz ignore grammar and spelling mistakes

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Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Me first this time,wow.🥳How sweet,lovely❤️ update Amna dear.😳Maan and Geet both thinking about each other.And Maan's not concentrating in his work either.😳How sweet of Maan to go to meet Geet and leave family trip even for Geet,so lovely.😳He's thinking about her only and Geet also loved Maan's behavior towards him,😛other people don't like her but Maan talked to her and try to help her.👏Loved the update and waiting for next part.😃Update soon.😳P.S-I have unres my post for prev.part also at pg 25.😉
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RM14

Me first this time,wow.🥳

🥳😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update di
Geet's thoughts not leaving Man even for a second
though he is trying his level best..this time dadi didn't keep quiet ;)
Annie is sweet
woww...finally Maan gonna meet Geet
loved it!!
Can't wait for the nxt part di :)
Thank you for the update and pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for prev.time,😳net wasn't working properly yaar and main busy bhi thi na,😳so sorry ,this will not happen again,🤗don't get angry devil,now i'll give you review today only for both parts👍🏼,love you.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --mittu--

Lovely update di
Geet's thoughts not leaving Man even for a second
though he is trying his level best..this time dadi didn't keep quiet ;)
Annie is sweet
woww...finally Maan gonna meet Geet
loved it!!
Can't wait for the nxt part di :)
Thank you for the update and pm :)

thanks 😛.. yeah they will meet in next part 😉
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Originally posted by: RM14

Sorry for prev.time,😳net wasn't working properly yaar and main busy bhi thi na,😳so sorry ,this will not happen again,🤗don't get angry devil,now i'll give you review today only for both parts👍🏼,love you.😃

😈 i want all 😈 ...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

😈 i want all 😈...

All will come,chill chill,net ne sabki haalat kharab kar rakhi hai,woh bhi reason ho sakta hai,😆and ab note read karenge toh aayenge.
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Originally posted by: RM14

All will come,chill chill,net ne sabki haalat kharab kar rakhi hai,woh bhi reason ho sakta hai,😆and ab note read karenge toh aayenge.

hmm they all must come 😆 nai to ... main kuch nai kar sakti 🤔😆

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