New FF KAISI YEH KASHMAKASH (PART 5 updated pg no. 14 )

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi frnds
Me Muskaan
m gonna write a new ff of maaneet
bcz i love them as you all
here is my 1st maaneet ff's Character sktech ...

Maan


The most eligible Bachelor of India .A shrewd Business Man. MD Of Khurana Constructions . Angry Young Man For The Whole World But Is Complete Opposite For His Family And He Can Go To Any Extents To Keep Them Happy . He Never
Deny His Dadi's Wish .


Geet


Simply Beautiful .Cute , fun loving & bubbly girl . she loves and respect everyone who around her .she dont want to talk about her family (why ? it reveals soon as story is so far )

Dadi maa



Lovely Dadi maa . Lady of the house . loves her grand children's . Nobody dare to goes against her decisions .

Annie



Angel of the Khurana house . Everyone loves her . Stylist , Sweet bit Arrogant . loves her family and frnds .

Pari

Sweet nd Bubbly girl . she helps geet . she is also a good friend of Maan.


The poetry is about Geet's state of mind
its perfectly suits on her pain .


Ajeeb Kasmakash Say Guzarti Hai Wo

Roz Jeti Hai Roz Marti Hai Wo

Ankhoo Mein Namii Dil Mein Dara Chuphy
Har Roz Apny Aap Say Larti Hai Wo

Ajeeb Kashmakash Say Guzarti Hai Wo
Roz Jeti Hai Roz Marti Hai Wo

Ek Khushi Mili Ousy Chand Pal Ki Hai Ya Umer Bahar Ki
Har Roz Is Baat Say Oulajhte Hai Wo

Ajeeb Kashmakash Say Guzarti Hai Wo
Roz Jeti Hai Roz Marti Hai Wo

Duniya K Elzamoo Say Zakhme Hai Ous Ka Dil
Sub Sah Kar Bhi Labo Par Muskaan Sajay Rakhti Hai Wo

Ajeeb Kashmakash Say Guzarti Hai Wo
Roz Jeti Hai Roz Marti Hai Wo


As you all know its my 1st ff sorry for any grammatical or any other kind of mistake.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo for the new story!!
interesting...
waiting eagerly for the story
the poetry is beautiful
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sounds interesting..cant wait for update..
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Would like to read further
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congrats on ur first FF! Superb cs n lovely prologue! beautiful poetry! pls update soon n add me 2 ur pm list.
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hii muskan.. congrats for a new story..😊
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Congrats on new story ,
Nice cs ,
The poetry ws lovely ,
would loke to read more ,
pm me when u update ,
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Waiting for the first part..
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congratz 4 d story nd sounds intrstng 😃
ill be waitng 4 d update
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Poem was heart wrenching. Character sketch is interesting.

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