Web of Love (3) - [Ch 69/70- P. 100] 30th April

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Susegad

Do deewane forum mein intezaar kare hain raat mein😆

Hi Doc😉

Hey Nishaji 😃

Hum bhatakte rehte hai... update padhke hi shanti milegi 😆

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Onir
Hey Nishaji 😃
Hum bhatakte rehte hai... update padhke hi shanti milegi 😆

Sahi kaha Doc. We are bhatke hue rahis that are now tangled in this Web of this Dhangheorus Whoman😲😆

Kaisa jadoo dala re😉

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Susegad

Sahi kaha Doc. We are bhatke hue rahis that are now tangled in this Web of this Dhangheorus Whoman😲😆

Kaisa jadoo dala re😉

Jadoo Jadoo... *krish style* 🤣

I agree. Lekin updating status De kar where's this Dhangheorus woman gone 😲

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Lovely night! 😳😳

Thanks for the update... as usual too good. Made me smile and have a very cozy feeling ❤️

Will comment later ... gotta go and get back to work for now.

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

I have never ever been on a Ferris Wheel my entire life, but I felt the whoosh in my stomach that one supposedly feels when the wheel is going downwards, when I imagined that man literally eating her up with his eyes, arm on his knees.😳

I felt the warmth and safety of that arm that curled around Geet

And my heart stuttered and got tangled up in the web of those laced fingers.😳

How do you emote so beautifully woman?

You take something simple like a Ferris Wheel ride and spin it into a magical confection just like the cotton candy that Geet and Rey were holding.

I have only just absorbed the bare essence of the Night that was and I will certainly re-read to experience the Velvety softness that this Night brought.😉

Love you Brat for the amazing gift of talent that you share with us.🤗

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Hain! Last scene :) ! He has accepted it (perhaps even before he started showing) and no longer wants to fight it. He knows what he wants. Poor Geet! It is no longer silent undercurrent that you can ignore and pretend that it doesn't exist. I don't know how she would react!

Overall it was beautiful to see him giving all his attention to Geet. I expect him to tease her more in coming updates. Lol. That scowl and pretending that he is not there was cute. :-D. And offcourse little Rey's energy...

Super! But last scenes takes the cake...

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

As sweet as honey,

As cool as the English winds,

As warm as hot chocolate,

As romantic as Mills and Boon

As passionate as love can be!

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Now me looking forward to more...that bahne de hug teaser!

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leena63

@leena63

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

awesome update
ride on giant wheel..oh their hooting screaming,,yr description is very live bcs i also done that many times

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Haiye!

How the mighty have fallen😆

Gazing at her daring her to look at him, happy with a scowl even👏

There is so much care in each action and so much awareness of her wishes. Loved the crushing of the cigarette too.

I loved her giving Rey all the attention😃 wearing those huge sunglasses and having candy floss like a kid. She has been so far removed from happiness and it is somehow him who is the cause of this day in her life. Totally unwillingly she is being drawn to him, begrudging hime every step along the way.

I like that she is not a pushover.

Love is sweetest when it is hard fought; Each person knowing what they are getting into.

The way he brought her to the place that gives him peace.

Haiye my Andy!!! I adore u for that.

Thanks for updating my darling noodles.. muah!

Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago