MG FF - Tum Mille #2 updt last pt on pg 35 june 16 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
maan is making spcl arrangements for geeets bday
but want to confirm she doesnt have program with others
her self talks..maan teases her
n asks for appoinment
geet refuses
but maan has his own way by ordering her
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
part 72 - lovely update...finally maan made her to come at her special day with him...dadi & maan succeed to hide this from her...waiting for her surprise from maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Beautiful and Anxious Update

Geet is sad that Maan has to meet his client on the day of her birthday
but Maan has made plans to make her day special and finally he wants to confess his love for her

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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
nice part dear .. geet become sad and upset .. for her no one seems to remember her b'day .. lets see how would she take surprise...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
congrats for new thread..
nice update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
waiting for what maan planned for geet :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Just love every bit of it... Hope Maan confess his feelings soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Part - 73

Geet is still lost in her thoughts...

Maan couldn't see her sad...

He wants to see her smiling as always...

She rarely gets upset and when she is sad Maan couldn't bear that...

He might have hurt her a lot but even then she always keeps fighting and never gives up...

But now Maan can't do anything for it's a big loss for her and she doesn't even know how her mother looks...

Maan looks at Dadi and Dadi aksks him to give her a minute or two to compose herself...

Maan remains quiet for sometime but he has to do something...

Maan: Geet, tumme yaad haina? Kal kya hai?

Maan tries to distract her attention...

Geet gets angry...

Geet: aap fikar mat karo, kuch bhi ho aapka kaam ho jayega

Maan: that's good, phir bhi tujhe har waqt yaad dilana padtha, haina Dadima?

Dadima: humme beech mein lane ki zaroorat nahi hai, hum toh chalthe hai, gud night beta, gud night Maan

Maan: gud night dadima

How nice? Dadima is too good...haina?

Maan gets up from his seat and takes the seat next to Geet...

Maan: Geet, kya hua?

Geet: kuch nahi

Maan: tumne hi mujhe sikaya ki past ko bhool jaana chahiye aur present ko jeena chaiye, ab dekho MSK kitna badal gaya

Maan lifts her chin and makes her face him...

Geet looks into his caring and worried eyes...

She has seen him worried a lot of times, but this time he is worried about Geet...

Geet feels much better knowing that here is someone to share her grief...

But how come Maan knows that she is worried, hare Geet, Maan knows everything about you just by reading your eyes...haina?

Maan: ab kal ki baat ko bhhol jao aura age ki socho, chalo chalo. Jaldhi sojao, kal tumme jaldhi tayaar ho jaana hai

Maan just scoops her and takes her to her room...

Geet just Keeps staring him...she forgets about all her worries and feels like flying high in the sky...

He lays her on the bed and covers her...

Maan: ab apne aakhen band karo Geet

Geet just obeys like a kid...

Maan sits beside her ...

Maan: sojao Geet, ab tumme gabrane ki zaroorat nahi hai Geet, ab tumme koi bhi pareshaani ko akhele samna karna nahi padega, kyunki ko hai tummare saath hamesha, ab tum akhele nahi ho Geet

Geet looks into his eyes...

Maan: haan Geet, ab hum akhele nahi hai

Geet takes her time to resister what Maan just said...

But Maan leaves before she could fully understand and react to his word ...

Geet is a little disappointed...

She tries to close her eyes and sleep but she couldn't...

After a couple of minutes Maan comes back with a parcel...

Geet is so happy as if she has been waiting for him only...

Geet tries to get up but Maan signals her not to get up...

Maan himself comes near her and keeps it on the table...

Geet looks at him puzzled...

Maan: isse tum kal pehenke aana

Geet: ye kya hai?

Maan: ye kal ki party ke liye tummare dress hai

Geet jumps off the bed and reaches the parcel in a sec...

She grabs it and opens to find a beautiful pink lehenga...

Geet: ye kya hai?

Maan pretends that he is not aware of anything...

Maan: mujhe kaise patha?

Geet: ye aap ne hi laya haina?

Maan: par mein nahi jaantha ki isske andar kya hai, event manager ne sab ko dresses bheja tha aur ye tummara hai

Geet: ye party hai ya kissi ki shadhi

Maan: haan, iss event manager ne toh hummare party ko mazak banakke rakha hai

Geet: ye kaise mazak hai?

Maan: wahi toh, mein abhi usse baat kartha hoon, achcha hua aaj hi mujhe patha chala, warna cient ke samne mujhe sharminda hona padtha

Maan pretends to call...

Maan: Mr.Mahesh, ye kaise mazak hai? ye official party hai koi bachchon ka fancy dress party nahi, samjhe aap

Maan silently listens for a while ...

Maan: teek hai, it's OK, I understand

Geet wonders how on earth that Mahesh convinced Maan...

It's not easy to convince Maan to change his mind...

Geet: kya hua?

Maan: woh, hummare client chahthe hai ki party ka theme traditional Indian household celebrations ki tarah ho, issiliye

Geet: par aap kaise mangaye? Aap ko toh ye sab se bahut nafrat haina?

Maan: haan, lekhin business mein clients are like god, haina?

Geet: kya? ye aap bol rahe hai? MSK toh kud ko bagwan samajthe, haina babaji?

Maan: ye bhi toh meinne tumse hi seekha hai Geet

Geet: aapka matlab?

Maan: I mean, meinne tumse bahut kuch seekha hai Geet

Geet: aap joot bolthe ho, aap ko toh seekhne se zyada sabko sikana pasand haina? Geet, ye aaise nahi karthe, isse aaise karo, haina?

Maan: tum jaanthi hai ki MSK kabhi joot nahi boltha

Geet: achcha, Aap mujhse aur kya kya seekhe ho?

Maan: bathaoon?

Maan gets closer and closer...

Geet steps back and falls on the bed...

Maan leans forward and locks her in his long arms...

Geet becomes nervous...

Maan: ye mein tumme badh mein bathatha hoon, abhi sahi waqt nahi hai

Geet is once again disappointed...ye sahi waqt kab aayega?

Maan keeps staring her and admiring her as much as he wants...

Geet too keeps looking into his eyes for any clues...

As always they are full of love and passion...but still Maan keeps denying the fact that Maneet are ready to take forward their relationship...

Maan keeps Geet guessing and she could not conclude anything as Maan is very unpredictable and lives life in his own way...

Maan slowly and steadily inches forward and reaches her shoulders...

He stops when he is almost touching her and she could feel his warm breadth...

Her heartbeat rises and she freezes...

Geet anticipates something more...

Maan whispers...: gud night Geet, abhi so joa, kal jaldhi utna haina?

Maan leaves...

Geet sighs and goes to bed...

Geet sleeps peacefully that night...

Part74

New MG FF - Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi - Updated

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Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
part 72 n 73
nice updates...
loved it..

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