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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice n naughty update
another love story start with adi n pinky

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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting for part 157 love blossom
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
nice maan k rivals maan par attact kr rhw h
aur geet k saath jo ched chad ki gyi wo unhi ne karayi thi
wating for nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
chalo maan ke liya kiss day was good😉😉😉
maan ki dusman want to kill him 😲😲😲
maan coime to hug geet 😉😉😉
poor ayesha injection laga para 😕😕
chaloo appa ke passs 😆😆😆


maan in faul mood
geet ne acha bana diya mood ko 😳😳😳
adi n pinky ka mamla fit hogaya 👏👏👏
maa beti ki natankio 😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Wonderful update
Ayesha crying to put shots
Pinky adi love story started
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Update part 157 love blossom soon di
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
loved the update,it was indeed wonderful after a long waiting!
geet so innocent cant understand at alll and maan so romantic.always in romeo mood seeing geet !
waiting for the next update..plss and want a long 1!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98


THANKU FRIENDS FOR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL..MUAH


Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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( THANKU SHRUTHE DII FOR A LOVELY

BEAUTIFUL BANNER)


- 157

Both girls look at each other,Ayesha lean on him,Geet too lean on him, both girls started to play with his buttons,Maan chuckled to see they nautanki,he know they putting maska

Holding both his girls : wat u want

Geet look at Ayesha and both look at Maan,who was giving them a look like wat

Geet: wo we both want to go to shopping and u have to take us

Maan: no way im busy

Geet pout: i know u don't have any meeting now

Maan: no meeting tat does't means there is no work i have to check te presentation

Geet: pls naa,pulling his tie,Ayesha too pull his tie

Maan: wat u both want to buy

Geet: 2mor valentines naa so we have to buy dress so many things haina kutty

Ayesha nodes: hmm

Maan was worried abt they safety,after knowing abt the attrack, he was worried more now but he can't let them know tat and make them tensed..he is not worried abt his safety he can manage anything but with his girls, he look at them who was giving a puppy face

Maan: Geet we will go some other day,Raghav and Prithiv nor Bahadur is not there,he know Raghav went to track them,Prithiv after drooping Geet-baby to kc, went with dadi and Bahadur with Anni

Geet: but our personal Body guard is there for us,Maan look at her,our superman MSK.Maan glare at her

Ayesha played with his button: appa pls..

Geet too lean on him and hold his tie : appa pls

Maan look at his two babies,he sigh and node yes..both kissed him on his cheeks,jumping in joy, they dragged him before he change his mind

They sat in te car..Maan in driver seat and Geet next to him with Ayesha on her lap..

Ayesha was just lying on her chest hugging her..Maan look at them and wonder how cum they both are very silent

Maan: wat happen

Geet: we both are hungry,and just hugged her

Maan: hungry then we would have order some thing with a frown face

Geet: no we both want to take our Maan for lunch date.haina kutty she node yes yes.

Geet was sad seeing her kutty who was sad after te shot..she want to cheer her so she planned to take her out along with Maan as she always want her appa wen ever she was not ill..

Maan roll his eyes seeing them and smile caressing Ayesha's hair,they reached te restaurant..Maan look at them, they mens open te door, all went inside..Geet asked his bgs to have lunch as it was time,they smile and went to have lunch but keeping eye on Maaneet and baby

Maan order a baby seat for Ayesha..Maan look at them for te order

Geet: i want to have south indian with so much spicy..Maan look at her why i don't know im carving to eat spicy..

Maan node his head seeing her carving thinking now itself tis condition wat will happen wen she gets pregnant,his days will be hell, he stare at her and imagine her how she will look with baby bump but just chilled thinking abt his sherni who will eat him as Maan 65 for her lunch if she gets to know wat he is thinking.

Ayesha: me too want wat amma is eating

Geet kissed her..waiter came to talk order

Maan: two south indian meals and one punjabi meal..today Maan too had mood to have Indian being with his girls he too started to have Indian,Geet smirk,Maan ignored her and to waiter but less spicy

Geet node her head nothing can he done..Waiter was abt to move..

Geet : I want chicken tikaa hmm, Maan roll his eyes,

Waiter left Geet went behind him and said something,waiter node and left to bring they order as soon as per Msk's strict order,he cant let his girls wait so long..

Geet : wat Maan ur taste buds are changing nowadays shift to indian leaving u r boring pasta..r u pregnant

Maan eyes pop to hear her words: Geet,he felt embrassed,he look here and there ,thank god they were at corner place

Ayesha : appa carrying baby,wow she clapped her hands

Maan gritted his teeth : Geet just shut up,u r spoiling my baby too

Geet : dare u thought to betray me

Maan: i know Geet wen a person is hungry they mood will think all stupids things,don't worry ur order will cum soon so stop eating me, Geet twister lips..ok wat u said to tat waiter

Geet look at Maan and gesturing like see Ayesha,Maan didt get her antics,Maan twisted his eyebrows..

Maan: wat..Geet want to tap his head..

Ayesha: ayyioo appa u r buddhu

Maan: thanku baby

Ayesha: then wat amma ask te waiter to cook less spicy for me as i asked same like amma naa..Geet gap at her kutty who was getting smarter day by day..Maan look at her, as she don't want me to know tat but u asking her again and again in front of me,how she will answer

Now it Maan who gapping at his baby and look at Geet who was giggling at his plight..

Maan: I was always worried for my baby , Geet look at him,thinking being with her amma she will became dump like her but thank god baby got my smartness, im so happy baby

Geet open her mouth glaring at him: wat im stupid she stared to smack him

Ayesha tap her head: will both stop im hungry here

Geet frowned and turned her face ..Maan kissed his baby's cheeks,soon they order came ..Geet served Ayesha and thought to fed her

Ayesha: amma i will eat u eat u too hungry naa

Geet felt overwhelmed with her baby she just kissed her forehead and hugged her..Maan was admiring maa-beti who behave some times like kids and some times very matured,no can say they are not blood related..opps wat he is thinking he just chilled himself and saw them

Maan: Geet u won't serve me

Ayesha: r u baby u serve urself appa

Maan frowned,Geet served him,all stared to eat..Ayesha took te food in her small hand and try to fed Geet,Geet smile and hold her hand and took te food..Ayesha then took another morsel and raised to Maan, Maan look at her and took te food

Ayesha: appa now u fed to amma..Maan took a spoon and fed to Geet..Geet glare at him..

Maan: wat

Geet: fed with ur hands

Maan sighed and fed with his hands.

Ayesha clapped: now amma fed to appa naa

Geet look at her then Maan then her plate,tis very spicy and she know he cant have it,she sighed and took a morsal from Ayesha plate's to fed but Maan stopped and asked to fed from her plate

Geet : no Maan u have it from here

Maan : kanjoos u having so much in ur plate cant even fed me one morsal haan

Geet sighed and thought im kanjoos,its my mistake to think good for u, now enjoy Maan babu and took a morsel and fed Maan,she just closed her eyes and look at him thru one eye..

Maan who took felt so much spicy his mouth started to burn,his eyes became red and tears started to flow,he was sweating in ac,he took water and drank but still burning sensational didt go

Geet felt bad and asked waiter to bring ice cream and fed him,he felt little bit relief,Maan loosened his tie and lean on his chair to relax himself

Geet: im sory Maan with baby sad face tats why i didt fed u from my plate,r u ok

Maan node :hmm but how u eating so spicy omg pls Geet u r health will get affected

Geet: hello im tamil girl will have so much spicy not like u who born with diamond spoon and eating for table manners but we eat for us..Maan started to have his lunch..u too punjabi munda naa,i heard punjab mens eat so much chillies but u for name sake too not adding chilly not even masala.

Maan: im have more health conscious

Geet : mimick him health conscious ur head..u eat baby don't follow ur appa he is show off

They started to have te lunch..Maan phone was ringing he saw it was from one of his client before he attends Geet snatch his phone,Maan glare at her

Geet: u came to enjoy with us so no phone calls..

Maan: Geet its imp

Geet: nothing is imp then us,she just put te phone in silent and kept it in her bag.

Maan know she won't listen so just left,they finished their lunch and Maan payed te bill and stood up..but saw Geet leaning on te chair

Maan: Geet wat happen

Geet: im full Maan i cant get up pls arrange a room i want to sleep

Maan roll his eyes seeing her nautanki : Geet u only said u want to go for shopping

Geet : but m full who aksed u to order so much see my tummy it popping out

Maan sighed and scoop Ayesha in his arms : r u cuming or we both will go for shopping leaving u here

Geet pout and followed them before entering into car she felt some one's gaze she turned and look here and there but no one was there she shruggle and got inside te car..

Here other side..Raghav got to know wat they planned,he called to prithiv and bahadur and got relife abt anni-dadi safety,he know Geet baby is with Maan sir in kc so not to worry,he was just driving to kc..

After lunch Geet- Ayesha was in active mode,both on te cd player and stated to sing along with it but in Maan's language they were screaming

Maan: wat happen suddenly so much sound haan

Geet: now we both fill our fuel naa rubbing her tummy so got energy haina kutty

Geet saw Maan who was driving,she started to drool him,Maan saw and raised his eyebrows

Geet : wat style paa, hmm u having different style in driving too, te way u turn te steering, chanceless, she saw Ayesha who busy in singing, Geet lean on him and whisper in his ear,i want to eat u ,with a giggle seeing MAAN's face which became golgappe

Maan smirk : I don't have any problem Geet if u want I will stop te car

Geet : but I have, now drive fast

Maan chuckle and continue his driving

Raghav reached kc and came to know tat Maaneet along with Ayesha went out,he got shocked and called Maan's cell it was ringing but no one picked up,he again tried but still no respond,as Geet put it in silent mood and kept in her bag, he called to Geet's cell,peon came and gave Geet's cell to Raghav saying it was in Maan's cabin

Raghav : omg, he pushed his hair in frustration

Here Maan stopped te car and his mens open te door,only four of his bgs were along with him,trio came out..Maan took Ayesha in his arms holding Geet he went inside,they took te lift

Maan: now say wat u both want to buy

Geet: dresses for 2mor all in same colour

Maan : r planning to celebrate valentine with whole family

Geet : yes and then dadi ask to buy some gifts for her friend's poti first b'day,then have to get some cds and books for Anni for her assignment

Maan: enough

Geet: hmm

Te lift stopped and trio left..Geet first went to kid's selection.. Ayesha seeing so many toys running here and there, GEET try to catch, her, Maan smile seeing his baby's excitement..Ayesha went to teddy selection

Geet : her crazy for teddies

Maan : waise maan waise beti

Geet : she is my kutty,

Then Geet brought some drawing books and rhyms books for Ayesha, Ayesha want all matching acceseries in pink as pink is her fav colour,

Kc,

Suddenly Raghav thought Adi and called him

After they left kc, Adi took Pinky to her house to talk with her father but got shocked tat Geet already talked with him making his work easily,he silently thanked her,then Pinky wants to go for some restaurant and Adi took her,seeing him romancing his phone, Pinky took it and switch off giving a glare to him

So wen Raghav called it came switch off, he don't know wat to do and how to conduct Maan, he thought some thing and called to Prithiv

Mall

Geet saw a white suit : wow Maan see tis it was very nice, I want tis for u, u will look very hot in tis suit,checking it on him

Maan look at te suit,really it was very nice and white coat with black shirt and tie, Geet asked him to check,Maan smile at her and went to trail room to check

Raghav thought some thing and called to Prithiv to know where he was and who all with him, he don't know who are they with Maaneet, Prithiv was dropping Anni to home so he don't have any idea but just gave te details who all are with him,he then called to Bahadur and asked te same, he came to know he is also half te way to km to drop dadi and gave te details abt his mens, he was worried thinking where they went

Raghav saw te list which Prithiv and Bahadur give, so he called other mens and came to know there were in mall.

Ragahv : where are they

Men : sir mam and sir went inside

Raghav got angry : wat u doing leaving them alone haan

Men : sir u order us not to disturb wen ever they go for shopping

Raghav sighed : ok now go and get them and take them to car im on te way ok

Men : yes sir

He called Prithiv to to cum to xy Mall, as bahadur was in km for Dadi-Anni..his tension raising for each sec thinking abt te safety but now he cant let him weak, any how he have to save them,Bgs went inside but they don't know in which floor they were , so they called Maan's cell, but Geet left her bag in te car itself

Geet was seeing a dress, which was mom and kid, it was in pink colour, she really like te dress but wonder how she will wear, but it was just only family naa,

Ayesha : amma u like tis

Geet : hmm but it is sleeveless dress naa

Ayesha : amma think like Msk's gf

Geet gap at her : nowadays u talk too much kutty

Ayesha : wat to do ,Geetanjali's daughter naa

Geet pout and pulled her cheeks : vayaa dii (chatter box)

Geet saw te dress but wen her gaze saw te rate she nearly faint, Ayesha giggled seeing her mom's expression, Geet thought no way she is getting tis for one night tis much rate , no baba no

Ayesha : we will take tis dress

Geet : u like kutty,Ayesha nodes,ok then u get it, she asked te SG will they give te kid's dress alone

Sg: no mam its set single piece wont cum..

Geet pout and look at Ayesha who pout like her,tis is how Maan saw them, he came out and saw both girls gapping at her dress,he chuckled seeing Geet's expression changed seeing te rate but got anger wen tat SG deny to his Misty, he glare at her making her gulp her saliva and rush to save her life both girls wonder wat happen suddenly to tat sg, Ayesha saw Maan and rush to him

Geet : Maan how is te dress

Maan : hmm nice

Geet : I said naa its Geet's choice, ok pack it

Maan : did u buy some thing

Geet : hmm I brought gifts for Dadi and want to get cds for Anni

Maan : u didt get anything for u

Geet : first I will get cds for Anni then we both will select ok,with a smile

Maan know she didt get anything and trying to hide it: hmm

Geet : Maan u hold kutty i will go to landmark

Maan: hmm and hold Ayesha

Geet left to get cds..Maan saw te dress which Geet was seeing

Raghav was driving in jet speed breaking all te signals, his only worry was Maaneet and baby,he reached te mall , before te car stop he jump out and rush inside

Ayesha : appa amma saw te dress but seeing te rate she fainted and giggled..Maan chucked and kissed her nose,he order and asked to pack te dress, he even ask same colour dress for Anni too..

Geet went to landmark and got books and cds she paid and came out..she saw them standing near ice cream parlour,she went to them,suddenly she saw some red spot on Maan's shirt,she wonder wat is it,she snap thinking it will be some kids showing laser light but it suddenly spoted on Maan's head..

Geet move her gaze to look from where te light is cuming.,she cant spot anything, she move to them looking here and there to see from where te light is cuming,but suddenly she saw a man watching Maan from other side behind te pillar, but she got startled to see gun in his hand, she rush towards Maan

Geet was shouting: Maan

Maan hearing her shout and saw her,he was shocked to see her who is rushing towards him

Maan: Geet..

Geet pushed Maan, Raghav too came and saw them, he just rush to hold them, but before any one notice te bullet was shot

Geet : Maan

Maan: Geet


( THANKU ASH FOR TE EDI..LOVE U)


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Edited by Desigirls12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was sad part geet got shot can't wait for part 158
your story concept and the way story is going it really good
just can't wait for part 158

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