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Wonderful update... maaneet finally enjoyed kiss day with roller coaster ride... as maan predicted his rivals are attacking on him and hez not bothered about him but hez worried about his family safety... hope maan will find them to keep his family safe ... loved geets love and concern about her kutty... she took kutty for vaccination and ayesha started crying before doctor giving her shots... geet also started crying with her kutty because of her pain...this shows geets motherly heart is so divine and pure...loved maneet moments and how maan got relaxed with his misty when he was worried and in foul mood ...finally pinkys plan worked out and adi was able to confess his feelings to her but poor adi has to bear his shernis slaps... loved the way maneet supported pinky and adi to confess their feelings...

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Awesome update... maan knew his 2 girls are trying to butter him when they started playing with his buttons...maan was overwhelmed seeing their nautankis and wanted to fulfill their each wishes... maan is worried about his family safety when he came to know about the rivals and their plans...loved geet concern about maan and ayesha and wanted to spend some time with them...loved their family time in restaurant and ayesha is so smart and knew about her ammas heart and concern perfectly...maan and geet were really shocked seeing her understanding level... raghav is such a humble and devoted bodygaurd and really worried for maneet ...hope he will save maan and geet ...
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ohhh woooww two updates back to back .. n awww sooO lovely how dey both r buttering maan to take dem to shopping lol ... n Ufff sabke cell ek saath unavailable ... n Geet fainted by seeing d price of dress Hehehe... n den gunshot 😲 ... eagerly w8ing for next .. continue sooOn PlzzZ PlzzZ ...!!!!!
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again!!
This is called dhamaka!!!
There was a bullet shot
maan...
geet...
ayesha...
raghav...??
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Geet who saw te gun rush to them,she just pushed Maan but te bullet pireced her waist before she move,she fall down and hurting her elbow on te ground crying in pain

Geet : Maan ,

Maan who was startled to see Geet running towards him before he notice anything, she just pushed him, he fall on te ground hitting his forehead, it was all of sudden tat none notice anything..he didt know wat happen but wen he heard Geet's voice ,he turned and look at her who was on te floor, he got panick

Maan : Geet

He stood up , took Ayesha and rush to her, te people got horrified seeing a filmy type gun shot,got shocked and started to run here and there to save themselves,his mens came, Raghav took Ayesha from Maan and passed it to Prithiv to take her out safely, his mens run behind te goons to catch them who shot Geet

Maan sat beside her, he took her and made her lye on his lap: Geet ,Geet wat happen Geet,

He got panick and shock..Maan was tapping her cheeks, then he notice some thing wet on his leg,he touched it and saw blood, his heart nearly jumped out seeing her blood, then he realize she have been shot, He was shocked, his whole body became numb seeing te blood flowing from her waist,his mind went blank..He was just sitting as a lifeless soul holding his life in his arms

His mens trying to clear te crowd, Raghav saw Maan stood numb without any movements,then he notice Geet is bleeding, got shock to know she been shot,he fall on te ground pushing his hair back, he cursed himself for his carelessness, he saw Maan who sat like a dead person, he know wat is running thru Maan,but now he have to act fast to save Geet baby, he tap Maan to bring him to sense

Raghav : sir

Maan trance broke and look at Geet : GEET, he screamed his lungs out

Geet saw him and smile : Maan r u fine, suddenly she look here and there, kutty my kutty wat happen to her Maan kutty,she try to get up,

Maan felt overwhelmed thinking in tis situation too she thought abt her baby tats her motherhood,she sat and looking here and there,Maan hold her

Raghav : baby is safe

Geet sighed and cupped Maan: r u fine Maan

Maan : hmm

Geet suddenly winching in pain : ahhh,holding her waist

She touched her waist and saw blood then she realize she have shot, and look Maan who was looking at with pain..she smile at him

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Maan saw her and placed his hands over hers on her waist,he try to stop her blood ,he pull her duppatta and tied around her waist to stop te bleeding, he scoop her in his arms and carried her out, Raghav took te car and Maan got inside te car and sat placing her on him,he was yelling at Raghav to drive fast

Maan: nothing will happen to u, Geet was smiling at him,but her pain is visible on her eyes, nothing will happen to u more than her he was chanting for himself..

Geet: i know nothing will happen to me till u r there

Maan felt touched with her words and hugged her : who ask to cum between me haan,tears were flowing his eyes

Geet smile and wipe his tears : im selfish Maan, i cant see u in pain,Maan freezed to her words, he was kissing her face,trying to feel her

Geet : Maan i need a fav can u do for me,Maan kissed her hand and node yes , pls don't call to Chennai,Maan look at her, they will get worry

Maan : i cant Geet,

Geet placed her blood hand on his cheeks:pls Maan i know u will not let anything happen to me but pls don't call them..i know My Maan will keep his words

Maan kissed her forehead,his whole body was soaked with her blood,he was shivering seeing her, Geet eyes was drooping slowly,her breath became shallow..

Maan :Geet, his whole body is trembling like a dry leaf seeing his life struggling to breath,he was patting her.

Maan : Geet wake up, dare u close ur eyes i will kill u, open ur eyes , damn it, Geet dare u leave, hugging her to his chest and screaming

Geet just closed her eyes, her hands fall down making him startled, He was shouting at Raghav to drive fast, Raghav too driving fast breaking all te rules,soon they reached hospital,at once te car stopped , Maan pushed te door with his leg and rush inside carrying her screaming for dr..

Thank god shilpa was there and got shocked to see Maan carrying Geet,both are soak in blood

Dr : MAAN wat happen

Maan: aunty save my Geet pls,

DR asked nurse to bring te stretcher,Maan placed her and pushing inside te operation threatre..he was not letting her hand,

Dr : Maan go out pls

Maan : no my Geet, save her dare some thing happens to her

Dr got shocked to see his anger , she hold him: Maan compose urself

Maan saw dr and fall on his knees folding his hands : pls save my Geet pls aunty

Dr startled to see tis side of Maan,she know he love his family but to tis extend

Dr : Maan nothing will happen to ur Geet trust me,

she just pushed Maan,out his hand slowly freed from Geet's hold..Nurse closed te door to start te treatment as Geet belongs to MSK so no formalities is needed wen msk involved

Maan was staring at te closed door and leaning resting his forehead on te door: yes nothing will happen to My Geet, he was hitting te door again and again with his head,nothing will happen to my Geet

Maan just stumble on te chair, Geet in blood again and again flash in front of his eyes,he saw his hands which was soaked in blood,tis is te same hand in which he hold his Anju who died in tis same hands,her blood was soaked in his hands like Geet's, his heart was beating fast thinking abt another lose,

He have seen his loved ones leaving him in front of his eyes he cant bear one more lose..his Geet, his life who give life to his lifeless soul, who made him to live his life again,he brought they happiness but now wat happen, damn it he wont leave any one who try to touch his Geet he wont leave any one

Soon he felt some one's soft hand caressing his hair, he don't need to see who it was,he just hugged her waist burying his face and crying

Maan hugged dadi: dadi i cant bear one more lose i want my Geet i want her, crying like a baby hugging dadi

Dadi herself don't know wat to do,how to console him as she herself was broken hearing te news,she seen her family members leaving one by one, now only they seing sunshine again one more darkness, no they can't bear any more lose she just pray to god. Dadi cried seeing her kids in pain why always they have to suffer but tis time they fate wont win them,she know Geet will cum..she caress his hair

Dadi: Maan nothing happen, ur Geet will cum ,our Geet will cum to us and make ur life hell

Maan: it was for me Dadi te bullet was for me but she took it,his throat was chocking

Dadi know Geet's love for Maan, how crazy for him: tat is her love Maan for u, she will fight for u and kill herself for u

Maan know wat dadi is saying is correct she is crazy for him, and look at her, Dadi sat beside him and wipe his tears

Dadi : she know her Maan wont let anything happen to her, hmm

Maan look at her and hugged her burying his face inside , he too hope his Geet will cum back to him or wat he will say to maa paa , everyone, he himself wont forgive him if some thing happens to his Geet

Dadi :if Geet see u crying she will tease u so better compose urself,she try to console him

Maan know dadi consoling him..dadi too fear inside but hope tat tis time they fate wont win..

Dadi : Maan go and clean, i brought dress for u,Maan node no,pls beta tis hospital if Geet see u like she will feel sad so better change

Maan look at her and went to change himself, he saw him which have blood stain, his dress, all his Geet's blood, he punch te wall for his helplessness, its all coz of his carelessness, he wont leave any one,he clean himself and came out

Dadi saw him, he sat beside her: Maan did u inform to chennai

Maan: no dadi

Dadi: ok i will inform

Maan: no Dadi,Dadi look at him,she asked not to inform them

Dadi: but its wrong beta if something happens how can we face them

Maan: nothing will happen to my Geet before tat her fate should face MSK,Dadi to stumble with his tone

Dadi: Maan

Maan: pls Dadi trust me and she took promise from me pls

Dadi: hmm

Maan: where is Ayesha Anni

Dadi: they are in km i said i will call them

Anni: but we both cant sit there so we came here

Dadi Maan look at Anni who was carrying was crying Ayesha..DADI asked Anni to stay in km with Ayesha, but each sec without knowing anything she cant sit there so she came carrying Ayesha who was crying for her maa..Maan got up and took Ayesha from Anni, Anni just hugged him

Anni: bhai Geet,she was crying thinking once again they fate playing in they life

Maan caress her hair kissing her: she will cum to us

Ayesha: amma she was crying for her maa,she was scared seeing all te stunt in te mall she know her maa got hurt

Maan heart cried seeing his baby crying for her maa, he don't want her baby to be motherless, only his Geet can look after his baby.he wipe her tears

Maan: maa was not well baby she is sleeping

Ayesha : sleeping

Maan : haan dr give injection naa after she wake up we will scold her haan

Ayesha : haan but she fall down on te mall

Maan : she was playing hide and seek naa so she fall down and got hurt but now she is fine sleeping haan , Ayesha node her head

Anni saw Maan's head and blood: bhai u too got hurt

Then Maan touch his wound on his forehead and recollect how Geet pushed him to save him he hit te ground..

Dadi: Maan,she try to wipe te blood with her hanky

Maan : nothing she pushed to save me

Dr shilpa came out with nurse

Dadi : shilpa how she

Dr: she lost lot of blood , we have to arrange blood for transfusion,i cant say anything now just wait for me maaji

Maan stumble on te chair hearing already she is weak,his heart was crying and tears flowing from his eyes..Ayesha saw her appa who was crying, she wipe his tears with her small hands

Ayesha: appa dont cry amma will cum

Maan kissed her forehead and just hugged Ayesha burying his face inside her small neck and pouring his pain..Dadi-Anni too cried seeing them, Anni hugged dadi..Raghav was there and his heart crying seeing them..

He was strong even after seeing his family left him,but now seeing Geet like tis his heart broked , in short time Geet became his sister who care for them, he just wipe his tears and try to be strong..he decide he wont leave any one who is responsible for tis,once his mens got hold of them then he will show them their hell

Anni brought water for Dadi and Maan,Maan node no as he cant take anything till he hear his Misty's voice..Anni took sleeping Ayesha from him,Raghav arranged a room for them to rest..Anni made Ayesha lye on te bed and came out

Anni: Dadi pls sleep for some time

Dadi: no Anni till i see her fine i cant

All sat there and praying for Geet,

At te same time in Chennai

Meena who was cleaning te pooja room , te kumkum box shattered down , she got startled..her heart became restless thinking some thing going to happen, she hold her mangalsutra.. hearing te sound all rush to pooja room

Rajji - Karti-Prabu :maa Meena, wat happen

Meena eyes were shedding tears : maama showing te box

Prabhu and karthi hold her, Rajji clean te mess, they took her out, Rajji give her water,Meena hugged Prabhu and crying, they got shock to see her

Prabu : wat happen

Meena: i don't know but some thing is wrong my heart is saying some thing is wrong,Maan, Geet pls call them i want to talk with them pls, she is crying fearing some thing happen to them

Prabhu : nothing Meena it just accident u drop te box by mistake nothing

Meena got angry : pls call them i want to speak to them ,pls

Trio got shocked to see Meena like tis, they never seen her like tis, Prabhu took his phone and called to Geet but she didt attend her call

Meena know : she wont take her call, call to MAAN he will never miss our call

Prabhu tried to Maan, no one attend te call as his phone was Geet's bag which was in te car, Meena got panick Meena know Maan will never miss they call in wat ever situation he may be

Meena : i said naa some thing is wrong he will never miss our call, maama im so scared , her whole body is shivering

Karti : appa call to dadi

Prabhu called to dadi, dadi was sitting in te chair wen her phone rings, she saw te callers name and got startled to see Prabhu's name,she look at Maan and Anni, Maan stare at her, she showed te name and Maan too got startled thinking they came to know , so many things rushing thru them

Te call ends , but again it rings , dadi sighed and attend te call, before Prabhu say hello Meena snatch te phone

Meena : hello maa maa where is Maan Geet i want to talk with them

Maan can hear Meena's shivering voice

Dadi compose herself : why wat happen Meena , trying to be normal

Prabhu snatch te phone from her : maa namasthe how r u maa

Dadi put it in speaker: im fine Prabu wat happen to Meena

Prabhu : no maa kumkum box fall on te ground she got scared and thought some thing,she was worrying and want to talk with Maaneet,Prabhu too put on speaker

Meena : maa where is Geet , why Maan didt take te call, he never miss our call

Maan heart cried seeing hearing they words, how they know abt him

Dadi control herself : Meena don't worry Geet was in office u know she joined again, she left her phone in home tats why, after she cums i will ask her to call u ok

Meena : Maan where is he

Dadi look at Maan who was controlling himself : Maan was in meeting Meena, i think no signal, Geet is with Maan , he will take care of her

Meena sighed in relief now only she got her breath : Geet is with Maan naa then nothing to worry, both will be fine,im sorry maa for disturbing u all ,Trio giggle seeing her ,

Rajji : dadi she just scared us, wen Geet cums ask her to call us she too will tease maa,Meena pout, then wat maa with in few mins u scared us

Meena : wen u became maa then only u can feel my fear

Raji roll his eyes, they were talking but nothing reached Dadi-Maan's ear , te word they trust him with Geet only ringing in his ears,they trust him,they thought nothing will happen wen Maan was there but wat he did, he didt protect her

Dadi talk for some time and cut te call..Maan throat chocked with they love, tears flowing, he felt suffocation with te events..Meena maa's words still ringing in his ears, they trust him, but he broke it, he hide te biggest truth, he hate himself for tis, but he is helpless as Geet took promise,he cant sit there any more, he just stood up and went out

Anni : bhai

Dadi stopped her : let him go Anni

Maan went out to garden,pushing his hair in frustration,he thought how his life changed with in few days..they first meet , they first fight, her eyes which always hold so much innocent with mischief, her lips which always tease him,her smile, her mischief, her naughtiness which made his life colour, all came in front of his eyes..suddenly he saw Geet standing and smiling at him

Geet: Maan she giggled,before he touch her she disappeared..

Maan was just numb to feel anything,he cant think a life without his Geet..he will be dead without her..he lost in his thought until he heard bell sound, he turn and saw a small temple his legs carried him to there,after many years he stood in front of god folding his hands begging to him

Maan fold his hands in front of him: if u want to punish me give me pain, not to my Geet i know u want me to beg in front, as these many years i didt cum to u for anything to show ur presence to me, pls don't punish my Geet,pls don't play with my Geet's life i cant live without her pls,

Tears were flowing,he didt feel ashamed to stand begging in front of all, he wants his Geet tats is te only he need now

Maan : i don't want to go back to my dark again,i want my Geet back at any cost,if some things happens to her,i will destroy te whole world i wat her, how will i face them, wat will i say to them who give te responsibility of her to me,pls don't snatch my happiness

He was crying , suddenly he heard te bell sound he open his eyes and saw a small girl ringing te bell,he felt like god have given answers for his prayer thru tat small girl,he kneeled and kissed tat small girl,she smiled and run away,he was staring at her retreating figure..

He felt some one touch his shoulder,he turn and saw Adi standing there,seeing him Maan hugged him,he need some one right now,Adi who came to know abt te shot thru Raghav he cursed himself for switching off his cell, wen he heard te news at once rush to hospital..

Adi can sense Maan's pain, he was patting his back to calm him: im sory Maan ,they broke te hug,Adi wiping his tears,dont worry Maan nothing will happen

Maan nodes,he know nothing will happen but his heart is breaking little bit little thinking his Geet is pain all coz of him..Raghav came out to talk with Maan as he got all te details but seeing his pain, he know tis is not te time to talk with Maan so he kept quite..

All stood out each sec was hell for them, they heart beating fast as it was nearly four hours Geet was inside but still no news, Maan heart wants to rush inside and see his Geet but he know it was not correct



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