Beauty and a Dusht Danav MG *** Ch 6, pg 129 ** new thread link pg 1

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singh24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hello Avi dear...🤗

🥳 wow!! New start ..

lovely part 😃

waiting for Geet's reply nd his next move

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Read the first part in kurbaan hua thread yesterday and was thinking this is not complete. It's just the beginning. It's great that you are going to continue this story.

Now coming to the actual part, as usual awesome. Maan without knowing anything about Geet still felt attraction for her and took it out on her in the form of his anger. 😆 she is fired on the spot without any fault but liked Geet's fighter's spirit. She didn't bow down to him and showed her anger too. Waiting to read more now.

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

congo 4 new story super happy that u r going to write this story read this in KH thread its just amazing maan is so arrogant n geet full of pride cant wait to read beauty n DD 's love story

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ambbiha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Hi read this first part at anniv thread

It was totally different approach to the song

Hats off to u👏

Happy to see u making it as ff

Add me in ur pm list😉

Thanks

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Susmitha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Thanks for starting new one. Waiting for ur new story n u started. First part is lovely. It's mainly in maan view. He lost every thing due to women n hate them. To hide his attraction he blasted Geet n fired her but Geet is not quite will give nice to maan first I thought it's OS but know happy that u r continuing may be it will be SS.

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samidsamid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

i have commented on kurban hua thread also...awsm start i jus love the new os beauty and dust danav...here Geet is nt chuimui typ...and maan being betrayd by pammi betrayl rajveer determined to nvr fall in love...will love to read how these to opposite person...attracted to ech other...updt soon...plz do pm me...

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mauaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

hey aavi.. c i was gonna say u to continue this story n u just did it.. actually i have gave my comment on KH thread but i knnow that wd b difficult to find.. so posting it again here...

dqno1

1st of all want to say to dqno1 that she's completely right... lakshu has tried many times to increases the forum activities.. she's too good.. 😊

btw: lakshu, waah, aavi ne to password bhi aapke naam ka rakha hai.. hamare jiju ko zaroor batana, ki unki lakshmi k sirf wo akele deewane nahi.. list lambi hai.. so b careful..lol😉

coming to the os.. aavi ne kyaa detailing ki hai maan ki..

whatt.. maan thinks v bad about women.. lier creature n what not.. bad boy MSk... 👎🏼

aww.. maan's father's story make sence with maan's hatered towards women.. but i still would say it was not the pammi, but his father who was stupid n fool enough to destroy his own life..

moreover, so what his father n step-mother were not good to him.. his grand-mother never left him.. she's also a female .. a woman... she was the one whos smartness saved their house by pammi..

and and and.. when aavi n geet are togather, maan would b known by various names.. like her "firing don" ..lol

maan ka pata nahi.. apni geet darling is all fida on maan.. her boss.. 😳

but here maan can see the innocence of geet as her trap.. her beauty to make guys fall for her.. he is assuming all wrong things for geet, which she is not.. 😒

here to avoid or more we can say save himself from shameless samira maan took geet on the dance-floor n also showing her an attitude.. v bad.. 😡

n poor geet, who only wants to save her job to survive in the city like delhi is tolerating n dancing with maan..

loved their dancing with verbal fight n maan fired her 😲... booomm... aavi.. iska end to hai hi nahi? it was more of like a new story's beginning.. are u going to write more on this?

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annirogc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

nice start.. angry and arrogant MSK and innocent geet .. maan hates girls and he was thinking like all girls are same.. so he was thinking geet also like them.. he fired her also.. waiting for next

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miss_mystery

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Avi beautiful story dear

loved it

Please bear me with late as im hell busy on coming with co of exam but promise to give reply to your every PM

Sachiii Muchiii for sure

so please gimme your Pm

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BloodDiamond

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

I posted the comment on the anniversary thread
AWESOME start

Originally posted by: BloodDiamond
Beauty and Dusht Danav

Avi awesome 👏 KH Party and MSK is an arrogant hot headed businessman with a past where his father after his mother's death fell for the cheat character of Pammi . When he faced the truth he committed suicide .
Now he has swore never to fall for girls who look innocent and then trap men.
Geet has got a job as Maan's PA but Maan only sees her as trapper like Pammi
He feels something looking at Geet and dances angrily with her hurting Geet
Geet needed this job so keeps quiet but at last asks Maan to shut up from speaking nonsense about her character