MG FF - Tum Mille #2 updt last pt on pg 35 june 16 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved the update dear.. awesome.. ⭐️👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Nice part
Geet n her que bank
Maan answers only hmmm
Making her angry
She cribs to pinky
Maan took ger to ashram
She is overwhelmed seeing the surprise gift frommaan
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
hi thanks 4 da wonderful update! Geet cribs bt then happy seeing the surprise!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
read all the parts. excellent story line. loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update dear, loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fun Filled Update

Geet was surprised at the fact that Maan brought her to the Ashram to celebrate her birthday and everyone too looked good in their beautiful dresses

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow lovely superb wow touchy update..te way geet ki never ending ques and her cribbings was lovely cute.. te way my maan enjoying his baby geet ki cute cribbings and gussa was lovely cute..te way geet ki face seeing my maan ki surprise and my maan made her day very special and brought dress for whole kids was lovely emotional touchy..te way geet was overwhelmed with my maan ki surprise and falling for him more and more was lovely..wait geet baby there are more on te way, he he he..i love te update so much yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part - 76

The children take Geet in...

Geet is so happy that she forgot Maan and she went with the children but Maan doesn't complain as that's what he wanted...Geet's happiness and nothing else...

Dadi is also waiting there for Geet...even Adi is there...and KC friends...Romeo, Manisha and party...

They all wish Geet...

Geet gets Dadi's blessings...

So, everything is pre-planned and no one told anything about this...

Geet thinks that maybe it's dadi's plan...

But she wishes that Maan is behind this...anyways she is happy...

She has got the most loving family... as she is far away from her own family she now own the Khurana family as her own...why not? She is a part of Khurana family, she is staying with them at KC, haina?

And maybe she is destined to be a Khurana oneday, and that day is not far away, haina babaji?

A beautiful cake awaits her and it's her favourite triple choclate fresh cream cake...

"OK Didi jaldhi cake kato, I can't wait more"

Someone brings the knife and Geet cuts the cake...

There is a huge roar and they clap and sing...

This is the first b'day that Geet has celebrated with so many friends and also this is her first b'day cake...

All thanks to MSK...this is just the beginning Geet...Maan is here to take you to another world, a world full of surprises...he is only waiting for you to join him...

Geet shares the cake with everyone and Maan keeps watching her without even blinking...

Geet knows that Maan is only looking at her...

She couldn't make eyecontact as she is surrounded by the children, KC staff and also Dadi...

Dadi comes and takes a piece of cake and shares it with Geet...

Dadi calls Maan...: Maan bete aap bhi aayiye, ye party toh aap ki party hai

Geet is overwhelmed with joy, so Maan has done so much for her...

Maan comes forward and takes a piece of cake and looks at Geet...

Geet keeps staring him in astonishment and forgets what's happening...

Maan knows that it's a big surprise for Geet... ...

Maan moves closer and whispers y in her ears "Happy B'day Geet" to bring her back to senses...

Geet is startled and she takes a bite of the cake from Maan's hand...

Geet then goes for another bite from Maan's hand but Maan puts the remaining half into his big mouth, how would he miss it?

Geet pretends to be upset but she is also liking it...

Geet: sir, ye toh cheating hai, woh meri cake hai

Maan: achcha, mein nahi kha saktha?

Geet: aaise nahi

Maan: tumme cake chahiye, haina?

Geet: haan

Maan: toh ye lo

Maan takes another piece and Geet eagerly comes forward for it...

Maan puts it on her face and looks at the children...

They know want to do now...they paint Geet's face with the cream...

Geet has become a kid herself and is enjoying all this like a 10 year old...

Maan keeps admiring her and as usual she never fails to fascinate him ...

Maan captures those precious moments in his mobile and saves it for future drooling...

One of the girls who is interested in photography has been gifted Maan's first handycam that he got as a b'day present from his Bro, thanks to Geet, Maan is now happy to share everything with these kids whether it's his happiness or his cherished belongings...

She keeps running around directing Geet to pose for her...

She asks Geet to wash her face and freshen up for further shoot...

It seems that the party has just begun, the best part is yet to come, music and dance...

Geet goes to the wash room to clean her face...

She splashes the cold water on her face and it's all greasy and the cream is not going without soap...

She turns back to ask for help from one of her little friends when someone comes with the facewash...

It's none other than her friends bebo(that's the nick name given by Geet as she looks like Kareena ) who runs towards her and gives her that...

"ye lo Didi"

She smiles and runs off not waiting for Geet...Geet tries to stop her but she flies away like a butterfly...

Geet then cleans her face and looks into the mirror...

Yes, now she looks really good...

She smiles admiring herself...

She then realizes that some one is gazing her...

And she finds out from the mirror image that it's none other than MSK...

He also nods his head and acknowledges that Geet is looking pretty...

Geet then looks out for the napkin to dry her face and finds that this is not KM and she doesn't have all the comforts here...for a moment she thanks god for giving her all the comforts...

Geet should thank MSK...haina?

Maan: kya hua?

Geet: woh, ye bebo bhi na, facewash lekhe aayi toh towel ko kaise bhool sakthi?

That's not her fault, Maan had sent the facewash, so he should have thought of the towel too, haina?

Maan takes out his rumaal and offers it to Geet...

Maan: ye lo

For a change Maan's rumaal serves to dry her face instead of her tears...

Geet snatches it from him and dries her face in a hurry...

She is feeling nervous hanging out alone with Maan and she tries to get out quickly...

Maan keeps watching her antics and is not ready to let her go out like that...

Geet: chalein?

Geet tries to go when Maan catches hold of her and pulls her back...

Maan: rukhjao Geet

Geet is scared...what's wrong? Why does he stop her?

Geet: woh sab intrezaar kar rahe honge

Maan: karne do

Geet: mujhe jaana hai

Maan: nahi jaa sakthi

Geet: mujhe jaane dijiye

Geet almost panics...

Maan: tum aaise kaise jaa sakthi

Maan pulls her even closer and Geet's heart keeps pumping faster and faster...

Maan ignores her feelings, he just keeps admiring her more and more, staring her and continuing his job without caring about anything,as Geet struggles to get off his hold Maan pins her against the wall and arrests her in his arms...

Geet holds her breadth tight as she didn't want Maan to know about her struggles to check her inner desires and also about the volcanic eruptions that his closeness and his gentle touches trigger within her tender blossoms...

As she stands still trying to hide her anxiety Maan carefully pulls his rumaal from her clutches and starts drying her face himself...and evrytime his warm fingers contact her cold face a gush of warm blood rushes up making her blush and wanting more from those long fingers...

Maan caresses her cheeks pretending to dry them and makes it all the more difficult for Geet...

Ok, That's it...Geet couldn't take it anymore and she pushes him off and vanishes bringing him back from the trance...

Maan is not going to let her escape, and he follows her like her shadow...

Geet tries to keep herself surrounded by the children, to avoid Maan...

The chidren also love her company and so it's not that hard to woo them, she can easily mersmerize them with her wits and charm...

Maan is frustrated and he has to come up with a counter attack...

But his skills to socialize are limited and so he has to think of something else...

He asks Adi to start serving lunch and call the girls out so that he can spend some private time with his Mishti...

Adi announces that lunch has begun and the first person to rush to the dinning is Geet, thanks to Pinky for that...

Maan curses himself for the wrong move as he already knew well how much Geet loves her food...moreover Geet is now seeking all the opportunities to escape from Maan...

What's better than leaving the place and hiding among the guests...

Geet deliberately keeps serving others...

She first serves Dadi and then Sagarji, and then her KC friends...

Maan loses his patience and he himself forces her to sit and have her lunch...

He himself serves her and makes sure she doesn't keep passing the time ...

He then sits infront of her and watches her enjoy her food...

He orders Adi to get all that Geet likes...her golgappas, vada pavs, aloo tikkis and all that spicy chaats...

Geet feels bad that she couldn't have them all at one time, how she wishes she could celebrate her b'day for a whole month with all her favorite dishes lining up day after other, this MSK could have planned better, haina? How will she savour all at one time?

What does she know about MSK? He is here to treat her with all the best things in the whole world for the rest of her lifetime, and all that he needs is her love and acceptance...

Part77

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous and Fun Filled Update

Geet totally enjoyed her birthday and was amazed that Maan did
so much for her .

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