MG FF - Tum Mille #2 updt last pt on pg 35 june 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
geet maunbrath toh tod de...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
terrific update! Well written! Geet waiting 4 Maan n dadi 2 wish her! Maan is smiling n Geet confused! Maan takes her 2 the dargah! Geet happy! she on maunvrat. update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
nice uds t
geet waiting fr maan daadi wish her
but both didn't
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 74 - lovely update...both getting god's blessing before starting their day...geet felt it was good omen...she was scared of his anger so she kept maun vrat...
ufff...both are waiting who will start first...kahi pura din na nikal jaye...maan you have to start first...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update...
geet's mounvrat to avoid maan's anger 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
finlly geet's bdy ... wanna see both confession
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#47
lovely part
mounvarth aur geet not possible
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Lovely update
Waiting to see geet's reaction
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Part - 75

Maan keeps ignoring her, but he knows his Mishty very well, she will start her questionare anytime, he couldn't stop smiling seeing her plight...

His unusual smile only irritates her...

She is trying hard to keep quiet but she has a lot of questions in her mind ready to pop out...

Finally Geet opens her mouth...

Geet: Maan sir

Maan: hmmm

He doesn't even turn and look at her...

Geet: ye Adi sir ne koi naye clients ke barein mein bathaya tha

Maan: hmmm

Geet: mein unko jaanthi bhi nahi

Maan: hmmm

Geet: aap unke barein mein kuch bathaoge toh mein bhi achche se unki swagat kar sakthi, haina?

Maan: hmmm

Geet: woh pehle bar hummare saath business kar rahe hai kya?

Maan: hmmm

Geet:Rahul sir ke clients hai kya?

Rahul refers a lot of his clients to KC...

Maan: nahi

Geet: woh kahan se aarahe hai?

Maan: issi world se aarahe hai Geet

Maan gets a little angry for Geet is testing his patience a lot and she will find out the truth from him if she keeps on questioning him like this...Maan can never hide anything from her...

Geet stares him...

Maan: Geet hum alliens ke saath business nahi karthe

Geet makes a face...

Maan couldn't stop admiring her...

Maan: hum toh aliens ko sirf employ karthe hai

Maan laughs at his own joke(?)...ye bhi koi mazak hai kya?

Geet gets angry and stops asking anymore questions...

Maan now can't see her like that...

Maan: Geet, tum kya jaana chahthi ho?

Geet: kuch nahi sir, ye aapke client hai, mujhe jaane ka koi haq nahi

Maan looks into her eyes and says...

Maan: isse jaane ka haq tumse zyada kissi ka bhi nahi hai Geet

Geet is confused...

Maan: samjo ki ye meri zindagi badalnewali client hai

Geet: badalnewala ya badelnewali

Maan smiles looking at her desperation...

Maan: badalnewali

On hearing this Geet's face automatically turns red...

She then stops inquiring further...

Pinky calls...

Geet: haan Pinky bolo'

Geet whispers so that Maan couldn't hear...

Pinky: happy b'day Geet

Pinky shouts full of excitement...

Geet: thanks Pinky

Pinky: toh Geet aaj ka treat pakki haina?

They had plans to go out for lunch...

Geet: Pinky, lagtha hai ki aaj mein college nahi aasakthi

Pinky is disappointed...

Pinky: kya yaar? Aaj toh tum college miss nahi kar sakthi

Geet: kya karoon Pinky? Ab mein toh apni marzi se kuch bhi nahi kar sakthi na?

Geet turns and stares Maan...

Pinky: Geet , Smiley se kaise bachogi tu?

One of the proffesors never smiles and they named her Smiley...

Geet: Smiley ko tu sambalo Pinky, mujhe koi khaas client se milna hai

Geet stresses "Khaas client"

Pinky: tu kya bol rahi ho? aaj toh tumse khaas koi ho hi nahi saktha

Geet: aaisa tu sochthi ho Pinky, kyunki tu meri best friend hai, par log toh mujhe allien samajthe

Pinky: Geet tu kya bolthi ho? mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aathi

Geet: mujhe bhi kuch bhi samaj mein nahi aathi

Pinky: Geet, tu teek toh haina? Tujhe achanak kya ho gaya?

Geet: mein bilkul teek hoon

Geet sounds very angry...

Pinky finds out why Geet is so much disturbed...

Pinky: ohh teri, DD ne wish nahi kiya haina?

Pinky shouts again...

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Geet whispers again...

Pinky: Geet, mein Adi sir se baat karoon?

Geet: sshh Pinky, rehne do abhi

Pinky: Geet, tu itna dhere kyun bolthi ho?

Geet: majbhoori hai yaar, samjha karo

Geet says it loud so that Maan could her her...

Geet turns and stares Maan as if Maan is taking her forcefully...

Pinky: DD ke saath ho?

Geet again whispers...Maan ka naam sunthe hi sab ka awaaz neeche ho jaatha...

Geet: tu toh bahut samajdar hai Pinky

Pinky just cuts the call immediately...

Geet sees the mobile...

Geet: kash mein bhi utna lucky hothi, hare babaji, kam se kam aaj toh mein azaad hothi, bharat ko toh 1947 mein hi azaadi milgayi,najaane mujhe kab azaadi millegi?

Maan smiles...

Geet: lagtha hai aaj koi bahut kush hai

Maan: haan, kyun nahi? aaj mere liye kitna special din hai, I've been waiting for this for so long, you know Geet

Geet: hmmm?

Geet turns her face away from him...

Geet: babaji, aaj inko kya ho gaya? Aaj toh mujhe kush hona chahiye, aur yahan toh sab kuch ulta hi ho raha hai, hare Geet, tu toh bhool hi gayi, tu kisske saath hai? MSK ke saath, toh sab kuch teek se kaise hoga? Haina?

Geet starts complaining...

Geet keeps mumbling till they reach the ashram...

She is surprised to know that they have come to the ashram in a weekday...

Maybe Maan has some urgent work here, she sits back in the car while Maan stops the car at the gate and keeps blowing the horn...

Geet closes her ears with her hands...

Geet: babaji, ye watchman kidar gaya?

Geet tries to get down and open the gate herself...

But Maan keeps blowing the horn in one hand and pulls Geet in with the other...

Geet suddenly hears crackers bursting and a whole bunch of children running towards the car waving and wishing Geet...'

They keep chanting "happy b'day to Geet..."

As the gate opens Maan dirves forward and sops the car...

He comes down and opens the door for Geet...

He lends her a hand and helps her get down...

He then wishes her..." Happy b'day Geet..."

Geet is stunned and is overwhelmed with joy...

She couldn't ask for anything better...this is the best b'day for her...

Tears roll down her eyes...kuchi ki ansoo...

Maan immediately wipe them away with his rumaal...

Geet keeps looking at him in ashtonishment...

Her eyes are filled with gratitude...

Maan just keeps admiring her, he loves to see her happy...

Geet: aap ne mere liye itna kuch kiya hai sir?

Geet wants to thank him for all this...

The best part is Maan has gifted all the children new dress and they all look like the real b'day babies...

Geet's happiness doubles seeing them enjoying her b'day as if it is their own b'day...

They all know how much Geet had done for them and also she is the one who persuaded Maan to adopt the ashram...now KC is their patron and their future is secured...

All the children eagerly participated in the b'day organisations and Maan is only their guide...it's their party and their ideas...

Geet: thank you sir, aaj toh mein bahut kush hoon, aap bahut achche ho

Maan: nahi Geet, mujhe thank karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, actually I must thank you, ye sab toh tumne hi mujhe sikhaya Geet, tujhe yaad hai Geet, tum toh aaise hi mere b'day ko bhi celebrate kiya the

Geet remembers that very well...how can she forget that...that was Maan's last b'day...

Geet runs towards the children and they all surround her like family...

Part76

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Really beautiful update di :)
Geet cribbing that maan didn't wish her
and goes on with her never ending ques...
geet awed by maan's surprise
totally loved it
happy to see maaneet happy :):)
Thank u for the update di :)

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