CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93 - Page 61

Hi

hey just came across your story it looks interesting i want to read it all can i have pm or blog link and its password ?

Wonderful update

Omg it's ended 😭 I'll so miss this male egoistic n most definitely self loving man and the medicpedia Geet

Part 21 was perfect the bulldog turned into a puppy, a love sick puppy 😆 finally Geet realised and focused on her love. I love the fact that maan left it to Geet yo figure it out. So she came to a conclusion on her own, not that I don't live a helping maan but sometimes it's best to leave a girl to be 😉

Dadi and darji are ever so supportive, darji retired to be near Geet awww. I love the bonding you show between darji-Geet and maan-dadi in your ffs. Pinky and adi together, I would have love to know what happened to the violent Sasha. Raji although not shown much but a helping hand, after all she did help our not-so-smart Geet.

The truth about nupur and I can't remember the other is out, boy would I love to be there to witness maan laughing and Geet shying. Bulldog is a dialect spectator of love but comes alive during horror movies, so take it that maans ego and make pride didn't die although maybe taken down a notch or two. Not that I'm complaining, I did like this so out of character maan and his sweet sweet nurse with weird treatments I mean an eyedrop for the ever famous eye lock out maaneet is known for 😆

Coming to the end I loved it, you've shown the progression from confusion to love. Geet finally admitting helped maan, poor maan he had expected he to fall flat the first minute but see a little preservation and hard work takes to places. In this case a lot of work and wait 😆

pillow found a partner, I never got the pillow philosophy but happy that every one got a happy ending

Overall I though this was one heck of ride, personally loved this new take on pride and prejudice. Honestly maan was someone I love to here for his silly ideology that girls or shall I say Geet will be flowed with jus hotness and personality. So liked the changes in him and Geet. I loved this laugh riot.

A big big thank you for an exceptional ss. Now what would I do, this has ended and I'm nearly finishing locket. My life would become Avi freed 😭

But on the whole I would recommend this as to anyone with a funny bone, if laughing is your passion then this ss should your mission 😆

Amazing ff, once again thank you for making me look like a fool in my train journeys but ain't complaining 😆 since its s splendid story

Thank you

lovely update

Originally posted by: sophiexx

Overall I though this was one heck of ride, personally loved this new take on pride and prejudice. Honestly maan was someone I love to here for his silly ideology that girls or shall I say Geet will be flowed with jus hotness and personality. So liked the changes in him and Geet. I loved this laugh riot.

A big big thank you for an exceptional ss. Now what would I do, this has ended and I'm nearly finishing locket. My life would become Avi freed 😭

But on the whole I would recommend this as to anyone with a funny bone, if laughing is your passion then this ss should your mission 😆

Amazing ff, once again thank you for making me look like a fool in my train journeys but ain't complaining 😆 since its s splendid story

Thank you

@underlined: 😆 you should be happy

Originally posted by: mskfan

Commented on page 80

U so much my amazing writer ,for the lovely romanatic nd comedy story .will miss u so much ;)

Thank u🤗

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Avi 🤗🤗🤗

You are Great u know 😉

What a lovely Ending 😃

Speechless.. It was like I'm watching some movie's epilogue 😃

Maan ka sabar finally rung laaya.. Geet fell in love with him.. 😳

haaye bechara Pillow hahaha specially this dialogue by the cutie pillow "Let's make a pair quickly. Avi ki story hai. Har couple ko happy ending deti hai". 😆

Pillow ko bhi sach ka pata hai 😉

You rocked it 😆😆

Love sick Maan emerged as more mature man as well Geet 😃😳

OMG innocence kahoon ya bewaqoofi ya craze of serials 😆🤣

He kissed he on shoulder and her reaction wallah 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

and the this is soney pe suhaaga 🤣 "Aap na! Aap ko kuch nahi aata", she mumbled away.🤣🤣🤣

Finally he got the Green signal.. and I can imagine what happen Next 😉

Love n Huggs Avii 🤗

Avi ka comment Avi ke blue me 😆

Thank you Jaaneman🤗

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

I will so miss this crazy MG Avi. They both had made me laugh with their thoughts and actions. Both were so innocent in their own way and also immature. But one moment changed everything. One experience and their eyes were open.

I loved how you got their journey of being lovers in this update. Maan who was so self centered, Geet became his entire world. Her happiness mattered more than his wishes or desires. And just like that Geet too started caring for him, loving him, he became the center of her world. It was really beautifully penned down.

Maan became patient with her and gave her space and time even after getting into the relationship. In this period Geet explored and discovered her feelings for him. It was all so perfect.

And she shared about her crazy assumptions with Maan. She had made him a patient of all disease. Not to forget even Mayank Nupur stories were shared. Haayee. Her innocence and his naughtiness waiting for green signal was so adorable and funny. He is incorrigible.

Glad that she got cricket back in his life in her own sweet way and he couldn't refuse her. Even Dadima's health started getting better. The understanding and tuning also became so strong with time.

That pillow part was hilarious Avi. Very unique I must say. 😆

And then the shoulder kiss and lantern part was 🤣 God we still crib about it. 😆

Loved loved loved the update. Perfect ending to this crazy couple. Hope we are getting an epilogue Avi.

-Sanjana!

Thank you Sanjana😃