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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#171

I read this story so please send me pms. Thx.

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harshu...

@harshu...

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Superb part di .

maan reached hoshiyaarpur for his so called wedding .

akkul hahaaha

haiye !!! Maaneet pehli mulakaat .

gosh.I hate maan's father ,

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tanubag

@tanubag

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Part 1-

Maan came back from US after completing his study. His father has already decided to marry him with his business client's daughter Sam. But when he came to know that sam can't bear a child bcz of some medical problem so he and his friend decided to marry him with a village girl for the sake of child but for the outer world sam will be the mother of the child. Maan don't want to destroy a innocent girl's life for his father selfishness but he had to say yes infront of his father's stubbornness.

Part 2-

Only Maan , ranveer and nakul left for hp for the marriage bcz ranveer want to kept it secret. But suddenly Sam's father called her and said about his business crisis so ranveer decided to stay back and help him and asked nakul to fulfill the responsibility on his behalf and said Maan to kept his word. Maan said he will do what he say.

Part 3-

Maan and nakul reached hp at evening . Lol Maan called nakul as akul😆 Nakul said they will stayed in guest house which is away from village and next day morning marriage . Vey few people will be involved. Maan was not feeling sleepy so he go outside and in the dark he found Geet. Maan caught her and asked what she is doing here but she left.

Edited by tanubag - 10 years ago

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#174

I love the way you have characterized Maan, such an obedient son inspite of being US educated ..

Sameera and Maan 's marriage has already being fixed but due to some past illness she can't bear a child so his father is going to ruin some innocent girl's life!

Maan and nakul already in hoshiarpur for the marriage ..is the girl Geet?

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#175

I'm regular reader of your all writings dear..plzz PM this story...

Awesome update!!!Maan and Nakul reached HP...Nakul told Maan marriage is tomorrow...Maan's father locked Maan inside the guest houseMaan came out for a walk he saw someone stand near the main gate...he caught a person's hand and realized that she is a girl but he didn't let her go...he tried to see her face but he only saw her magical eyes...she was struggling to free herself...both of them got injured its made Maan loose his grip she escaped from there..I think she is Geet..Loved it so much...waiting for the next update...Thanks for the PM dear

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Nice part.. Maan nd nakul reachd hoshiyarpur nd . he dont even know tommorrow morning his marriage..he was locke inside guest house..Maan saw someone at guest house gate.Maan and the girl both got injured Waitng 4 d nxt part update soon

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KasiKasi

@KasiKasi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Nice update
Loved it
Maan going to hoshiyarpur with nakul biz ranveer have some important work

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! well written! Maan in HP! Nakul is with him! Maan n Geet meet! she is injured! update soon! Regd ur note - pls continue 2 pm! update soon