CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93

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crazydream

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Posted: 10 years ago

#641

Hey di

I went missing from this thread for 1 month as i was busy in my colg assignments. It was hectic. Don't think I stopped reading ur works. I m a fan of u n can't leave u. Now I m back n will be regular.

So pls give me password for Ch 19 so I can continue it.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#642

I am back from vacations...

read chapter 19...

really very very funny...

kya kahun aur kis line ke liye kahun...poora update hi hanste hanste meri haalat kharaab ho gayi...

Maan apne hi khayaalon mein dooba hai and Geet is in doctor's mode always...he is kissing her and she is thinking about all the germs and mouthwash...

waiting for links and pw for next parts...

thanx for pm and pw for chapter 19...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#643

Link to new story😃

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4410092/beauty-and-a-dusht-danav-mg-ch-6-pg-129-new-thread-link-pg-1

Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#644

part 20 is very serious...

Geet ne Maan ka dil tod diya...

but no fear when Daadi is there...

she sent Maan away and now Geet is missing him...sach hi kehte hain isko jhalli Geet...

waiting for pw of next part...

thanx for pw of part 20...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#645

Awesome update, please send me password for part 21.

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#646

Last part

Aww.. this too ended.. I am missing all Geet's disease diagnosis.. but finally girl in love with MSK how can now think like that now.. n finally I love U from Geet to Maan.. his heart desire get completed.. Poor Pillow he was so eager to go to princess soft arms but he was thrown out.. Poor pillow but he too got someone.. our Avi is so soft for love birds.. 😛 will miss this story so much.. Maneet n Adi's masti too..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#647

part 21...

daarji is absolutely right...itna pyaar karne waala Geet ko Maan ke alawa koi ho hi nahin sakta...

Maan ko itna seriously sochte hue achcha nahin lag raha hai...he now understood that he assumed many things himself which were not correct from Geet's side...he rushed with his feelings and ego without caring what Geet wants...and this is the main reason of his failure...

but Geet was the jhalliest girl...aakhir tube-light jal hi gayi...

aww Geet ki sweet complaints and Maan ko puraane avataar mein aane mein time hi nahin laga...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm and pw...

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2thless

@2thless

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Posted: 10 years ago

#648

thanks for the Pm and m sorry for the late comments...
was on vacation for 2 weeks - and ofc being the only place where I have time to read updates... cudnt read the stories.. 😉 m slowly catching up with all the stories now...
loved the update... Geet realizing her feeling over time - from adoring to liking to respecting and finally loving Maan was a nice journey... and Maan control so that he does not loose her again shud be applauded well... the pillow got a partner too...👏 the tabela scene was hilarious too - thankfully Maan royally ignored that... 😆 I always wanted to know what Maans reaction would be when she tells him about all her medical assumptions were about his each move was in the initial period... I wish that was elaborated a little more... but nonetheless loved the whole story... I mite just ping your for all the pswds again to reread it in one go...😉
and I think you write comedy well as romance -- I am a fan of laal ishq too... m a bit disappointed that this ended though... but I guess it had to end someday... 😊