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Posted: 10 years ago
~LONGING FOR LOVE~

PART 5

Listening to her , maan's anger shoot he didn't knew what it could be but if she is following him then it could be bad real bad.. Maan went near her and held her arm... He was in a fit of anger and his eyes were showing how much he is despised he is at that very moment.. She was looking with her doe shaped eyes.. Her eyes were expecting him to reciprocate her love.. She smiled ignoring the pain that his grip was giving her.. She was quite but the next moment she was thrown out of the cottage .. It was already night and the cold biting winds were touching her sift skin making her shiver..
Maan : get lost.. Remember I am leaving you.. Agar dobara yahan dikhi toh you don't even know what I will do with you.. Her eyes were clouded with fear and she didn't took a step and stood there.. Maan left her alone and the cottage was also in the deserted place away from the main city.. Maan loved aloofness and that was the reason he had purchased the cottage for himself ...
He didn't felt anything but he was more keen on finding about. Her.. He called his bodyguards and asked them to meet him in the cottage.
Maan was in his own turmoil , he didn't thought about the girl whom he threw out but he wanted to know about what his rivals had planned..
Within minutes his bodyguards came ..even they saw a girl sitting in the small garden of the cottage where she was looking at the dense black sky with a forlon expression... They didn't know what to do , even if they wanted to talk to her , they couldn't coz their boss will not like it...
They went inside and maan was there sipping his drink.. He was thinking something when he asked his bodyguards..
Maan : there is a girl sitting outside I want you to find all her details.. Kahan se aayi hai... And ask her to leave.. Maan had a little amount of alcohol and now didn't wanted to deal with her.. And yes her name is geet..
Maan said after a pause.. He remembered her saying AAPKI GEET and felt an unknown sensation... He could see something in her brown eyes but there he could only see some expectations.
The bodyguards asked the girl to leave she first didn't responded and then she stood and walked few steps ... There was nothing for her.. No one know her she was all alone now.. Bodyguards were even surprised but didn't said anything they knew maan's temper.. He doesn't talk much and was rude..

Meanwhile geet was in her own thoughts.. it started snowfall after some time and she was thinking about the beautiful moments that she spent with him. Her love .. Her Arjun..
But why he was doing this she was having no clue.. Her feet took her to the deserted place there was nothing she looked at the small place where people might have worshipped... She fell down there and cried her heart out..
Geet : mera Arjun aisa kyun kar raha hai.. Bataiye mujhe ... Mujhse much galti Hui hai.. Mujhe pata hai.. She sobbed and talked like she was talking to someone present there.. In her aloofness and betrayal she didn't knew what she was doing.. She couldn't differentiate what she was saying.. Whom she was saying.. She was saying some thing.. And asking for the answer..
Geet : bataiye Maine kya kiya... Mera Arjun kyun kar raha hai aise... Mujhe mera Arjun dedo.. Mujhe mera Arjun dedo... Please.. She beges cried and finally passed out With the exhaustion.. She couldn't say anything.. She had been frantic in finding her Arjun from last two years and finally she found him... She was no mad.. She was his love..
He was hers she knew..

After sipping his drink maan tried to do the work.. He was here for an important project and he can't let any distraction ruin him.. He looked at the files and tried to concentrate but every time her words were reverberating in his ears.. How innocently she was confessing she loved him... She was there from last two days.. He didn't knew he was a fool , geet was staying in the lone corner and he saw her sleeping on the floor that day only.. But as she said she fillwes him that means she was there yesterday alsoo. something kicked him.. What he was doing yesterday that he didn't saw her.. Maan was in his thoughts .. When he remember that he was not in the cottage yesterday.. Spent whole his day on the site and in the morning when he came he saw her.. Sleeping..

Maan : how is it possible .. Maan you need to be careful... He closed the file in frustration and looked outside to see if she was there.. His eyes were looking in all the directions and was disappointed when he didnt saw her ..
Maan : acha hua chali gai.. She might have known with whom she was messing...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Read part 4 n 5.feeling very bad fr geet... Maan suspect her to be sent by his rival n did not trust her. The moment she reveal the truth how she saw him n hide in t car to the cottage. Maan in rage throw her out n ask his body guard to check her background... Geet love is arjun n thinking maan as him. Hope maan save her from the snow before too late..
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part.. geet telling maan she love him.. but she loves arjun.. then who is arjum.. waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
i was right geet loves arjun n thinks maan as him only
interesting past but how did maan actually fall for her n taking care og her??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely updates, maan doubts on geet thinking she is been set up by his rivals, I totally agree with maan. Poor geet she thinks maan has her love Arjun. What is the story behind it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
In maans position anyone will be suspicioua
He doesnt want any hindrance in his project
The way geet tells ecerything
He want to believe her
But he is getting suspicious
What will he do to her
Nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan threw her out of cottage
N asked his bgs to find about her details
Geet asking why arjun is behaving like this
Is she betrayed by arjun
Or she lost her love
She is like this
Poor girl passed away in snow
Hope maan finds her
Nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet was loving arjun and thinking maan as arjun omg abh kya hoga
arjun ? Nice part thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely parts just read part 4 and 5...feeling bad for geet ...but who is arjun and geet love him...???
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sad update.. Maan throw Geet out of cottage and asked the bgs to find out about her...Geet is in love with Arjun and she is thinking maan as. Arjun... Where is Arjun and why he left Geet... Poor Geet passed out in the snow...

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