GHSP Family FF Thread 2 Part 27 PG 53 & 27A Pg 55 28/7 - Page 7

superb part.. maan arranged dinmer date for sam.. geet father seen him with sam.. sam was understood maan feeling.. waiting for next

part 16 - beautiful part...very much glad that sam let him go after knowing his feelings for her...liked how she noticed all those things about him since she met him...liked that sam was not negative and she is happy in her life...

waiting for Don to explode. 😛

part 16

PART-17

Meeting with Sam had left him quite restless for there were questions he knew he had no answer to. Clearly Ms Handa was not one of the women he would possibly like to fall in love, being the disaster queen that she was but then Sam had him reeling on his own words. He got back home and decided to just sleep off.

He changed and fell on the bed, staring at the ceiling...what had she done to him! he had instigated a war with the underworld now, thanks to her. why was he the one to take the bait of that crazy woman always? Why God, Oh why?!

Sameer sat in his studies, seething in anger. He had his contacts find out about Maan khurana and there was nothing that confirmed his link with the woman he was seen with in the hotel! But then why was he in the couple's section when they were not even together in the first place? Was he two-timing? His daughter would be heartbroken and he would make sure that man lived hell. But for now, he has to be vigilant, not for Maan but for Rudra. He knew him a little too well.

It was way past midnight when geet's peaceful sleep was disturbed by a phone call. Almost after three missed calls she was irritated further to see Maan calling her. she checked the time"3:40am. To hell with this man! He doesn't sleep and doesn't let her sleep too.

"hello?", she yawned.

"Geet wake up..."

"what is this Maan? You don't sleep doesn't mean you destroy my sleep as well.", she was irritated.

"its urgent...listen to me!"

But she was already half asleep, "go, sleep Maan...stop disturbing me!"

"GEET...", he gritted his teeth when she wasn't even listening to him, "meri baat sunogi bhi?"

"stop screaming... and what is it?"

"pack your stuffs...we have to go in a few hours!!"

She sat up immediately and her mouth turned a big O, "are we eloping?"

He rolled his eyes, "are you taking this fake bf-gf thing too seriously Ms Handa? If yes, then god save you for i will fire you tomorrow, first thing in the morning!"

Jeez! Did he talk about him admiring her personality and charisma a few hours back? He wished he could take them back!!

"hello? Are you there? Maan?? Knock knock...did you sleep off?", she kept mumbling on the other side making him smile.

"hmm bolo...",his voice softened.

"kya bolo? You were the one planning on eloping with me.. .."

He sighed! Incorrigible!

"will you shut up so that I can speak? Pack your stuffs, we are leaving for Dublin in the next three hours. And before you scream in your over dramatic way, just know that tickets are done, Mr Williams wants us there and since you are incharge... i guess you know the rest! Meet me in the airport in the next one hour!"

"ARE YOU CRAZY?", her sleep just jumped off the window. What was going on now?

"yeah pack some warm clothes, its gonna be cold!"

He hung up, smiling. This woman gave him headaches and yet he was smiling. Something was seriously wrong with him. he just didn't want to think of whatever he spoke to sam in the evening so he just chose to ignore it to give respite to his brain for the time being.

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Sameer was surprised to read the note left by geet in the morning that she was going to Dublin with Maan for there was pending work to be done. now what was that khurana up to? Cheating on his daughter, eh? He might as well just take care of things in his own way!

A few calls here and there and things were settled. But least did he know what danger lurked around. They say, there is a silence before a storm and it seemed like that for a while now.

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She slept good for the better part of the journey and it was evening when they checked into their hotel. The chauffeur handed them the swipe cards of their rooms and left. Maan's was just the adjacent to hers. It was cold indeed and geet seemed to be a very good mood, all thanks to her sleeping all the time.

"freshen up... then we can order dinner!", he suggested and walked into his room. The heater was on and it felt much better. he changed into a casual tracks and a tee and checked his mails and talked to Mr Williams for their work.

He reclined on the sofa, wondering what would geet be doing now. She seemed to have taken much of his attention these days and he had created an enmity with Rudra for that matter. But how could he have seen that crazy woman go all silent and scared because of that? He was a big name and he had contacts too and he had to be careful now. As he kept thinking, his mind wandered off to the dinner with sam and then their subsequent topic of discussion and he dared to think of the question he had asked himself"was he really attracted to Geet?

No doubt she had taken away his attention and he had felt that urge to protect her...NO! ..to Help her in her endeavour but then why would he do that? That was the question he was left unanswered. He just couldn't have seen her upset and so he set out to put a warning for Rudra.

The intercom rang and the room service asked whether to get their dinner to their rooms or they preferred to dine in the restaurant. He asked him to call him later for he would check on his companion in the other room. He called her via the intercom which went unanswered! May be she was in the washroom. He called her after sometime again and then on her cell phone but they all went unanswered. What the hell was wrong with her? was something wrong? Or had she slept off..OMG that too without having any food! He was worried now. He just decided to go check on her. he locked his room and knocked hers.

It scared him that even his knocks went unanswered.

"geet? Are you aright?...open the door."

He knocked a couple of times and decided to just barge in, in case she was again in some trouble but then realized the door hadn't been locked from the inside. He just slowly pushed it ajar and walked in. A loud music reached his ears as he made his way towards her bedroom and what he saw just melted him away!

...and I said, Romeo take me,

Somewhere we can be alone,

I'll be waiting, all there's left to do is run

You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess

Its a Love Story, baby just say yes...

She was standing up on the bed, clad in a pale blue bath robe and a towel wrapped round her head, her eyes shut and she was jumping. The TV blared in front of her, with the highest volume level and some song played and she danced, singing along like a crazy!

..and i said, Romeo save me

I've been feeling so alone

I keep waiting for you but you never come

Is this in my head, I don't know what to think

He knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring and said

He leaned by the door, putting his arms across his chest, smiling. If she was doing theatrics, he might as well take the first place! She pouted as if complaining why romeo kept her waiting and almost became sad the moment the music went down.

And the next moment she jumped on to the couch, dancing happily as if she got her Romeo. She rolled up a magazine and held it close to her mouth as a microphone and sang louder, jumping around.

Marry me, Juliet,

You'll never have to be alone

I love you and that's all I really know

I talked to your dad, Go pick out a white dress

It's a love story, baby just say yes...uh ohh...

She gave flying kisses to god knows whom but she was acting crazy. The towel round her head fell off somewhere as she jumped from the couch to bed, back and forth, singing and laughing and acting all at once.

We were both young when I first saw you...

her eyes fell on him, standing by the door, laughing, while she jumped back to the couch and she was shocked! As a result, she missed a step and fell down on the carpeted floor with a thud!

"ooowww...", she cried, holding her waist, her face contorted in pain that shot up.

He immediately rushed to her and sat down, beside her, "had fun?", he smirked

She felt so embarrassed that she turned red! gosh...what the hell was he doing here out of all places? Her still damp hair stuck to her cheeks, contrasting the color of her skin and he just sat beside her, smiling at her antics.

She really didn't want to face him now but his smile just gave her the creeps. She was so red and he was smiling.

"at least you could give a hand..", she taunted when he made no effort to help her stand.

He just burst out laughing right there, that he had controlled for so long, "gosh, you are such a crazy woman geet! What were you thinking, jumping to and fro like a monkey?"

"listen I...", she was about to retort but then stopped, seeing him smile so openly, in fact laugh! Ohk.. this was weird because this khadoos boss of hers never laughed! She twisted her lips in displeasure but come to think of it, she had never seen him laugh like this even since she had known him. his employees called him names like robot or hitler or demon but he wasn't that person now. For a moment she stilled, seeing him smile and something warm just filled her. and instinctively she smiled a bit too. He looked handsome when he smiled!

"so..you need a hand?", he spoke, smiling.

"uhh huhhh???", before she could react, he just lifted her up in his arms, making her shriek, "aahh maaannn...what are you doing?? Oh my god..put me down... put me down.", she wriggled.

"geet...stop moving or else i am throwing you down again."

"no no..put me down... aahhh...", she shrieked and he just threw her, on bed!

"you scream way too much handa!"

She sat up, angrily, "what the hell are you doing in my room, pervert!"

He expected something absurd from her! he sighed, "i was here to ask you for dinner! Don't assume things."

"yeah right..you sneak into my room and say not to assume! Besharam.. behaya.. chi chi babaji what are these men upto!! Ek ladki ko akele dekha nahi ki... chi..."

"geet shut up..."

"why should I shut up hun? You pervert...jerk... sneaking into a girl's room and watch her dance.. don't you have shame? And you call yourself my boss? Chiii..."

"CHUP. BILKUL CHUP! if only you picked up your darned phone or answered your door, i wouldn't have had to waste so much energy to come and just see you dancing like a lunatic! So stop assuming and meet me in the restaurant in 15 minutes!"

And he walked off, shaking his head. Crazy was an understatement for this woman! Where has he decided to invest in?

Dinner was a quiet affair for Mr William chose to join them and also apologise for this sudden plan. So it all went in talking formal and it was tiring, especially for Maan who hadn't slept a wink all this while. So the next morning was going to be a busy one too. It was almost 11pm when they retired to their room and crashed on bed.

The next morning, as expected, went totally busy with him and his clients finishing up the remaining work for the project they had ventured in. Though he was busy, he didn't miss watching one particular woman who was too engrossed in her work to notice anything. who would say she was the lunatic dancer last night! He sighed and it was finally dusk that they were done with the major part of the job. The rest could be done easily via video conferencing.

He saw her stretch herself to get rid of the stiffness and smiled. she caught his gaze and raised a brow as to what' and he looked away, shaking his head meaning nothing. She rolled her eyes meaning crazy and he just couldn't stop sighing. What was happening, he wondered!

As they walked out, putting on their warm clothes, geet finally realized how beautiful the city was that of Dublin...beautifully covered with the snow and the golden rays of the setting sun made it believe that it had the Midas' Touch in it for everything seemed to be golden.

"lets go for a coffee!"

She heard him speak after a long time. He had been up on his toes the whole day and it was visible via the dark circles round his eyes.

"umm... ..", she just nodded in affirmative, lost in the beauty of the city.

He looked around as he walked on the pavement with her. the sun rays fell on her and she seemed to shine with it. He breathed in sharply...she was beautiful, he had to admit. They were about to enter the cafe when Maan felt something on him, more as if someone watching them. He stepped back, opened the door for her and let her in. He looked around for a while and finding none suspicious, he walked in behind her.

They ordered their coffee and snacks as the fire in the hearth warmed them up.

"so...", he asked after a long silence, "what about the guy you were to get married to?"

She munched her fries, still looking out of the window, "ohh vivaan? I don't know..."

"you don't? The other day i saw you two bonding really well geet...", he recalled the day he had seen Vivaan in her office and she had kissed him bye.

"I told him that i am in love with you Maan and he seemed to take it in a positive way!"

"then why would his father try to threaten you like this?", he asked thoughtfully. He had collected some background knowledge about rudra and his people.

"i am not sure why because may be Rudra uncle thinks i hurt his son. But why doesn't he realize that i can't be forced! Do i not have my own choice?"

She seemed upset when the topic came up and he noticed. He sipped his coffee, "it will all be fine geet. You needn't worry!"

"hmm..waise Maan...", she spoke after thinking a lot and smiled sheepishly.

"what?", he got alarmed seeing that smug smile on her lips, "whats cooking in your brain Ms handa?"

"i was thinking... umm...okay lets be straightforward, take me out on a dinner!", she spoke without an expression.

He coughed his coffee and immediately used a paper napkin! He knew she was a very straightforward person but asking for dinner? And like this?

"are you crazy? Who asks for dinner like this? I have lot more work than entertaining you on a dinner..so thank you very much"

She still maintained that poker face, "no option Maan. You are my boyfriend and my dad wishes to see you taking me on a dinner date kind of thing. And knowing him, am sure he must have sent people to watch out for us!"

His jaws dropped down, "what the hell?? Your dad is spying on us?"

She nodded happily as a matter of fact! He rolled his eyes, "tum pagal ho geet..tumhare dad pagal hain aur lagta hain tumhara poora khandaan hi pagal hoga!"

"stop whining Maan.. we still have time. Lets look around and then go for a dinner. at least it would more convincing to dad that we are serious about it!"

He sighed...what has he gotten himself into? Taking her out for dinner wasn't a trouble.in fact, he was very much delighted to do so, he felt elated but then what worried him was her father spying on them. No wonder he felt someone watching them sometime back.

"Do I have an option?", he sighed. Wow! The MSK ran out of option in front this woman.

"ohh come on, just a dinner Maan..."

They paid the bill and walked out, roaming around, admiring the cityscape. It was turning colder and it was dark already but geet was nowhere near thinking of dinner. She bought some mementos for her and her friends when Maan felt it again"being watched. He looked around for a while but then shrugged it off realizing they could be geet's bodyguards.

Geet walked ahead, humming a tune while he just followed, observing her keenly. He must say he was having a wonderful time just being with her. they turned in to a lane with a very few people around. Geet looked around and saw an antique shop at the other side of the road.

"Maan...i want to see stuffs in that shop..can we go?",she asked cutely, to which he just smiled and nodded.

She squealed in joy and rushed towards the road not realizing a car could hit her. Maan was fast enough to notice and as a reflex, he pulled her back with a jerk, "geet...be careful.."

A shot and a scream! The area went dead silent as Maan fell on the ground with a bleeding arm while geet shrieked in horror. She looked around for who it could be but then saw a few of her bodyguards making a move towards some people on the other end.

Horror struck her as the gravity of the situation sunk in and the first thing that came up in her mind was Rudra! She went cold in fear realizing he meant each and every word that he said.

She knelt down as tears rolled down her eyes, "Maan...are you okay? Tum theek ho? Ohh god...someone please call an ambulance..."

Maan held his arms that was bleeding profusely and looked up at her smiling, "hey...hey..its okay. Am fine..."

"no...its bleeding so..so badly...its my fault...I..I..."

Maan realized she was shocked at the turn of events. He raised his good hand and caressed her cheeks softly, "shhh...am fine geet. Its alright...", and he fell on the ground, unconscious.

The people came around to help, calling the police and the ambulance. Geet sat in the hospital, worried and scared to death while the doctors attended to Maan, inside. She didn't know it would turn out this bad. She was scared. What if something happened to him? she would never be able to forgive herself for that!

With trembling hands, she took her phone out and called her dad.

"...geet? what happened beta? Why are you crying?", asked a worried sameer.

"dad...wo..wo Maan...", she sobbed.

Sameer was furious, "Maan? Did he do something wrong geet? Did he hurt you? I swear i wont spare him..."

"no...dad...", she sobbed, "he's been shot!"

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amazing part.. maaneet gone to business trip.. omg maan was shot.. waiting for next part

Ashhh, first of all Im so happy to see you writing for this family FF.

Secondly, thank you so much for taking some time out from your busy schedule knowing you are having exams from 30th April. Still you managed it on Tanya and my insistance.

Now lastly, coming to the update, it super awesome. I loved every bit of it.

He said to himself Geet wouldnt be one woman he would "possibly like" to fall in love with. But I say, Mr.Khurana, love just happens without your own knowledge. No one plans to fall in love.

And an idiot would only go after Rudra, the Don and get CBI to raid his dockyard just cos that guy threaten Geet. I mean if one thinks in depth, Geet's dad is a Don himself and Rudra is his best friend and business partner, so they could deal with each other. It was their problem. Yet, like he said, he took the bait and fall in the trap himself. And why? Only cos Rudra dared to threaten Geet on his life and for that Geet ignored him which dint go down well with him. He dint stopped here, he had the guts to call Rudra and say it on his face that it Maan Singh Khurana who had planned the raid. So he called for an open war when there was no need for it. Would he all that idotic stuff for any other person? He will take time to realize and get his answers to his own reaction.

Sameer's informers told him all the info within couple of hours? Super fast I would say. But they failed in their job since they couldnt find any link btw Maan and Samara.

But still Sameer was smart enough to think that Maan had dine in a couple's section. Good I liked that. Cos fooling a Don seems too illogical to me. However he is more worried about Rudra cos he knows that his friend wont sit quite.

I liked the phone conversation btw MG. It was cute and brought a smile on my face. Maan was irritated but still couldnt help the smile on his face. Isnt is strange? Sam's stupid blabbering was also making him irritated but did he smile at that? Did he softened at that and spoke "hmm, bolo" to Sam? The guy who cant tolerate non sense more than few minutes was listening to Geet's stupid talks with a smile. He is totally lost it if one sees it.

I like that Sameer still dint trust Maan cos it gives scope to others to plan any twists they want. He did his own few arrangements for Geet which says how much he loves his daughter.

Chalo good to see Maan realizing that he had to be careful now cos he has called for an enmity with Rudra all by himself. Also he is thinking about the dinner with Sam and his own question he asked himself. His attraction towards Geet. He was finally asking those much needed questions but the intercom rang and broke his thoughts.

Banda is worried that the woman who had taken half of his thoughts might have gone to bed empty stomach. He was scared that she might have landed in some trouble and I had thought he would blast at her for her carelessness. For not answering his calls, knocks on the door and keeping the door of her room unlocked; but the guy instead melted at scene of Geet dancing like a lunatic oblivious to the world around.

He was admiring her antics and if she was totally lost in her own world, he seems lost in her. Awww.

And the moment Geet realized that her moments are been watched by her boss she lose her balance falling on the floor totally embarrassed. She looked cute when Maan teased her. She tried to act offended so that leaves her alone instead he was laughing heartily at her antics. And she for the first time saw him laughing which warmed her heart. For a change Geet admired him.

She is such a drama queen and crazy. But I really loved those MG moments. They were adorable and too sweet.

The dinner and next day went in work and both were totally engrossed yet Maan noticed Geet and her work.

Im glad that you us MG moments. Them going on a walk and for a coffee. Geet lost in the beauty of the city and Maan lost in her. He admitted to himself that she is beautiful. Nice. I like it.

Maan felt being watched and followed but dint see anything suspicious.

Strange that the first thing he asked to her was about Vivaan. He seemed curious. But seeing her getting upset he assured her which was sweet.

I really loved Geet's straightforwardness. No beating around the bush and directly ask the question. Maan's reaction was totally funny. But poor him, he had no option but to say yes all thanks to Geet's Don father and him spying on them.

But Im confused. He was delighted at the idea of taking her out for a dinner then why he said no when she straightforwardly asked him? Was it just the way she asked, like all casual as if its nothing important. Or there is some other reason?

They roamed around the city, Geet enjoying in her own world and Maan enjoying in Geet's company. But all throughout he felt being watched and shrugged off thinking it might be Geet's bodyguard since she said her dad is spying on them.

I was so enjoying their moments that the gun shot scene came as a shock. Seriously? You totally know how to give a heartattack to you readers after such a happy update, no? You totally know how to completely wipe off that smile from your readers face make them scared to death in a matter of seconds. You are evil just like Tanya. Hmmphhh.

Geet obviously is scared and immediately connected this attack on Maan to Rudra's threat. Knowing Geet I wonder will she distance from Maan after this? If she can give up on her childhood friendship with Vivaan to save him from the dark world. What would she do when she has now herself experienced someone's else life in danger just and only cos of her?

And Maan, gosh that guy was shot yet he was consoling Geet.

Geet has called her dad and informed him. And I hope she tells him about Rudra's threat. But then Sameer is smart enough to guess it all. He already felt Rudra wont be sitting quite and so had send bodyguards after Geet. Also you did mentioned that Geet saw her bodygaurds running to the other end.

So have left a good scope there. I really liked that.

Update was beautiful, super sweet. Gave so much of Maan's feelings. And the end was a dhamaka.

If one continues from here there is hell of scope to bring twists in this story. You gave a total U turn here Ash. Kudos to that. I personally liked this twist. Cos the story did bring the dark flavor as Sameer and Rudra are Don here from the start itself. Everything cant be all happy. So I hope to see some action in future and lot of drama.

I super loved and enjoyed the update. It was fantastic and mind blowinggg.

-Sanjana!

Omg!!!
Wonder ful update..
maaneet r so much enjoing ...
In dublin .
maan shot ...
hope he js fine soon may be this turn of events make them realize their importance in each other life

maan in deep confusion he just doesnt want to accept he very much attracted to geet whom he finds very crazy wow both r in dublin n maan is really enjoying her company but rudras men shot him nice part thnx 4 update