New FF KAISI YEH KASHMAKASH (PART 5 updated pg no. 14 ) - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
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it will be excellent when you update!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Please continue
your readers are in wait
thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kindly update Part 5! thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Okay I know it's too late to update but I am really sorry I was so busy in my life's up and downs . I never thought I'll continue the story anytime . But I am doing so just because of @taahir004 and @kwahishfan only because you two waiting for so long I just realised I have to complete it .
I am really sorry again .

Here is the part 5

Maan back home and found dadimaa and Annie on dining table .

Maan - Good morning dadimaa and Annie .

Both wish him back .

Dadimaa - maan bete aap itni subah subah kaha se aa rahe hai koi meeting thi kya jo files le rakhi hai hath me ?

Man - nahi dadimaa koi meeting nhi thi wo me ye kal raat out house mein bhul gaya tha to bas wahi lene gaya tha .

Annie (suspiciously ) - Bhai ek file lane me itna time lagta hai kya ?

Maan - (annoyed ) ha ager geet jaisi ladki waha rahti ho toh .

Dadimaa - kya baat h bete aap aise kyu bol rahe h geet ek bhuat acchi ladki h aur after all humara khayal rakhti hai humare sath rahti hai ( taunting maan as he don't stay home much he only do his office work all the time .)

Annie - gud mrng geet .

Geet who just come there wish her back and also take blessing by touching foot of dadimaa . ignore maan a bit and left from there and get dadimaa's brkfst which according to her health nutritionist . geet back to dining table and found that dadimaa is going to take aloo paratha and stops her .

Geet - dadimaa humne aapki kitni baat kaha hai ki ye oily khana aap nhi khayegi .

Dadimaa - geet nhi aaj hum aapki ek bat nhi sunege aur na hi ye boiled khana khayege .

Geet - theek hai to phir mujhe lagta h ki aapko hospital me hi admit kar dena caahiye waha aapki bhuat acchi tarah se treatment hoga .

Dadimaa - theek hai theek hai hum kha lenge par tumhe humien promise karna hoga ki tum humare liye aaj lunch me tumhare hath ka khana khilogi .

Geet - haa promise .



P.S - Sorry again i know it's a short update after waiting for a long time but I promise I will going to update next two part together .


Edited by Sassii - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Thank you so much for updating
especially considering both mine and Kwahishfan's request
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Lovely Chapter

Daadima and Annie wants to tease Maan about taking so long in Outhouse
just to get one file but he again starts with taunts about Geet
Geet she truly does take such good care of Daadima
making sure she eats healthy food
oh she so cutely ignored Maan

will be waiting for the next chapters
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks for updating
very nice update
geet is taking good care of daadi even though maan is annoyed of her
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
thanks for the pm! great that you updated!

Part 5

superb update, nicely written!

Loved when dadi and Annie teases Maan! Maan taunts Geet!

Geet cares so much for dadima!

glad she ignored Maan!

update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Glad u don't left in mid thinking to finishing what u start
Chota update b chale ga
Annie Daadi teased him fr taking so long in taking one file from OH
Geet came in mansion fr bf wished daadi and Annie and ignore Maan
Geet is taking care of Daadi and not letting hr anything which harm hr health
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Waiting for you to continue with the next chapter please

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