Beauty and a Dusht Danav MG *** Ch 6, pg 129 ** new thread link pg 1 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Excellent first chapter
KC hosting a party. Mann is there , girls drooling him. He hates women because of his unhappy past. His step mother pammi deceived his father. He determined not to fall in love. Veet arrives at the party with Pinky. Adi wants her to meet Mann. She needs a job. Mann shows his dislike for her but he is attracted to her unknowingly. He dance with her forcefully. Geet could not di anything other than dancing with him. He said she is fired

I really want to read the next parts. Pls pm me the next updates Avi di
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
That was an awesome one..
Reliving the KH memories..
MSK hates women and Geet hates Men.. Both dont trust the other gender...
and he fired her... 😲
and am so glad you are making it a new fiction...
Looking forward for you to start updating..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
that was awesome part.very fiesty n rough.maan is really a dusht danav in this update n so sad for geet please continue this is as ff or as please its interesting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
congrats on the new story
i have already read first part through kurban hua anniversary thread
loved the arrogant maan
taking a lesson from his dad's life he have decided never to fall for any girl as they all are same like pammi
geet is maan's pa, she comes in party in party looking beautiful
to avoid sam , maan dance with geet and start taunting her
his taunts hurt geet allot and she is shocked by maan's behaviour
now eagerly waiting for next part...
update soon!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Wow.. I liked it.. Avi ur concept is so close to GHSP.. N I am so excited for it... Maan pakka dusht danav hain.. sach mein hamari pyari Geet ko pareshan kar raha hain.. May be any other girl at Geet's face would have slapped him on his face.. what right does he have to judge her character..? stupid..😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46


Avi dear

waiting 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#47





TEASER




She stood stunned for a second watching him stride away through the exit.

He did not just fire her? Did he?

Grabbing her saree pleats a little higher she dashed after him.

He was already out of the main part of the hotel when she caught up with him. Luckily there was no one around.

"Maan Sir ..", she bellowed as loud as she could.

He turned around with a contemptous gaze towards her, his hand still smarting from the nails she had dug in.

She was huffing from the run, her saree held up, revealing beautiful ankles and feet in silver heels.

His gaze rose up to the saree bunched up in her hands by the waist where most of her waist was visible onwards up to the heaving chest and the pink cheeks from her exertion.

Without his wanting it, a reaction to her beauty was humming in his veins. It was alien to him, this weird feeling.


He was Maan Singh Khurana though and he would not succumb to it. He hated her all the more for making him feel this way.

"Miss Geet, in case you have a hearing problem in addition to a problem with standing on your own two feet, let me make myself clear. YOU ARE FIRED!" he pronounced loudly.

How egoistic and biased was he? Typical male who thought the world revolved around him.

Just because he had taken a dislike to her, just because she was not dressed as the others in the party; whatever his stupid reasons were, he could not minimize who she was!

Fairness and equality were the right of every woman on earth.

Mr. Maan Singh Khurana needed to be taken down off his high horse!

"You can't do that Sir", she offered in a reasonable tone though she was burning within.

"I just did" he said dismissively, " .. and no amount of begging or sniveling is going to change my mind Miss Geet. Ek baar bol diya toh bol diya. Bas!"


A/N: Just in case, I was not clear enough earlier. PMs to blog links will be sent per chapter with the password PER chapter.

If you wish to read further remember to comment per part. One or two word comments will force me to stop writing. Do your best to encourage the writers in this forum.

Thanks.


Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

😃 nice tsr
this man is showing to much attitude ..😡
lets see how Geet face him ?


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Lovely part yaar.. Hope to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the teaser
Eagerly waiting for the update

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