CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#591

last part - perfect ending. loved how you mentioned simple, small small things that brought them closer. how they spend their almost all time together.
geet needed time and finally she realized he was a full package that any girl could ask, loving, caring, understanding, pampering, bossing, even taking disadvantage of situation while watching horror movies...lol.
glad geet's craziness for serial & films reduced. but she tested her medical knowledge every now & then on him.
all hidden stories came out. liked maan teasing her on mayank & nupur. liked how she took out the guilt of his parents death b'coss of his cricket.
pillow monologue was hilarious. she broke pillow's heart..lol..
she is still jhalli when read about her gyan behind shoulder kiss and stable and lantern. but bulldog was more interested in action than her gyan...lol
enjoyed the story a lot.
pl start new one asap.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#592

epilogue hai ke nahi 😊

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#593

keep alive the writer in you. hoping for new story. 😃

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#594

That was a lovely ending...

Finally both of them are together and enjoying the phase of love..

And Geet got out of her serial mode and understood things and the same with Maan.. he just got over his over confident mode..

and finally he did come to know about Mayank and Nupur.. 😆

Loved the update... are you planning to write an epilogue?

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Doracake

@Doracake

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Posted: 10 years ago

#595

Oye where is the link & pw ????? are hum loyal reader ko to de do

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archana roy

@ArchanaRoy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#596

hwww last part ...

mood chala gaya comment karne ka

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rost

@rost

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Posted: 10 years ago

#597

Chapter 21. Finally Geet has realised that she does feel for Maan.

Adi is a very sweet friend. He may have teased Maan when they were alone, but in Maans absence, he tried to fill Geet with all the information of Maan. Especially about Maan loving a girl since childhood. The cricket thing was really sad though. Poor Maan, he's blaming himself.

Finally Geet has realised that her theories were weird, since she was prejudiced against him.

Maan Geet scene was really sweet. Took you back to old days. So sweetly she called him boyfriend. Suddenly, Maans mood changed from gloomy to happy.

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rost

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Posted: 10 years ago

#598

Last part. Such a beautiful ending. How Maan changed for Geet. From a self obsessed Maan to a Geet deewana. They finally confessed to each other. Geet about her weird thoughts about him, and Maan his possessiveness about her.

Loved how Geet made him promise that he would start cricket again.

Finally Geet has said I love you to Maan. Cutest part is Maan romancing with her, and she talking about tabela romance. Not that Maan paid any heed to her.

Feeling very sad that the story has ended. Please can you start a new story. Of course, after your hand has healed.