CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93 - Page 63

Thank you Avi for giving us such a crazy amazing story n You are Wonderful writer u know na love u lotsss dear ...
I will miss my crazy Maaneet n they both made me laugh like crazy with their innovative hilarious thoughts and their uniq action...
I think this was the only story jisne mujye bhi innovative baana daala mere comments like story humre comments bhi funny note the n I still can't believe that I literally come up with funny remarks ohhh ...the name I given to maan...
I miss my Pinky Buaa's male version Msk , Our Self obsessed and the I-Me-My-Self attitude n his self boosting he reminds me jeb we met ki geet Mein Aapne Favorite Hu... and giving complement like Kabhi Khushi kabi gam ke pooo waala remarks Tumhe Koi Haq Nahi Banta Tum Itne Khoobsoorat Lago...
Geet uff the tv quwen and I-know-everythings n her all kind of history geographical gyaan how I forget her medical knowledge ,no maan ki maan-ness ki aayse dhajeyaa uddye ki bas puchoo matt n they way her mind work its literally Injurious To Anyone's Healthy Mind ...

But Both were so innocent in their own way and at the same time also immature n I enjoyed the whole journey n its started with the A Childhood to Teenager to A child like Innocent Immature Maaneet I just love it n their roller coaster hilarious maaneet ...even the pillow who was on maan's torture spree n his Dukhe Bhari Daastaan LAMO ...
The impatient maan became patients maan he gave her much needed space n its worth it geet realise her feeling n they became maaneet n It was really beautifully penned down...

maaneet's first hug as girlfriend-boyfriend n geet ws soo excited with her new found love ... maan gave space to geet n finally she confessed said the three magical word ILU to him n munda on cloud nine...
Aww how sweetly she got cricket back in his life in her own sweet way and he couldn't refuse her I loved it ...

The poor pillows heart broken part damm funny specially this dialogue by the pillow "Let's make a pair quickly.
But very bad u didnt say did the pillow got the perfect match hope he will gets his cushions heheheh...
The last part
Omg then the shoulder kiss and lantern part u know we still crib about it in GHSP mein maaneet aur humre saare ahem ahem me villain aur humre tamanaoo pe pani pher daala bas dukhte raag pe hatt rakh deya LAMO...
Maan toh maan hai he got full green signal n he did it and I can imagine what happen behind the lanten bubble n all ...
fantastic ending...unique style ending to this unique love story an perfect ending to this crazy couple ... Brovo Girl n seriously deserve applaud you for your successful attempt at comical journey of this story ... Hope we are getting an epilogue plsss pretty plsss ...
Husshh finally I able to comment nahiii nahiii aysa nahiii ho sakta here I know I'm being to melodramatic hehehehhe...

Originally posted by: brandgurti

Thank you Avi for giving us such a crazy amazing story n You are Wonderful writer u know na love u lotsss dear ...
I will miss my crazy Maaneet n they both made me laugh like crazy with their innovative hilarious thoughts and their uniq action...
I think this was the only story jisne mujye bhi innovative baana daala mere comments like story humre comments bhi funny note the n I still can't believe that I literally come up with funny remarks ohhh ...the name I given to maan...
I miss my Pinky Buaa's male version Msk , Our Self obsessed and the I-Me-My-Self attitude n his self boosting he reminds me jeb we met ki geet Mein Aapne Favorite Hu... and giving complement like Kabhi Khushi kabi gam ke pooo waala remarks Tumhe Koi Haq Nahi Banta Tum Itne Khoobsoorat Lago...
Geet uff the tv quwen and I-know-everythings n her all kind of history geographical gyaan how I forget her medical knowledge ,no maan ki maan-ness ki aayse dhajeyaa uddye ki bas puchoo matt n they way her mind work its literally Injurious To Anyone's Healthy Mind ...

But Both were so innocent in their own way and at the same time also immature n I enjoyed the whole journey n its started with the A Childhood to Teenager to A child like Innocent Immature Maaneet I just love it n their roller coaster hilarious maaneet ...even the pillow who was on maan's torture spree n his Dukhe Bhari Daastaan LAMO ...
The impatient maan became patients maan he gave her much needed space n its worth it geet realise her feeling n they became maaneet n It was really beautifully penned down...

maaneet's first hug as girlfriend-boyfriend n geet ws soo excited with her new found love ... maan gave space to geet n finally she confessed said the three magical word ILU to him n munda on cloud nine...
Aww how sweetly she got cricket back in his life in her own sweet way and he couldn't refuse her I loved it ...

The poor pillows heart broken part damm funny specially this dialogue by the pillow "Let's make a pair quickly.
But very bad u didnt say did the pillow got the perfect match hope he will gets his cushions heheheh...
The last part
Omg then the shoulder kiss and lantern part u know we still crib about it in GHSP mein maaneet aur humre saare ahem ahem me villain aur humre tamanaoo pe pani pher daala bas dukhte raag pe hatt rakh deya LAMO...
Maan toh maan hai he got full green signal n he did it and I can imagine what happen behind the lanten bubble n all ...
fantastic ending...unique style ending to this unique love story an perfect ending to this crazy couple ... Brovo Girl n seriously deserve applaud you for your successful attempt at comical journey of this story ... Hope we are getting an epilogue plsss pretty plsss ...
Husshh finally I able to comment nahiii nahiii aysa nahiii ho sakta here I know I'm being to melodramatic hehehehhe...

Thank u so much for your entertaining comments 😆

I was very nervous about the ending since everyone expects a swoon thud ahem ahem romance from me but this seemed more fitting and in flavor of the story.

I am glad you enjoyed it. 😃

Originally posted by: singh24

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Hi Barbie doll 😃

Yes still at work 😕

How are you? 🤗

Fantastic ending...👏 👍🏼 👏

An Awesome end to a beautiful love story...

Originally posted by: UNICORN75

An Awesome end to a beautiful love story...

A love filled update with all sweet moments...

Loved how Geet finally said the three words

Kudos to AVI👏👏👏👏👏

Thank u😃